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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow so good to know women in that era were allowed those liberties. I think in every era there are good and bad. but the era itself depends on the ratio of the good and bad. didn't know divorce existed then. well the way Chandra till now has always met Nandini in different faces it had reminded me of Hrithik character in Dhoom 2 but I don't want to compare Hrithik and Chandra as I feel Chandra is far better. Avantika did all with a selfish purpose in mind but for once she silenced all. she has to get the work done. so she has to manage it. I surely get a detailed description of step motherly treatment here
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Posted: 7 years ago
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yes people like Padma Avantika don't treat their staff like humans. they get used to ordering people around. they never think what will happen if the kingdom is lost. here it's good for Chandra. but just suppose it was an actual enemy in his place. he would have got all the inside news. such a lapse in security. they're like the royals in the French revolution. they should be beheaded in a guillotine just like then. I can well imagine them telling the poor people if they don't have bread they should eat cakes. no no you explained it well. I got the point. fighting own people is really the hardest. it takes a lot of patience perseverance and mental strength. yes Avantika is a cheapo so is Nalini. like mother like daughter. shameless woman. I love when Nalini taunts her. but she deserves worse karma. this isn't enough. only Nalini seems like her. Neela is like Nandini.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I'm not good. it's just that while reading I have so many thoughts. I remember similar situations in books/films . I just can't think why Nandini cares for these two still. they deserve to be dumped right away. why nand kept Nandini alive? must be for some selfish reason. if it doesn't ruin the future updates can you please tell me? oh I won't mind Nand getting stabbed here too. but an evil twin is a real bad idea. makes things too much complicated. Chandra must have heard and seen how cruel Avantika is to Nandini.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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oh I get it. none knows her by face. I get none can discuss it openly too. but the women can secretly teach her a lesson if they wish and they plan wisely.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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so it's clear Nalini knows Nandini care for Chandra. and it's more than a matter of standing for the right with him. I don't think Avantika vile words changed Nandini feeling for Chandra. I hope Nalini never gets Chandra. she should stay far away from him. you put Krishna loyalty for Chandra very well. it's beautiful.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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yes here the twins are polar opposite to each other
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Posted: 7 years ago
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yes I'm reading the story from a clean slate. thanks for mentioning the background. love Neela and Krishna.
Edited by 2filmy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful update 😳This Avantika is also cruel like nand 😔Nalini is so cheap 😡I didn't liked her 🤔But I loved Neela n Nandini bonding ❤️Loved to see Neela n Krishna loving each other More than that I loved how u gave a very good example of friendship via him n Chandra 👍🏼Never expected avantika to be Maasi of Nandini n not Mom 😲Update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Beautiful update 😳This Avantika is also cruel like nand 😔Nalini is so cheap 😡I didn't liked her 🤔But I loved Neela n Nandini bonding ❤️Loved to see Neela n Krishna loving each other More than that I loved how u gave a very good example of friendship via him n Chandra 👍🏼 Never expected avantika to be Maasi of Nandini n not Mom 😲Update soon 😊



Mansi 🤗
Hmm... Avantika... In one chapter, she was a ruthless Queen and a horrible StepMom. In the other chapter, she was a helpless mother having three grown up daughters and not married yet... So, the frustration shows up. Who knows, you might change your mindset later on Avantika 😉

Originally, my Neelambari was supposed to be a mute character (a mere mention of name in the story), but then when I started writing Nalini, Neelambari automatically sprang up to life, with her own sub-plot ! I am still questioning myself how she shaped up on my laptop 😃

@BOLD - I am using the characters, Promo scenes and a few other scenes of the Show, but i am building my own dialogs and story around the scenes.
Like, for example, the "Marriage or Revenge" Promo on the battlefield was used by the Show to show Nandini's hatred towards Chandra and vowing to kill him. Here, I have used it not for Revenge, but to show Nandini's Repentance - she regrets seeing her own people dying on both sides. Similarly, when blood falls on Nandini's forehead, both their reactions and dialogs are different on the Show, from the one given in my story.
Similarly, Avantika is not her Mother as seen in the Show; here, she is the StepMom. But looking at others review, I think it was a good twist 😊 Nalini, Neelambari, Krishnavardhan are all my imaginary characters who never made an appearance in the Show .
Edited by FrankPunch - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Sangeetha, waiting for the update

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