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ruhi1985sheetal

@ruhi1985sheetal

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Yeh reality hai India ki aaj bhi apne country mein zyadater ladies apne family see pratarit rehti hai chahe woh illiterate ho ya literate ho bahut Kam hi ladies hai jo awaj uthati hai Riya ka case bhi aisa hi tha padi likhi police ke naukri ke baad bhi apna mata pita aur fiance ke khilaf awaj nahi uthai bahut Kam ko koi aisa milta hai Jo oose support Kare per yaha Arjun ne na Riya ka saath diya aur himmat bhi di jisse Riya apno ke khilaf gai aur sahi kadam chuna bahut Kam ko Arjun jaisa saathi milta hai. Beautiful emotional tragic love romance hate every type of emotions described beautifully superb os dear and thanks for pm

Edited by ruhi1985sheetal - 7 years ago

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armishra

@armishra

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Fantastic fabulous story

Love it

Thanks for pm

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Sorry to say but I totally hate this riya

She is useless brainless & coward

When she couldn't even saved herself then how can she save other

If only she talked to choree & samjun she wouldn't have been reaped by that monster

She is herself responsible for what happened to her

I wish Arjun leave her in hell

Being ETF member still she needed help to save her own dignity disgusting

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

superb

gave me goosebumps

finally both are together and happy

thanks for pm

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Omg so so nice os dear

I m speechless

Very well written

Riya's parents is too much, disgusting 😡

Itna sab kuch Riya sath hone bad bhi kahena parega she is very lucky, Arjun tha uske sath

Love it

Eagerly waiting for new one

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927187

Hibernated

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

I never expected to read this kind of story.

ISN'T It the big that she can't protect herself being a police officer.

Mujhe ab nightmare agaye.uske cause tumhara yeh story ha I. I can't digest this kind of story.

Marna tha toh pehle kyun nehi mara usse.saath mein apne maa-baap ko bhi mar deta.

I hate this story.

Jo bhi ho yeh feed back thik se par lene.

Mujhe acha nehi lagta essa story.

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Beautiful Os

Quite emotional and meaningful

I have a question ... Was Riya their real daughter ? 😕

No parents will treat their daughter like this ... They knew about that psycho Mannan behavior still they forced Riya ... That was disgusting ... They should be treated like Arjun said

Second I think Riya what did was wrong in her anger that she kept on doing what her parents said she never protested ... She didn't even retaliated to my surprise ... She shouldn't have been so weak in terms of herself ... Thou she had a reason behind that Arjun and her parents both didn't support her but still she should have stood up for herself she was an independent girl and when required she could have shown her parents more strongly by moving out of the place

Well finally all well that ends well

Keep writing 😊

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Suzie

@etfr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Superb amazing OS

Really mind-blowing.

Loved it totally

Really hate peoples like Riya's parents who in the name of society tortures girl and for the name sake prestige sell their daughters to the psycho beast like Manan. And even then they pretend to be lovely parents in public.. uggh heights of hypocrisy. If I don't know better and don't understand laws I would have suggest to kill such parents.

Earlier I was disappointed with Riya's decision of taking revenge with her parents by destroying her soul and self esteem. Later I understand as a girl it is possible to fight with those who tried harm us, our self respect and dignity. But we can't stood after facing the betrayal from the people who meant to protect and safeguard us. Betrayal from one's parents and family is too much to bear. And Riya faced the same shock which caused her to be numb towards her destruction.

Really Loved the way Arjun intervene and made her realised that she is destroying herself in the process of causing shame to her parents.

Arjun married her and punished Manan and her parents lawfully.

Aww.. Ariya are lovely parents of Dev and they tease each other for his one or other action.. Arjun closed the topic by diverting Riya's mind with his pleasure filled love. Beautiful lovely scene.

The OS was extra ordinary.

The emotions of each characters were defined nicely.

Superbly written

Thanks for PM

Keep writing more.

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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Mein ne aapna cmnts already post kia ..fast cmnts .. but fir v kuch logo ka cmnts dekh k laag rahi hai ye jo crime dikhaya gaya uss case ko un logo ne edit kia.. haa ye ek story hai writer ne khud v kuch add obviously kia.. paar jitna writer ne bayan dia case k bareme mujhe nahi lagta real me wo case yeisa tha.. isse itna change kar k TV me dia gaya ki kuch baatein adhure hi reh gayi .. Ye case jo dikh raha hai wo nahi hai.. Mein writer se request karna chahti hu ki plz aap mujhe us episode number with show details plz send kije .. mujhe iss case k bareme janna hai... yeha us victim ki jaga Riya ko jo dikhai gayi hai unme bht badha gap reh gaya.. jo hume najar aate huye v nahi aa rahi hai...

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Res... Kehne ko bahoth kuch hai par place sahi nahi as soon as i reach home will unres it / UNRES

sorry yaar thodi der laga gayi unres karne me

ok ab update ke baareme baat karte hai

It was really too gud all emotions and feelings are clearly expressed but there are many questions regarding the characters

1. riya's parents they are such a disgusting people I had ever seen... no one shud have fate to get such parents how can they give permission to the outsider to do as they want with their daughter...this is really ridiculous act

2. now comes to that bas***d manan how can he do with riya like that he was such a disgusting fellow

3. arjun when he loves riya y cant he say it clearly to her y cant he express his feelings and give her support she wanted ... If he had given her that support before may be she would have gone against her parents..

4. in this story I hate riya a lot...yes many said it was reality of today's woman but even todays woman would have done every possible thing to protect herself but here riya being herself a cop could not protect herself and just to make her parents head down she gave her most valuable thing her respect to that bas***d

if she wanted to bow her parents head down then she had many other ways to do so

Ya I know going against parents is not a gud thing but when the parents are like riya's parents then it was the most probable thing to be done

sorry If I had hurt any of you unknowingly It was just my point of view regarding the story

Thanks for pm

Bye take care

Edited by sana1819786 - 7 years ago