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Posted: 6 years ago
Just finished reading part 112...i am shook! What now? Omg i am dying from the suspense. As always your writing is spectacular and but cant say the same for the plot lol...why cant they just be happy for once? Please please dont do anything with their child and hopefully there will be a way out where the baby and the mother come out safe from this!!! Please send part me 113!!
Thabk you!
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Posted: 6 years ago
okay so here i m too story was awesome till now
loved armaan as a husband he is so caring n adorbs
i loved it loved how he is alwys by her side through all sapna's function
agar girls ridhz ko tease karte so acha tease karte h bhai its worth it
really enjoyed the functions
but i m telling you no i actually told u that yr ridhz ko baar baar ye jo stomach pain ho rhe h its something n see
its scary poor ridhz n armaan feel bad for them
the whole previous parts r like a roller coaster ride happy scaring , sad , joyous, hearbreaking everything it

i really felt all the emotions of them
i hope all goes well n ridhz will take it smoothly
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice update

Poor Armaan Ridhima
They both are facing hard time
Hope ow everything goes fine
All are worried about them
Also both are trying to be strong for each other
Thanks for PM
Update soon


Thanks Dear...
Glad u love and enjoy the part...
Yeah both are facing a hard time, not only them families too...
Let;s see what will happen in coming parts...
keep reading and loving...
take care :D

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: maulik1992

114...It's full of emotional part... AR are numb aur ridhima to sock me he... Kuch react bhhi nahi kiya after hearing the words from arman mouth... Arman usse galle lagata he but wo fir bhhi numb he...ridhima ke liye ass pass ka sab gum hi he...

Finnaly wo himmat karake kehati he k kuch nahi hoga baby ko.. Aur wahi bat repeat kare jaa rahi he... Arman ko bhhi pata he k wo tut chuki he usake jese hi... Ridhima arman ki baho me hi so jati he...
Love too see that jese ananya ne ridhima ko sambhala Aur himmat di... Love their mother and daughter moments...
Same goes to arman.. Billy ne usako himmat dene ki koshish ki Aur arman ki bato se wo usape fakr karata he... Jese wo risto ko samajata he... Love their talk ...
Anjul jab ridhima k pass jata he tab ridhima usse nahi leti to wo rota he fir anjali anjul ko leke waha se jati he... Fir ridhima ko realise hota he Aur wo padma ko gale lag ke rone lagati he... Arman bhhi waha se chala jata he... Baki sab bhhi jate he padma k siway... Padma samajati he k ek ma pe abhhi kya gujarati hogi... But wo ridhima ko himmat deti he Aur bhagwan pe believe kar ne ko kehati he... Fir ridhima ko arman ki yad ati he k wo bhhi same condition me hoga...
Idhar arman bhhi tut jata he.. Atul, muskan and sapna use sambhala te he...
Finally arman Aur ridhima ek dusare ko gale lagate he Aur rote he Aur ek dusare k baho me comfort dundate he...
Thanks for this... Please sab thik karado... And now update soon...



Thanks Maulik...
Glad u love and enjoy the part...
Yup, full of emotional part and it would continue till the problem didn't get solved...
Ridz always react the other way Armaan expected...
tabhi toh hurt hokar bhi khud koh sambhala aur Armaan koh bhi sambhalne ki koshish ki...
Armaan koh yakeen dilane ki, kuch nehi ho sakti undono ke bacche koh..
Ananya always treat her like own daughter, not only her but Billy as well...
Yes Billy try to make Armaan feel better but usko zarurat nehi pada...
Kyunki Armaan khud jaante hai, aur khud koh bhi sambhal raha tha woh...
Haan Anjul koh dekhke, Ridz koh apni condition yaad aate hai...
Tabhi woh bas usko dekhti raha...
Haan, Padma mein Ridz koh bohot acche se samjha diya..
Aur Ridz koh sambhala bhi, kyunki Armaan uss condition mein nehi tha woh Ridz koh sambhale...
Sab bohot supportive hai...
AR koh hamesha ek dusre ke baahon mein sukoon milta hai...
Situation kitna bhi kharab kyun na ho...
Keep reading and loving...
take care...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: TaniDMGlover

Hello back and first of all thank you sooo much for the update even though you weren't feeling very well!!!

