Revolutions of My Heart~Final Note - Pg 79~ - Page 56

Originally posted by: superstar15

I REPEAT DO NOT DISCONTINUE LOF IF YOU DO I WILL COME AFTER YOU WITH MY DAND JK 😆 plz cont ur ffs im just in love with them i have wait so long im going to burst wait ing plz cont soon madzz

Originally posted by: monikaseth

please conti dear. 😭

Originally posted by: Dark Love

😲😲😲

Threatening me are we? 😳😆

I'm so sorry hon, this year's been quiet a hectic/crappy one. I really didn't have the heart to continue. I'm working on it. It should be up by tonight. For LOF - lemme read it over and see if I catch the drift of it again, I totally have no idea why I ever started that FF. It was pretty conceptless after a certain point.

LOF was a grt ff i loved it i want u conti it cuz u left at a suspence part in the ff dont think any of ur ffs are bad they really good trust me.

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

hey Madiha..

i just caught up with ur fic.. its seriously gr8.. i loved every bit, and ur a great writer 👏 👏 Thanks Isra! 😳

I love Angad soooo much 😳 , as usual.., but his character is reli mysterious.. sometyms its hard 2 figure out whether he's only messing or he's actually serious, and i can't get round the fact whether he loves Kripa or not??? Well for now, they're 16, so the feelings are slowly developing. There's a lot in store for both of them, and Angad's mysterious on purpose- both are slowly discovering their feelings. =)

But the learning difficulty thing was 2 cute.. the fact that he pretended he needed help with french, just 2 spend tym with Kripa was gr8, and it tells its own story... Glad you liked it. The idea was pretty last minute. I tried not to make it obvious :P

Kripa is 2 cute, i love all the whacky stuff she comes up with 2 pay back ppl tht insult her 😆 Haha, this is just the beginning man :P... i'm reli glad she's changed, now simi nd all will finally c her as some1 better nd prettier than them... hmmm... i believe the change is 4 our angad of course!!! 😆 😊 Yup! But she'll never admit it. 😉

The sister- brother bond is 2 cute... i love how much they all love each other and share all thr problems with each other... Josh nd sahil r the sweetest I love those two to death. Oh how I wish I had older brothers like them!

hmmm... about Raj... hate him 😡 ..lol... i just don't c what he wants.. he shud get around the fact tht kripa doesn't love him, or in tht case even like him... plus he's a casanova- he can easily find some1 else... some other than Kripa, that is Eeek anotherr Raj hater 😆 I try to make my characters be positive, and though Raj has a negative shade, it won't be there for long. You'll know what I mean, all in good time!

The last 2 parts scared me alot.. 4 a mintue i thought AK wud die.. but then agen thr the main characters so thr isn't exactly a chance 4 tt 2 happn 😆 😉 Haha, believe it or not, I planned on killing off someone. But after many threats, I finally gave in. I didn't have the heart to kill of my characters either. =(

that emo guy needs a life... AK shud surely beat him up some tym 😕 😆 LOL! You're giving me ideas buddy 😆


abt 1 of the questions u asked.. i think its about tym A K r AK... i think they shud pair up now... and Angad confesses his love 2 Kripa soon...Yea, I was thinking the same. Expect something soon. But don't be too excited, I won't keep you all happy for long 😈😆 hmm, seeing as the fic is 4m Kripa's point of view, its hard 2 knw what Angad is thinking or feeling.. so i was thinking, mayb 1 part shud b 4m Angad's POV, so v knw hw he feels 2wards Kripa...(sorry, just a suggestion) Thank you for the wonderful suggestion! That's definitely going to be needed for the future track! So do expect at least 1 (if not more) chapter from his POV.

