Samud FF - Mangalsutra

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Character Sketch

Saras - He is Kumud's family friend and her childhood love


Kumud - She is Saras's childhood friend and his childhood love


Laxminandan - He is Saras's father

Vidyachatur - He is Kumud's dad

Ghuman - She is Saras's mom

Guniyal - She is Kumud's mom

Kusum - She is Saras's crazy lover

The other characters will come later
Part 1-2
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thx 4 starting the samud version of Mangalsuthra too as u know how much I luv Samud.loved the cs.And Kusum is perfect as Saras' crazy lover
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Lovely CS dear
Liked it !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Character Sketch is Fantastic
Saras and Kumud are childhood friends and each others love
awaiting for this story to unfold
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nice cs...waiting 4 updates...thank u 4 pm...
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Part 1

The Vyas & Desai families are friends for a long time. However, due to unavoidable circumstances, they had to part but their friendship is intact. Kumud had studied in India whereas Saras goes to Ireland for his further studies. Kumud & Saras are communicating with each other through postal correspondences & WhatsApp messages. Saras has been carrying Kumud's photo wherever he goes. Sis also finds a lot of Indian students studying in Ireland and a lot of Indian lecturers working there. The exams begin. All students enter the examination hall. All the students are writing the paper. Suddenly, and invigilator goes to Saras and asks, "Are you trying to cheat?"

Saras: No Sir.

Invigilator: Then what is this?

He sees Kumud's photo and asks, "Whose photo is this?"

One of Saras's friends said, "She is his inspiration which he always carries."

Everyone laugh.

The invigilator said, "Fine, but my eyes are always on all of you."

The examination ends. Everyone leaves. All the students are done with their exams.

Kumud is in Madhupur and is working as an accountant in a huge firm. She sees the postman going to Kumud's house at the end of her shift. She hurriedly takes the envelope from him.

The postman said: I was delivering this letter to your place but you are in so much hurry. Anything special in this letter.

Kumud: It is a very special thing in my life.

She takes the letter and the parcel to the room. Kumud plays the tape in her player. She listens to Saras's dialogues.

"Kumud, Kumud, Kumud,"

Kumud checks her tape recorder.

Saras: Nothing is wrong with your tape recorder. I am mad at your name and I like to mention your name again and again because I like your name. I find you everywhere even if I am away from you. Even if I utter your name 1000 times it is not enough as you are a fragrance in my life just as a flower is incomplete without it. But you are so heartless that I had to write the exams on your insistence with the promise that I should clear my exams when I felt like coming to you at Madhupur in your arms. "

Kumud imagines herself with Saras. She is blushing and day-dreaming. Vidyachatur and Guniyal knock the door. Kumud comes to reality and opens the door and goes to the bathroom.

Vidyachatur sees the tape recorder and plays.

Guniyal: Don't you have any shame looking into others personal things?

Vidyachatur: This is our to-be-son-in-law's voice. This is the new way to love.

Guniyal: What?

Vidyachatur: Close your eyes.

Guniyal closes her eyes.

Vidyachatur kisses her.

Guniyal: Even at this age you are behaving like that.

Vidyachatur: There are different ways to express your feelings which we need to learn.

Guniyal: I don't want to learn that.

She leaves.

Vidyachatur: I will learn and teach as well.

He plays the tape but hears donkey's voice. He puts off the tape.

Guniyal: I think this is the right time to approach Laxminandan and finalize the Kumud's marriage with Saras.

Vidyachatur: Yes, you are right. Saras would have finished his final year exams and he will join the family business.

Saras comes home after his exams. Laxminandan calls up Vidyachatur and said, "I am coming to your place with Saras to finalize the marriage of our children."

Vidyachatur: I was about to call you and talk to you about the relationship of our children.

Laxminandan, Ghuman, Danny, and Kumari pack their bags and leave for Madhupur. Saras stares at Kumud's photo. Danny sees that. He said, "Once if Kumud enters the house, she will always be in front of your eyes."

