MauNal Fanfic: Part 10, Page 18- Updated 5/5 - Page 5

shukriya behen😃😳

thank you , thank you so much...just trying to give a little something to Shaditi lovers..MauNal fans

@bold- sach mein behen mujhe khud nahin pta maine kya likha hai😆😆 im lazy and i hate re-reading my own work esp fiction work...i always find things to delete and re-write...😆 mirror and room had to have a starring role in this FF😆 more to come including your much desired scenario😳

I believe we all can visualize them..

itne khubsurat moments diye hai--inn dono ne-show mein..ki not very difficult to picturize them

What was all of that? While the kids sat with Kunal, I excused myself and went to change. The plan was to go out for dinner. I changed and looked at myself in the mirror. I could see him behind me, tickling the girls and attempting to do their hair. Between the two happy dolls and him, I couldn't concentrate on myself. I'd worn a blue dress and was combing my hair. I put on a bracelet and my earrings.

"Kunal, go get ready. I turned around and said. He looked at himself and then at me. "this is fine. He said.

"We are going for dinner, remember? Aren't you uncomfortable in that? I asked. He laughed.

"I am but, in comfortable sitting here with these two. He said. The girls were in pajamas.

"I have to get them changed. Stop joking around and get ready. He nodded and quietly got up and did what I told him to do. I got the girls ready. Mishti was already growing so attached to Kunal.

"What color will Papa wear? she asked.

"I don't know. It depends on him. She said.

"I want him to match with you. She said. I smiled.

Pari was the opposite. She wanted to be by my side constantly. She silently watched me while I adjusted her dress and curled her hair.

"You look pretty Mumma...she said. One more to call me Mumma.

I kissed her on the cheek. You always look prettiest though... I said.

I told them to watch TV while they wait for us. Kunal was finally ready in a blue suit. We were matching. We stopped and looked at each other.

"Wow. He said. He smiled. The feelings I'd had right before the kids walked in still lingered.

"You too... I said. He looked down and smiles. This was the change in him. The old Kunal would've been enjoying the compliment . This one didn't know how to take it. I still liked him though.

"Ok, let's go. He said. Right as we stepped out the room, he took my hand in his.

"This is ok, right? he asked. I nodded. He looked relieved.

The whole family was going for dinner and my parents would be there. I was nervous about this. My mother seemed happy that kunal and I reconciled but she disliked Pari. I prayed she wouldn't say anything hurtful to her. I wouldn't be able to take it, but Kunal would be completely shattered. Dinner went smoothly at first. Once the kids were finished eating, I told promila to take them to the swings nearby. That's when things went downhill.

"Kunal and Mauli, you should consider sending Pari to a boarding school. My mother said. "you've just gotten remarried. You need time together to work on hour relationship after what you went through. It's enough for you to raise your daughter together, but Pari should be sent to a boarding school. Itll be good for her.

Kunal seemed confused. "Maa, Pari and Mishti are equal. Both will attend the same school and receive the same attention. I said. I knew things wouldn't end here. Once dinner was over, Mumma took Dida to the car and Kunal and I stayed back to say goodbye to my parents.

"Kunal, please consider my request. NANDINI CAME between you both but I don't want her daughter to come between you now, let alone to ruin my granddaughters life. I couldn't believe my mother had the courage to say this to Kunals face. He must've flinched with pain. I saw it in his eyes. He didn't reply her.

"Maa, stop it. Please, stop. Pari is my daughter now. I said. Kunal looked ashamed, uncomfortable, hurt, and embarrassed.

"Are you serious, Mauli? Will you let that woman's daughter ruin your marriage too? She shouldn't be anywhere near you and Mishti. Kunal, I can accept you as my son in law as long as you keep Nandinis daughter away. Maa said.

"Maa! I shouted.

"No, Mauli, no... kunal said. He held my hand.

"Maa, how could you say that to a father about his child? I am so hurt. You've hurt Kunal. You've hurt a father. What is wrong with you, Maa? She's a 4 years old little girl whom Kunal has raised better than anyone could've! I squeezed Kunals hand reassuringly but his grip loosened. I looked at his face. His lower lip quivered. A tear dropped from the corner of his right eye but he quickly wiped it away.

"Mauli, I'll go start the car. He said. "Just a minute, kunal,. Maa stopped him.

"A snake's child will always be a snake. She said. Kunal didn't utter a single word in reply.

