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Posted: 20 years ago
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Kripa is sitting in her room just thinking about Prithvi when the phone rings...

K: Hello...
Mishty: Hi kripa.. whats up..
K: Hi mishty... nothing much...

Mishty- Kripa just met Mishty a few days ago when she was looking for a job... Mishty's aunt ownes a catering biss and now Kripa works there Friday, Saturday's and Sundays...

M: Ok kripa hum sab na plan banaya hai ki hum sab aaj movie dekna jaaga... and u are comming...

K: Nahie mishty.. please aaj nahie...

M: I dont care.. tum aa rahi ho aur I will come pick u up!

K: Mishty lakin...

M: Ok bye Kripa...

K: Bye..

So kripa gets ready to go to the movies.. She wears a black shirt with jeans her hair up... and really small earings... she is just donw when the door bell rings..

Kripa runs down cuz she knows its mishty..
She opens the door

K: Hey mist.........

But standing infront of her is a really tall guy... he has brown eyes.. short hair... he is too wearing a black shirt and jeans.. a really handsome boy...

K: Hi... i though it was my friend mishty...

Boy: Hi actually.. mishty was running late so she send me to pick u up...

K: Oh.. Hi, i am Kripa... she puts her hand foward...

Boy: Hi kripa... i am Angad... and they shake hands...

Kripa is compleatly blown away after seeing Angad.. she has seen more handsome guys but there was something different about Angad...

A: Kripa.. chala..

K: Oh ya sure...

They both walk to the car... Angad opens the door for kripa and she sits... they drive in compleat scilenc for the first few minutes until finally angad break's the scilence...

A: So kripa are u in collage...

K: Yes... i am majoring English and Science...

A: Wow main bhi English aur Science main major kar raha hoo... What collage do u go to..

K: Mumbai University...

A: Wow kya baat hai main bhi... hum ek hi subjects main majoy kar raha hai.. ek hi collage main aur aaj tak kabhi nahie milia....

K: Ya very strange...

A: So what profession do you want to go into...

K: I love writing books.. isliya main Author banna chati hoo...

A: Oh.. mujhe likna ka shauk hai lakin i want ti become a Neuroligist... (spelling)

K: oh ok...

Angad notices that Kripa is feeling a little uncomfatable..

A: Kripa i hope main tumha bore nahie kar raha...

K: Oh nahie angad u are fine... i am actually a little tensed about a few things...

A: Would u like to share...

K: No anagd its ok... maybe sometime else...

A: Ok... so Kripa mujhe appna bara main aur kuch batao...

K: Jaisa ki...

A: Jaisa ki kuch bhi tumahara family main kaun hai... tumahari hobbies kya hai...

K: Well mera ghar main sirf mari mummy hai... who loves me alot.. and i have a older sister who is married and lives in London... aur hobbies.. I love to read.. music.. aur mujhe sports bauth pasand hai..

A: Watching sports or playing..

K: Mujhe sports kalna main bauth mazza aata hai.. i dont like watching people play...

A: Ok..

K: Aur tum...

A: Well... meri family main koi bhi nahie hai... my parents died 5 years ago...

K: oh i am sorry...

A: Its ok.. but i have a younger brother....

K: Ok aur tumahari hobbies...

A: Well meri hobbies tumsa kuch aalag nahie hai... i love reading.. music... movies... paiting.. and poetry....

K: So u dont like sports...

A: Main aaisa nahie kaha... i love sports... aur mujhe bhi kelna main zayda maaza aata hai...

K: Kitni aajib baath hai hum dono main kitni baata milthi hai...

A: Ya thats ture..

K: Angad can i ask u a personaly question...

A: Are we friends...

K: Um... i guess...

A: Tho aagar hum friends hai to hum ek doosra sa koi baat nahie chupaya gaa.. done...

K: Done...

A: So aapka question kya hai...

K: aapka nahie, tumahara.... aur mera question hai... do u have a girlfriend...

Angad stars to laugh...

K: Kya hua...

A: Nothing.. aur meri GF nahie hai... ab tum batao tumahara BF hai...

Kripa's smiles fades away... and she sits up stright...

K: Hai bhi nahie bhi...

A: Matlab... right then they reach the Movie Theater...

K: Loo hum pauch gya..

Kripa is about to get out ok the car when angad grabs her hand..

A: Tumna mara zawal ka javab nahie diya...

K: Angad i promic after the movie...

A: Promis....

K: Ya...

A: Ok...