Saras blushes. All of them are traveling on the train. They are on the way to Madhupur. Vidyachatur is searching for his shawl to receive Saras & his family at the railway station. Guniyal comes & gives him the shawl. Kumud sees the train & goes running. Saras sees her from the window & jumps from the train. Both run towards each other & hug. The train stops at the station. Everyone see Saras carrying Kumud in his arms at the fields.

Kumud & Saras go to the temple. Kumud prays.

Saras: Enough of praying. Let's go home.

Kumud: Don't you believe in God?

Saras: I don't believe in God but I definitely believe in Goddess.

Kumud: Which Goddess?

Saras: Goddess of love. She is near me.

Kumud blushes. The background song is

Jawani shararat kare

Jawani shararat kare

Ude aanchal baje payal

Kisi se bhi ye na dare dare

Dare

Jawani shararat kare

Jawani shararat kare

Ye dil pagal bada chanchal

Kisi se bhi ye na dare dare

Dare

Jawani shararat kare

Jiwan ke sapno mein rang bhare hum

Hontho se hotho pe geet likhe hum

Jiwan ke sapno mein rang bhare hum

Hontho se hotho pe geet likhe hum

Chamke dilo mein sitare

Ho mausam kayamat kare

Ho mausam kayamat kare

Ude aachal baje payal

Kisi se bhi ye na dare dare

Dare

Jawani shararat kare

Dhup ho ya chanv sada saath rahe hum

Koi kahe kuch bhi pyar kare hum

Dhup ho ya chanv sada saath rahe hum

Koi kahe kuch bhi pyar kare hum

Arma jagaye najare

Jaadu mohabbat kare

Jaadu mohabbat kare

Ye dil pagal bada chanchal

Kisi se bhi ye na dare dare

Dare

Jawani shararat kare

Dil mein chupau tumhe kis tarah

Badal mein pani rahe jis tarah

Dil mein chupau tumhe kis tarah

Badal mein pani rahe jis tarah

Are tute na bandhan hamare

Vaada ye chahat kare

Vaada ye chahat kare

Ye dil pagal bada chanchal

Kisi se bhi ye na dare dare

Dare

Jawani shararat kare

Jawani shararat kare.

Vidyachatur & Guniyal receive Laxminandan & Ghuman at the railway station. They see Kumud & Saras holding hand-in-hand.

Laxminandan: Where were you?

Danny: Saras might have seen Kumud from the window & have jumped into the train.

Saras: Danny is right.

All of them reach home.

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Part 2

A man comes to Desai House. He tells to Vidyachatur, "I have brought your son-in-law to your place."

Guniyal comes out. She said, "My son-in-law has already come to my house."

The other man who is in the cart comes.

Guniyal: What made you think that I will give my daughter to this old man.

She pours the water on their faces and drives them away.

Saras is sleeping in his room. He imagines Kumud coming. Saras gets up and sees that he is hugging the pillow. Danny & Kumari come to his room.

Kumari: That day is not very far away. Kumud is all yours. Both of you are made for each other.

Saras: Just as you and Danny. Both of you are perfect couples. There is a lot to learn from both of you.

Saras freshens up and goes to the swimming pool. Laxminandan, Ghuman, Danny, and Kumari are at the breakfast table.

Kumud serves them breakfast.

Laxminandan: Wow, what a yummy food. There won't be any engagement for Kumud and Saras. It will be a direct marriage. It is because my son is getting very much restless.

They call the pundit to fix up the wedding.

Vidyachatur: As you say. Earlier the better. How much dowry do you want? I want to make Kumud's marriage grand as she is my only daughter. I will give 500 grams of gold & one lakh chain to my SIL. Friendship is separate from the dealings,

Laxminandan: I want to make Saras's marriage grand as well. I have spent 12 lakhs on his education. I want Rs 15 lakhs.

Vidyachatur: Where will I get that much amount? We are friends.

