Arshi SS : The Fallen Flower last pt pg19 NEW SS LINK PG25

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@pup03

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Beautiful shot.. loved it.. his offerings to her..

good to see you.. Happy New Year.. 😊

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

I knew it'll be amazing as you wrote it...

Loved it!!

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Beautiful OS dear

Liked it!!

Emotive and sensitive narration

Thanks for the pm!

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rn94

@rn94

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Nice os.

Thanks for the pm.

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Nilima2016

@Nilima2016

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Really well written...covering a very sensitive issue👏

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Aishu

@Aishu136

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Oh my god! You know I only recently only thought of you as its been so long since I read ur story. Thought of asking you to come up with one.

And see here you are with the story already, though its a shot- I loved it totally!!

How are you? I'm so happy to see you after a very long time.

Khushi is a widow who is facing struggles to live her life but never breaks apart and live her life

I loved they you compared her life with a diya that flooded on river and how it totally resembled her life!!

Arnav seems to be totally blown away by her - Not because of beauty, but because of calm expression which intrude Arnav to look deeper at her.

The fallen flower is exactly who she is or so thought by her - Nothing is impure unless its conscience or nature itself is spoiled - like a person cannot be tainted by caste, colour, religion, birth, appearance or anything but his/ her thoughts

So something cannot become impure physically but with your inner beliefs and uproot nature and thinking but people only concerned about other's outer appearance but their behaviour and thoughts

So Khushi thinks she is fallen flower and the same cannot serve its purpose and her life cannot get peace and happiness.

But Arnav's statement at the end proves that she still has purpose to serve which is to live a happy life!

But that cannot be the end right? Its just the beginning of their life know. C'mon ya give us more love - extend the shot or make it as a story know.

Please pretty please

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ntmrjn

@ntmrjn

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Such a beautiful story cannot end like this..it must have a journey...it somewhat feels incomplete...hope you would write some more for it.

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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Does Khushi think of herself as the fallen flower? And Arnav thinks she is the pure one.

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

You are back 😃 I love the simplicity of this which made this read so beautiful. A simple offering of a flower yet with so many unsaid words attached to it ❤️

But Rose, you surely made a mistake in labeling this as an OS when I know you meant to write PROLOGUE 😉 😆

Edited by brishti84 - 7 years ago