I didn't didn't either. "goodnight, mother" I said. Kunal rushed off. I followed behind.

"Kunal, stop. Stop! I yelled. He stopped.

"My mother is wrong and I'll never agree with her. I'm so sorry. I love, Pari. I said. My heart was aching. His pained expression, his misery were apparent. "it's ok, mauli. He said. I knew it wasn't.

The drive back home was terrible. Kunal looked lost and it concerned me. The kids were asleep in the backseat with their grandmother. Mumma and I put them to bed. I went to our room. Kunal had changed and was laying in bed, staring at the roof. I changed too. Tonight wasn't supposed to go like this. I sat by his side and touched his forehead. He gave a half smile.

"Your mother is right,Mauli. No woman would accept the child of the people who ruined her life. I don't understand how you're doing it. He said.

"My mother is wrong. I said. He got out of bed.

"Where are you going? I asked.don't you dare go anywhere leaving me again. I shouted. He turned around. "I promise to be back in half an hour. I need fresh air. He said. He was deeply distraught.

I let him go. At some point I fell asleep. When I woke up, Kunal wasn't there. It was over an hour since he'd gone out. The doorbell rung and I rushed to open the door before everyone's sleep was disturbed. It was Kunal, barely able to stand.

He stumbled in and I held him by the shoulders. I could tell he was drunk.

"Kunal, where did you go? I asked.

"I was drinking...way , way , way too much... he said.

"Oh, I can see that. I don't know how he made it home.

"Did you drive? I asked.

"Nope. I walked...and ran...because my wife made me promise I'd come home. He said with a smile and hugged me. I took him back to the room.

"Sit,Kunal..

"No...I cant sit. I cant stand. I cant do anything. It doesn't help.

"Help what? I asked.

"The pain... he said and took my hand and placed it on his heart. "right here...there's the pain...and the ...shame... he said. He stopped and looked like he was recalling something.

"God, I ruined everything and I cant even take half the pain I gave you...but Pari is so innocent... he said. He broke into sobs. I hugged him. I was heartbroken . A nice family dinner turned into a nightmare.

"I'm so sorry. I ruined everyone's lives... he mumbled.

"I forgive you. It's ok...everything is going to be fine. I said. He needed to rest. I wiped his face.

"Mauli, I love you... he said. "Make the pain go away...love me like I never broke you... he said. He cried more. I couldn't soothe his pain. He was sobbing with his head in my lap. We were on the floor.

"Get up... I told him. I helped him stand but his movements were slow. I got him into bed but he made me sit and cried some more in my lap. I kissed his forehead. "we are a family now... I said.

"And you love me? he asked. I nodded. He got up and wrapped his arms around me. "I need you... he said. I could feel his lips near my neck. He held my face and kissed me on the lips. I was hesitant, not because I didn't want this but because he wasn't completely aware of what he was doing.

I kissed him back. His grip around my body tightened. "Don't stop...don't ever stop... he whispered. I looked at his eyes which were half closed. "You need to sleep, jaana... I said.

"I need you... he said. I contemplated what to do. I knew he wouldn't be happy in the morning about getting drunk and maybe wouldn't want this to happen between us while he's in this condition. I kissed his forehead.

"Let's sleep... I told him. He nodded. I made him lie down in a comfortable position. He held my hand and drifted off to sleep. I slept as well. This was our first night together after 6 years.

The morning was nearly surreal. I woke up first and watched him as he lay fast asleep. Many thoughts went through my mind. The first one was whether I'd done the right thing, not by marrying him again, but by falling even deeper in love with him again than I could possibly ever imagine. Kunal was different now. Guilt was a burden he carried constantly. It could control him. I had to bring him out of that space or it could make him hold back. We had to communicate clearly and more often. I was going to change my work schedule to suit his as best as I could. We needed time together and I understood that he alone couldn't manage it. Now there were two children to raise too. It was the weekend so the kids were still sleeping. I had taken a week off and so had Kunal. I was planning on spending half the time with the kids and half with him.

I went and made breakfast. The whole family ate together. Kunal still wasn't up. Mumma asked me if everything was alright. I explained it to her. She wasn't happy.

"Don't be angry at him. He was badly hurt.

"This was no way to deal with the hurt. I expected better from Kunal.

"You weren't weren't there. Maa broke his heart. I said. She seemed a bit more sympathetic when I explained to her exactly what my mother had said about Pari.