Laxminandan: Friendship & dealings are different. If you are ready, the wedding will take place.

Guniyal: I join my hands. Please for God's sake don't cancel this relationship.

Vidyachatur: Let it be. I won't give them the girl

Laxminandan: Don't give.

Danny & Saras are shocked. They said, "What are you talking dad?"

Laxminandan: Shut up & come with me.

Kumud falls to his feet and said, "Please don't break this relationship. I will kill myself if this marriage does not take place."

Laxminandan makes her get up. He said, "I was just kidding. I had considered you as our DIL when you and Saras were little children. Your dad had insulted my friendship. That is why I gave him a mild jolt." He then tells Vidyachatur, "What questions are you asking. You know very well that I'm an anti-dowry person. I have not taken even a pie from Kumari and her parents. Come on, we have been friends for years. Do you think I am going to take anything from you? I don't want anything from you except your daughter."

The Samud wedding gets finalized. Both families conduct mehendi and haldi ki rasam. Kumud dresses up as a bride. Saras is seen sitting on the horse.

Suddenly there is a thunder. The trees start shaking. The hole appears on the way. The horses get startled. Saras falls from the horse on the way.

One of Laxminandan's servants said, "A groom falling like that is a bad omen."

Laxminandan: That is all bullshit. The marriage will happen at any cost.

Saras and Kumud sit at the mandap. At the time of 7 rounds, the gathbandan burns in the fire. Both the families panic. Kumud also panics.

Saras: Don't get afraid. Let us continue.

The marriage completes.

The pundit said, "From now on both of you are husband & wife. Fill the bride's partition with a vermilion & put the mangalsutra on her neck.

Saras is about to do that. Suddenly the flame gets his. The Vermillion falls.

Guniyal panics. She tells Vidyachatur, "I don't understand anything that is happening."

The pundit said, "Nothing to worry. Everything will be fine by God's grace."

Kumud & Saras complete the marriage rituals. All are happy.

Suddenly Kumud disappears.

Saras: I know where Kumud is.

He finds her in the puja room & overhears Kumud saying, "If I have done anything wrong, please punish me but spare Saras. Please protect him."

Saras: Kumud.

She comes out. Both hug.

Kumud cries.

Saras: Why are you crying? Nothing will happen to me. All this good omen bad omen is just a mindset. It is the old thoughts of old people. The times have changed.

Kumud: Yes, I agree but hunger, thirst, life & death are constant.

Saras: Hunger & thirst is a part of human being. What has the stone got to do with that? Everyone is responsible for their actions.

Kumud: Do you mean to say there are no positive & negative forces? You mean God won't do anything? Don't insult God by calling him a stone. You are talking like an atheist.

Saras: I am an atheist. All these God, Goddesses crap is only an imagination. I only believe in what I see. For eg We are here, that is true. This temple is the truth.

Kumud: When you can believe that temple is true why can't you believe that God exists?

Saras: You can't change my viewpoint but it does not mean that I will come in your way. I won't ask you to change your faith. You can pray to Shivling 1000 times a day I have no problem. Come now. Everyone is waiting.

Both of them leave.

The Vyas family does Kumud's grahapravesh.

Danny & Kumari congratulate Saras & Kumud. Kumari said, "You take your husband's name. Only then you can enter.

Kumud is shy.

Kumari: You take his name so many times in a day. Why not now?

Danny: And what happened to you, Saras? You take Kumud's name day & night. What happened now?

Saras: I take her name 1000 times. Kumud Kumud Kumud.

Kumari: Enough. It is Kumud's turn.

Kumud shyly said: Saras

Kumari: Say loudly.

Ghuman said, "Stop teasing my younger DIL."

Kumud is sitting on the cot. She is shy. Saras comes in.

The background song is

Raat banu main or chand bano tum

Deep banu main or jyot bano tum

Kuch na suunu main kuch na kahoo tum

Aao baho mein aaoRaat banu main or chand bano tum

Deep banu main or jyot bano tum

Kuch na suunu mai kuch na Kaho tum

Aao baho mein aao

Saras kisses Kumud's waist and carries her in his arms. He puts her on the bed & kisses her hands.