hmm... 1 question... i knw that AK making out was a dream 😡 (lol).. but i'm confused about thr kiss.. well the peck as Kripa described it 😆 .. was that real?? bcoz thr wasn't much abt tht, i wud hve thought Angad wud hve appologised or something.. Yea it was just really awkward and the way they are, neither wanted to bring it up. It was a light peck. I feel uncomfortable getting into details 😳

anywayz.. gr8 fic..loved it all... its also dam* hilarious 😆 😆 😃 plz update soon.. i'[m serriously eager 2 read it, nd plz pm me if u can Aww always glad to entertain! And will try my very best to PM you =)

nd sorry 4 such long comment... 😳 Haha don't be sorryy! I really enjoy reading long comments! 🤗
hmmm... i think i've made this comment up 4 all the parts i've missed 😳 😆 😉 Works for me! 😉
xx

Irsa

No Need to Second Guess That You've Been On My Mind

Revenge, revenge, revenge. I did want my sweet little revenge from His Highness, but I had no idea whatsoever of what I was going to do. I was sitting in Study Hall, tapping my pencil, trying to think of something really good. But of course, I had too many other stressful things to think about. Like, my AP French Exam, AP Bio Test, Romeo & Juliet, AND, today's soccer game! Two more periods, and then I had to go get ready for our big game.

Soccer is my passion. The thrill, the control, the teamwork, it's the best thing ever. One of my biggest stress relievers as well. You must be wondering why I am stressed then? Well, we lost our last two games, and I really, really, REALLY wanted to win this one. Losing is not my thing. We'd worked really hard in the past few weeks and we really deserved to win.

The best part about soccer was that the pressure was balanced for every player. I play center forward, and since I was basically right in front of the goal, the goal-making pressure was on me. The people on either side of me were also pressurized, they also had to make goals and good passes. Midfield had to defend, pass, and attempt goals. Defense had to make sure that the ball didn't get pass them, for then it would go right at the goalie, who stood there all alone in that big goal. And finally, the goalie/goalkeeper. They had equal pressure, for if they didn't catch that ball coming towards them, the other team would score, which was a big no-no. Usually if the team loses the game, the goalie feels the worst for not defending right, even though they have no reason to.

That's pretty much it for my little soccer explanation. Man am I getting excited! Soccer, soccer, soccerrr! I quickly wrapped up my homework, totally pushing the whole revenge idea into some closet in the back of my brain.

As Study Hall ended, I quickly grabbed my stuff and power walked to my next class. We had four minutes passing time, and the class was on the other side of the school. I really wanted to grab a good seat.

***

The Game

I came out to the field, all ready in my shorts, jersey, shin guards and socks. Wincing at the bright sunlight, I jogged over to the team and asked around for a headband. Stupid weather. Stupid hair. Why did it have to be so long? Why did I not cut it? Grr!

As coach took attendance, I grabbed a ball and juggled it around the field. I was technically trying to get rid of my nervousness while warming up. I practiced the usual tricks, until Coach called me back. We all sat around and had our little team discussion.

Then, we ran a few laps around the field and played a mini warm-up game. Soon, the other team had arrived. They were dressed in black, just like us. Meaning one team had to change their jerseys.

"Ladies, change your jerseys. Wear the blue ones instead." I scoffed at Coach, "Why us?" She gave me a look.

"No seriously, why do we always have to change our jerseys? Why don't they?" Someone from behind me murmured, "Because they're too poor for extras." I rolled my eyes and angrily grabbed my bag. I wasn't wearing an undershirt, was I seriously expected to change right in the middle of a soccer field?

I huffed and looked around. I really didn't want to change in my car. Plus, where was the gang? I slow-jogged over to the parking lot. Our minivan pulled in just then. One by one they all got out.

"Hey sis" Josh yelled. I waved and walked over. Prem asked why I was standing in the parking lot.

"I have to change my stupid jersey" I replied, annoyed.

"Oh so you were gonna give the neighbors a show out here?" Prithvi teased.

"Shut up you perv!" I threw him a disgusted look.

Out popped Angad. "You wanna change in the car?" What a logical plan.

"Yes please"

He opened the door for me, and I sat in. "You wanna close it now?!" I asked as he just stood there with the door open.

"Not really" he replied.

"AHH YOU STUPID MONKEYS!" I screamed, slamming the door and locking it. As quick as I could, I changed and jumped out.