The kids asked about Kunal. "Your buddy and Papa had an upset stomach last night after dinner. I gave him medicine so he's still sleeping.

I took breakfast for him. When I knocked on the door he opened it. He smiled but seemed low.

"I was just about to come out. I overslept. I'm really sorry... he said.

I entered the room. "Eat in here. I said. He sat down. He looked guilty again. "What did I do last night? I don't remember much.

"You got drunk but then you came home too. You were upset about the way dinner went. I said. He didn't seem satisfied by my answer.

"I wasn't rude to you, was I? he asked.

"No, you weren't. I knew what he wanted to know. He was probably wondering if anything happened between us. I don't think he wanted it to while he was drunk.

"You slept. I said. He looked relieved.

"I ruined our wedding night. He said.

"Yesterday was a very memorable day, Kunal. In a good way. My mother is the one who ruined it. It hurts to admit this, but it's the truth. I just want to say that you need to be open and communicative with me and I promise to do the same. I've taken a week off too, like you did. Let's try to spend it with the kids, and... I paused. He eyed me curiously.

"Us? he asked.

I nodded. He gave a happy smile.

"Are you happy? he asked me.

"Are you? I asked.

"Not fair. I asked you first. He teased. I moved closer to him. He caressed my cheek. "I want to be happy. He said. His voice sounded heavy. I looked into his eyes. Those big, deep eyes that I loved again and again, for years. Those were the eyes that haunted me, tortured me, broke me, and were now luring me in. They belonged to a humble person now. He was wiser, mature, and more grounded.

"I'm giving you permission to be happy again. I said. He gave this look to me like he was I'm awe of me. "Thank you, Mauli... he said.

Something in his eyes changed within a flash. His hand moved from my cheek down slowly towards my waist. He pulled me closer until I was against his chest. Proximity did make me nervous. There was a war between resisting the power he had over me and acknowledging that I didn't need to fight myself anymore. It was ok. Life was short. Six years had passed. He'd been through a tough time and remorse was written on his face.

Our noses touched. I smiled. He was so cautious and so serious. I reached for his neck and ticked him. He jumped.

"MAULI, stop that. He said. I continued. He laughed.

"Seriously, you're tickling me? he asked. "Do you think I'll let you get away with that? He asked. His mood was lightening up. His eyes light up. This was my old Kunal. I tickled him again and he grabbed my wrists.

"Owww! I groaned. He loosened his grip. I didn't want him too. I lay down with my head on the pillow. He looked a bit surprised , nervous, hesitant and confused at first. My throat felt dry. "It's ok... I said. "Sure? He asked. I nodded. I had other thoughts too, negative ones. I tried to push them away. My own breathing grew more rapid. His lips were on mines immediately. I began unbuttoning his shirt. He paused in between. Both of us were breathless. It was a struggle to continue breathing while a fire raged inside me.

"I love you...I love you... he said repeatedly. His fingers traced my arms and neck. I didn't want his lips to leave mines. That negative voice inside me died. I buried my face into his neck. It was intoxicating. I wasn't thinking straight anymore. I could hear his breathing and mines. I wondered it he felt as much love and desire and I did right now. It felt the way it used to, exactly 6 or 7 years ago.

While I bit a little too hard into his skin, someone began knocking on the door. I didn't hear it at first and he definitely didn't hear it.

"Kunal...someone's at the door. I said.

"Again... He said. I could hear the disappointment. I smiled.

I tried to sit up. I had to fix my hair.

"It's probably Mumma and Dida. I said. He nodded. He didn't seem pleased. I smiled to myself. "Go put your shirt on. I said. He rushed off to do just that but he was smiling as he walked away.

oh my drunk kunal was waiting for this moment for longest time,we did not get in the show but you have just pen down more than what i thought abt drunk kunal...this was the perfect drunk kunal moment that i yearn for long...i love the part when kunal was going rounds regards to the drunk night n mauli knows what he is hinting at,that was a beautiful depth of meaning into that scene...the understanding mauli does for kunal n the respect kunal has for mauli...beautifully written.⭐️

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I want shaditi to do this scene LIVE for us...aag lagadenge yaar☺️

gosh gajra destroyed it for us...🤬

Aww drunk Kunal. Mauli's mom had to do that drama or she would not be able to digest her food. 😆

You were right though.This update was equal parts hot and emotional. Everyone is disturbing their SR. Kunal will lock them in a room if it happens a third time. 😆