K: Lakin mera haat tho choro...

A: Oh sorry...

They both laught and meet Mishty....

ok guys i will cont the next part later!
Hope u liked it..

Neha



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Posted: 20 years ago
#22
GR8.. and awesome as always.. Keep it up.. 😊 👏
stonex thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#23

thanks that was very very good

awesome piece

neha9 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24
thanks everyone! i will put up the next part really soon!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a change in story..... it was just mind blowing!!!!!!!😃 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continueeeeeeeeeeeee
neha9 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
thanks eeshika... and everyone else
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Posted: 20 years ago
#27

where is the update

can u plz update it possible😊

neha9 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
the last part i wrote was when angad n kripa are in the car...
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Posted: 20 years ago
#29
that was good.👏..continue soon plz
neha9 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#30
Kripa meets Mishty and they hug there is one other person with them Kartic...


Kartick: he is angad's younger brother... ( 😕he dosent look younger) he handles their parents biss. he is a major in MBA.. and he is engaged to Mishty...

M: Kripa this is Kartick.. my faincee (spelling)

K: Hi Kartick...

M: Aur Angad sa tum mil he chuki hoo... i hope issna tumha zayda bore nahie kiya...

K: Nahie.. infact humma bauth si cheeza milthi hai...

M: Really...

A: ab aangar chala nahie tho movie nicha jayigi..

they all laugh and head inside.. They watch Mr. & Mrs. Smith becasue its house full for all the hindi movies...

Mishty and Kartik leave cuz they dont want to see it while Angad and Kripa stay...

A: Kripa popcorn...

K: Nahie angad tum ek hi bucket lana...

A: Ok...

while they are watching the movie kripa gets hungry...

K: Angad..

A: Hmmm

K: Can i share the popcorn...

A: Ya...

As kripa is watching the movie Angad just cant take her eyes off her...

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The movie is over...

A: So kripa ab kya karnaa hai..

K: pata nahie tum batao...

A & K: Ek aur movie...

K: Kaun si...

A: cholo dektha hai...

Angad and Kripa walk towards marquee... all movies are house full except Bunty aur Babli....

so they buy the tickets... and watch the movie....
*****************************************************

After the movie is over they are heading back home when Angad's car stops about 30 minutes from kripa's house...

A: Ab iisa kya hua..

he gets out of the car and see the tire flat...

A: Shit

K: Tumahara paas exta tire nahie hai...

A: Nahie... this is the extra tire..

K: Koi baat nahie... mara ghar taak hum walk karla ga aur phir main tumhe ghar drop lar do gi...

A: Ok...

so they start walking...

A: Kuch baat karo nahie tho mari boredum sa death ho jaa gi...

K: Ok lets see... hum abhi abhi dost bana hai... lets play truth...

A: Truth... i have never played it...

K: Ok its very simple... i ask u a question and u have to answere it truthfully....

A: how do u know if its the truth...

K: Thats the beauty of the game... u have to say the Truth if u are a ture fan and u trust ur friend...

A: And how do u win...

K: Mujhe pata tha tum yhe zaroor pucho gaa... well aagar tum mujhe such pucho aur main uska jawaab na dena chao i pass.. phir main tumse kuch poocho gi aur aagar tum jawab de do u win...

A: Ok... lets start ladies first...

K: Ok.. um... Tumahari dream girl kaisi hooni chaiya...

A: Bilkul tumahari thara...

K: What... tum maazak kar raha hoo rite...

A: Wronge... u are too perfect...

K: Angad tum pagal hoo.. no one is perfect...

A: Ok lakin phir bhi... u are the girl every guy dreams of...

K: Well thanks...

A: Ur welcome... ok mari baari... maina tumse kuch pusha tha before the movie... mujhe uska answere chaiya...

K: ok well... mera BF hai aur nahie bhi...

A: Aur iska matlab...

K: We are on a break...

A: Matlab...

K: Usko lagtha hai ki vo hamara rishty ka liya tyaar nahie hai...

A: Aur usko aaisa kab laga...

K: Jab maina usko kaha I love u...

A: Ok.. sorry but ur BF seems really wierd...

K: U know i think he is... 😆

K: Um... Whats ur idea of a perfect dream date?

Angad is about to speak when they arrive at Kripa's house...

A: Look we are hear...

K: Ya.. cholo aangar main tumhe kuch der main ghar chordo gi...

Ok see u guys later!

Preview: Angad has dinner with Kripa

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