"Wow, that was hot" Prem winked. I kicked his shin, not hanging on long enough to see him wince. But his scream was pretty loud. Especially the "I'm gonna kill you"

I hope the cops heard that. Okay not really. That was pretty mean.

I ran back to the team and we did our little school spirit cheer and took positions.

The start of the game was intense. This was the time to test the skills of the opposing team. Their mascot was the "Purple Spider" and this was an away game. So yes, I wanted to beat the crap out of them. No losing to purple spiders, and no driving 25 miles just to lose. I made eye contact with their center forward. She seemed as nervous as I was. Good. We had the good side of the field, so as soon as we began passing the ball, I sprinted forward and twisted around their midfield.

Time to get through the defense. The stopper was huge. This girl was gonna squish me purtyy bad. "To your right" I looked up to find Jessica, the right forward, open. I passed the ball to her and then she dribbled down past the defense. I stood right in front of the goal. The defense was getting closer. Jessica passed the ball.

The fat stopper comes and pushes me hard, kicking my stomach and grabbing the ball. Where was the FREAKING REFEREE?

Ah, the blind guy was TYING HIS SHOES. THAT'S SO NOT FAIR. I threw a glance at Coach, who seemed frustrated, yet calm. The bench warmers were getting pretty pissed off, but she shook her head at them and made them calm down.

I looked for the ball. It was on the other side of the field. Time to switch the field. I jogged up until I was standing at the middle of the field. Our defense was in control of the ball in minutes. The defender passed it to midfield, and the center midfielder was dribbling ahead. I jogged backwards until I was right at their stopper. The midfielder passed the ball to the right. Jessica dribbled it right past the defense, kicking it at the goalie. The ball smacked the goalie's face. Darn. That was close. It fell, and it was quiet, as the wind slowly rolled it in, while the goalie stood holding her nose.

The crowd began to cheer. I grinned and gave the girl a thumbs up. We got ready for kickoff. I noticed the opposing team's player next to me. What was she doing here? She was supposed to be on the other side of the field! I looked for the referee, who, once again, was sitting, tying his shoelaces. AGH that guy and his stupid SHOELACES!

I screamed at him, "this girl's on the wrong side of the field!" But it was too late. The ball was already being passed around. Ignored yet again.

***

The game went on like this forever. There were 15 more minutes left. The ball was with me. I dribbled ahead, watching out for the girl who'd kicked me earlier. The score was 3-2. It could've been higher if their defense wasn't this good. The stopped came right at me. I ran my leg over the ball, blocking her and pushing the ball away with the other foot. I faked left and moved the ball to the right, dribbling the ball down towards the goal by myself.

The goalie was in the middle, and my left foot was pretty bad. I paused for a millisecond, lifting my right foot, kicking straight ahead with my laces. Bull's-eye.

"YEA KRIPA!! WOO!" I grinned and glanced at the bleachers. My jaw dropped at what I saw. There stood Angad, Prem, Prithvi, Josh, and Sahil, K-R-I-P-A written on their stomachs, each letter respectively. Dear god. What a nice excuse to appear shirtless at a girl's soccer game.

The presence of shirtless guys on the bleachers really got to the other team. Their attention was diverted very easily, and that's pretty much why we ended up winning by 5 points. Yup, 5 more points in 15 minutes. Quite impressive, no? Where were these 5 guys this whole season? *Sigh*

***

I hit the shower as soon as I got home. I was sweaty and pretty nasty. I quickly changed into comfy clothes and ran down, tying my wet hair up. "Let's celebrate!" I told the guys. They still hadn't bothered to put on some shirts.

"And PUHLEAZ put on some CLOTHES!" Once I got closer, I noticed that they were trying to mark off the letters they'd written on their stomachs. I giggled. They were having a tough time. I don't even wanna know what my idiots had used. "Oh man I love you guys" I said, breathless and still giggling.

"But I love them more!" We all turned to the door.