Now coming to the part...You have really left me speechless it was totally different from what I predicted in my head and I guess that just made it an even more beautiful read!!

The start the way Ridhima's reacted to the news and put up a brave front was so well described and the way Armaan just held her and asked her to let it out was amazing!

I loved how you showed their plight obviously they are both really scared for their baby and in a way Armaan is really scared cuz he does not want Ridhima to get hurt knowing that she has Hohenzollern through so much and the way he was even willing to forget his pain and just somehow comfort her showed what a perfect guy he is!

The highlight definitely had to be the end the way ridhima finally cried out looking at Anjul was such a painful scene specially because she is so attached to that baby but now knowing that she may not get the chance to see her own baby hurt her so much that she couldn't even bare looking at Anjul! I loved that scene and the way you added padma's Role in it was beautiful! Then of course the way Armaan comes in and just hugs her tight...Love love!

I abyloved the part and you know this my current track so I will keep eating your head for udoates :p so pls do update real soon...pretty pls!


Thanks Tani...
Glad u love and enjoy the part...
heheh u r most welcome dear...
Oh ho, itni bhi bimar nehi thi hehehe...

heheh accha... Hmmm i know everyone must be expecting Riddhima to break down badly na...???
Yes it did give her a big shocked, lekin woh khudko sambhaliya...
Tut bhi gayi thi kuch der ke liye, lekin Armaan tha na saath...
Toh aisa ho sakte hai Ridz koh himmat na mile...
Haan woh ek dusre koh itni acche se jaante hai, apne dard bhi nehi chupa sakte...

Indeed, Armaan is the most perfect guy...
haan yeh baat sahi hai, Ridz se zyada Armaan koh dukh huva...
Kyunki woh hamesha se hi Ridz ki itni care karta hai...
Aur woh jaante hai, Ridz kitni buri tarah tut jaenge jo woh kissi bhi haalat mein nehi chahte...
Kyunki aisa huva toh, woh khud Ridz koh sambhal nehi paenge...

Awww, really...????
I knew it would be the perfect moment to let Ridz finally break out...
Woh kitna bhi koshish kare, Anjul koh dekh kar woh khud koh control nehi karpae...
Mujhe woh scene likhne ke liye bhi waqt laga...
hehhehe mujhe khud itni emotional hoti hun aise part likhte waqt :P
Of course, after all Padma is the mother of Ridz...
Ananya ke baad, wohi toh hai jo Ridz koh acche se samjhenge...

Heheheh it was needed na... itna rolaya hai dono koh...
Ek hug milte hi, dono shaant hojate hai ;)

hahaha of course of course...
I m trying my best to post as soon as possible...
Keep reading and loving...
take care :)

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: millee18

Just read 113 part and i'm numb. Why things go wrong with them all the time.
It's very heart wrenching
I hope everything ends well . Cont soon


Thanks dear...
I have send the next part...
Glad u love and enjoy it...
Keep reading and loving...
take care :D

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_28

Such a heart wrenching part... Riddhima tried to be strong but then she breaks so badly.continue soon..



Thanks dear...
Glad u love and enjoy it...
Yeah emotional and heart wrenching parts...
Keep reading and loving...
take care :D

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: NishitaRahman

Mindblowing part .part ki liye bohot sukriya.love the part.thanks for pm.eagerly waiting for next part


Thanks Nishi...
Glad u love and enjoy the part...
Keep reading and loving...
take care :D

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: geetika314

love this parts, hope their baby is okay and nothing bad happen


Thanks dear...
Glad u love and enjoy the part...
Keep reading and loving...
take care :)

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Jenwing8

Just finished reading part 112...i am shook! What now? Omg i am dying from the suspense. As always your writing is spectacular and but cant say the same for the plot lol...why cant they just be happy for once? Please please dont do anything with their child and hopefully there will be a way out where the baby and the mother come out safe from this!!! Please send part me 113!!

Thabk you!



Thanks dear...
Glad u love and enjoy the part...
Heheheh sorry for giving shock :P
Aage aage dekho hota hai kiya..
Dekhte hai, baby koh kuch hota hai ya nehi...
I have send part 113...
Keep reading and loving...
take care :D

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