MauNal Fanfic: Part 10, Page 18- Updated 5/5

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yanks28

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Sabyata
Mah/Wishu i---U girls r right..every one was smiling..
even I was smiling ..while reading it...🤗

then mission accomplished😳🤗😃

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yanks28

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: rmahi25

While GAJRA NO MORE MY DARLING reading this BE - *OH GOD YE LADKI(YANKS) KYA KAR RAHI HAI*😆😆 dhande band krwaege mere pet par last maregiii😆😆

i reallly wonder what CVs/actors reactions would be if they read this FF😛😉

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yanks28

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: rmahi25

Btaooo rishwat de rahi Hai ye ladkii 😆😆...done it jaana to read your creations apun rishwat degaaa beshak degaa😳😳😳

lao lao aur laao😛😉...let it rain rishwat 😆😆

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Amber_Eyes

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Posted: 6 years ago

#34

And this is how it should have gone. I can totally imagine this happening !!

Lovely update. Can't wait for the next one. 😳

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Naturegirl99

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Ayeee finally part 2! I blushed 😳

Beautifully written as usual. My manual 😳 This is almost as good if not better than watching it onscreen coz I know we wouldn't have gotten such great depth. Brilliant 👏

PS update the title na ki part 2 is updated

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Mages

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Posted: 6 years ago

#36

gosh yanks...what you have written!...this is what should have been in the show...every sentence you wrote i could visualize it in my mind with shaditi being maunal...you literally burn the fire in their famous room and their epic mirror scene,its love symbol of maunal...beautifully written its goosebumps for me while reading... ❤️

shame on gajra🤢

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Sabyata

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Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Update Page# is added

Thanks

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yanks28

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Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Sabyata
Wishu--while reading part 2--i have pictures of Mauli & Kunal in front of my eyes..I was visualizing every thing

it is mesmerizing

You pen downed every thing beautifully
Loved it❤️❤️

thank u..woh kya hai na...i could picture them too...so it all translated into my words...😳

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yanks28

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Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: rmahi25
*OH GOD YANKS KYA KAR RAHI HO* 😆😆 It was real isn't it? Because I literally felt these scenes...Damnnn I got goosebumps😳😳...Totally loved it! You wrote it so beautifully❤️, all of us dreaded for these scenes but GAJRA NOT MY DARLING ANYMORE ruined it!!!😕😕 The part where Mishti & Pari ordered their Papa to give a peck to their mumma & lift her in his arms...🤣 I was giggling ekdum Maunal ke bacche Hai ye donoo...You were right everyone was smiling at that time😆😆even I was !!

Kunal's emotion before the wedding I l can feel myou my boy😃 That hug definitely completed him afterall he held her zindagi after a long long time...😳😳
KUDOS👏 to you for penning down these beautiful scenes Inspite of getting betrayed in a funny and sasta way By you know who😆...🥳👏Love you!!❤️

At last all i can say this ff is absolutely NIRVANA... waiting for the next part😆😆

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highly entertaining review...you get extra points for making me LMaO😆😆...thanks for being sweet and pointing out the things you liked in it...means a lot😳⭐️

@NIrvana- ROFL😆

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yanks28

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Posted: 6 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: rmahi25

While GAJRA NO MORE MY DARLING reading this BE - *OH GOD YE LADKI(YANKS) KYA KAR RAHI HAI*😆😆 dhande band krwaege mere pet par last maregiii😆😆

throw rotten eggs on Gajra 😡😆