"AHHH!" I let out a girlish scream and ran to hug her. My best friend in the whole world aka Aaliya was HEREE!! What a pleasant surprise!

"You're killing ME WOMAN! GET OFF ME!" She screamed, laughing. I let go and stuck my tongue out at her.

"Now, now, look at my sexy boys!" She grinned as she checked out the guys. "Hey Babe!" Angad came and hugged her.

"Heyy!" she hugged him back. Then came Josh. "My my my. What hotel are you staying at?" he asked, eyeing her luggage. She smacked him hard.

"OW AALIYA! You still punch like a guy. Little Bully" He grabbed his arm and winced in pain. "Aww coochie poo" She grabbed his cheeks as if he were a little kid, and then changed her tone, "You'll be fine loser!" lightly slapping him while she spoke the last words.

"And where are the rest of my boys?" She hugged Prithvi and Prem brotherly, flirting with Sahil afterwards.

Once they were done, I dragged her up to my room. "Ah I have SO MUCH TO TELL YOU!"

She grinned. "Me too!"

"You start!" I said excitedly.

"No, I think you should!" she replied, winking.

"Come on Aalii! I saw your e-mail, you said it was something big!"

After a lot of convincing, she finally told me to shut up and grinned at me. Then, she slowly raised her hand to my face.

I looked at her hand, confused. And then I noticed it. Fourth finger of the left hand. A stunning diamond staring right back at me. HOLYY!

I screamed my loudest scream ever. Thankfully, my buddies downstairs knew me well enough to not freak out at this one.

"WHO? WHAT? WHERE? WHEN? HOW?! YOU ARE FREAKIN 18 GIRL!"

I was shocked out of my wits. She grinned and moved a strand of hair behind her ear, a bit shy. "His name's Armaan. He's an amazing guy! I met him at a party, and then we started hanging out. Man Kripa, when I'm with him, I'm the happiest person in the world. I never really told you anything because I wasn't sure about my feelings. And then, slowly, we hung out more often and eventually, he popped the question. I know I'm 18 and I have dreams to fulfill. But a part of me was ready for this. Mentally, I knew I wasn't prepared for this, but it's so weird, my heart didn't agree with my brain." She laughed, and I saw this dreamy look in her eyes. She was so happy. I smiled.

She continued, "Plus, it's not like we're getting married right away. For now, we're just engaged. He claims he wants everyone to know that I'm rightfully his, so that all men back off." She winked and grinned again.

"Ah, I feel bad for the 34646 million guys who will be heartbroken." I replied, grinning myself. "But anyways, Aali, are you sure? Are you seriously ready for such a big commitment?"

"Believe it or not Kripa, I feel like I'm ready. I can feel it. It's really weird. But I'm following my heart, and it really feels great."

She always follows her heart. And that's one of the things I love about her. Her carefree attitude and willingness to do anything and everything.

I popped the big question, "Did you sleep with him yet?"

She shook her head. "Nope. We're both not the conservative types, but surprisingly, I never wanted to drag him to bed, and neither did he. This isn't lust. It's something totally different, and I've never felt it before."

I looked at her. She had this glow to her face, and this dreamy look in her eyes. I was so happy for her, I couldn't even put it in words.

"Wow. This is serious. I'm really happy for you Aali, I truly am!" I gave her a big hug.

"You wanna tell the guys?" she asked.

"It's up to you. Why, are you too shy?" I asked teasingly.

"No man, it's not like that" she replied awkwardly.

"Fine whatever!" I replied, grabbing her hand and running down. They were all chatting animatedly about something.

"Guess what?!" I screamed.

They all looked at me. I stuck up Aali's ring finger, "Our little Aaliyah is GETTING MARRIED!"

Wow. This gave one heck of a response. Hugs from a few, teasing from the rest. But there was one thing that didn't miss my eyes. Everyone got out of the shock, except Josh. He just sat there, staring at her with his mouth open. He slowly closed it and looked away, not getting up to congratulate her like the rest.

What was going on here? I glanced back and forth between the smiling happy and visibly upset Josh.