Raat banu main or chand bano tum

Naya naya main hu nayi nayi tum

Yun hi na kho jaye raat

Anjani raho ke rahi hai hum

Chhute na hatho se haath

Naya naya main hu nayi nayi tum

Yun hi na kho jaye raat

Anjani raho ke rahi hai hum

Chhute na hatho se haath

Jau jaha main saath chalo tum

Aao baho mein aao

Kumud gets up. Saras hugs Kumud from the back. Both hug each other. Kumud kisses him back.

Chand banu main or raat bano tum

Jyot banu main or deep bano tum

Kuch na kahu main kuch na suno tum

Aao baho mein aao

Chand banu main or raat bano tum

Both dance together.

Tumse hi tan hai tumse hi mann

Dil mein chhupa lo mujhe

Baho mein leke mere sanam

Mujhse chura lo mujhe

Tumse hi tan hai tumse hi mann

Dil mein chhupa lo mujhe

Baho mein leke mere sanam

Mujhse chura lo mujhe

Nind banu main or khwab bano tum

Aao baho mein aao

Raat banu main or chand bano tum

Deep banu main or jyot bano tum

Kuch na sunu main kuch na kaho tum

Aao baho mein aao

Saras puts her head on Kumud's lap.

Ho jab se basi ho aankho mein tum

Lagti hai duniya hasi

O main hu safar meri manzil tum

Tum jo nahi main nahi

Ho jab se basi ho aankho mein tum

Lagti hai duniya hasi

O main hu safar meri manzil tum

Tum jo nahi main nahi

Rang banu main maang bharo tum

Aao baho mein aao

Chand banu main or raat bano tum

Deep banu main or jyot bano tum

Kuch na sunu main kuch na kaho tum

Aao baho mein aao

Aao baho mein aao.

Danny & Kumari are spending time in their room.

Kumari: Your bro is just the opposite. You were shy before marriage & he is shy after marriage.

Danny: That is right. We sang the same song as when we were newly married.

The Desais shift to Delhi where Laxminandan and his family are staying.

Kumud & Saras are about to consummate. Suddenly they see the drawer opening. Saras finds the ring in his drawer. He feels giddy & faints seeing the ring shaking on its own.

Kumud: What happened Saras?

Everyone enters the room.

Laxminandan puts Saras's head on his lap & said, "Call the doctor."

Saras is admitted to the hospital for the checkup.

The doctor examines everything & said, "Nothing to worry. He is perfectly alright."

He then asks Saras, "Do you remember what sound you heard the last?"

Saras: I remember that tic tic sound. I felt that someone is hitting my head.

The doctor asks Kumud, "Did you hear any such sound?"

Kumud: No.

The doctor said, "Well, in that case, he has to be here for 4 days for observation."

Kumud decides to be with Saras in the hospital.

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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saras loves kumud like crazy.he even carries her pic to the exam hall.so funny.tape recorder scene where saras calls kumud's name many times n the reason he gives was so romantic n cute.kumud imagining to be with saras was romantic.vidyachathur is naughty n romantic with guniyal in this age also.when he plays the audio it was a donkey's voice.ha ha.but how did the audio change?did kumud change it?samud meeting near the train was so romantic.saras addressing her as the goddess of luv n the song sequence were romantic
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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When LN asked 4 dowry n it led to fight i got worried that the wedding got cancelled.But it was LN's prank.relieved.shocking that a lot of bad things happened like saras falling down from the horse,gatbhandan caught fire.but glad that they got married.puja room scene was emotional.Samud SR song was romantic.i'm surprised that danri r included in this FF.their scene was very cute.Shocking that strange things happened in their room n saras fainted.He is fine health wise.then what is the prob?now what are they going to do keeping saras there 4 observation?

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