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Posted: 7 years ago
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As always, Beautiful Sangeetha! 👏 You achieved it again.⭐️⭐️
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The Tyrant queen and the men, convo gives you that tingling sensation... you actually start feeling her nastiness... and then further her being abusive with nandini, you know for confirmed that she is nasty, abusive monster in female body.

Nandini's self pondering and remorse is picturised beautifully by you... especially the langu of Avantika Vs. Nandini.

Beautiful drama unfold and building up interest for future plot... Nandini is a helpless pon at hands of Avantika, your heart goes out to her and you wonder what will Chandra do now.


Intriguing update, Jerry! Do keep writing and PM me.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: alanta

A relevation and a suspense at the end 😲 Beautiful presentation 👏

Res for detailed comments



Thank You, Alanta 🤗
More suspense to come in the upcoming chapter.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

As always, Beautiful Sangeetha! 👏 You achieved it again.⭐️⭐️

⭐️
The Tyrant queen and the men, convo gives you that tingling sensation... you actually start feeling her nastiness... and then further her being abusive with nandini, you know for confirmed that she is nasty, abusive monster in female body.

Nandini's self pondering and remorse is picturised beautifully by you... especially the langu of Avantika Vs. Nandini.

Beautiful drama unfold and building up interest for future plot... Nandini is a helpless pon at hands of Avantika, your heart goes out to her and you wonder what will Chandra do now.


Intriguing update, Jerry! Do keep writing and PM me.


Neha 🤗
Thank You... for such lovely words.

Over the next few chapters, I plan to unfold different shades of women of this era.

I have started with Avantika being an authoritative queen, a nasty stepmother, a helpless mother... few more shades of this woman will come to surface later.
Nandini, although a brave warrior, is caged by Father's love, Guru's orders, Mother's ambitions, duty towards her people etc. She is a woman absolute torn out of Love (between Father, Lover and the Kingdom).
Her sisters and others are coming through...


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Intriguing update Sangeetha! Great writing style!👏

Beautiful shades of women unfolded... I loved Neelambari and Nadini Bonding vs Chandra's concern for vardhan...

Already curious for further plot!


Congrats on such beautiful write up
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Posted: 7 years ago
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so sorry for the delay. I didn't want to read this in hurry and comment. so took a bit time. will comment on both the updates now. sincere apologies.
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the reactions were so expected. men are always ever ready to find faults in women and make her a scape goat for their failure. they just need an excuse to cover up their problems. seems it's the same case here too. so avantika stopped them. I'm reminded of a similar scene from Baahubali. Rani Shivagami replied the same way to a man who wanted to usurp the throne after the King died. she sat on the throne and punished him. Avantika shows them the positive side. she hit them where it hurt the most. she just spoke the truth. I'm in awe of Chandra s war skills. at times an arrogant person is needed to put egoistic men in place now she silenced them all. of course none can go against the King s order. now they changed their tunes. how convenient. she had the final word as expected. she's really not bothered at all about Nandini s health. she wants to make her fight anyway. she's treating her like her slave.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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vaid ji is Chandra right? he's using their nature of not caring for the staff against them. what a strategist. Poor Nandini is focused only on Avantika now. he needn't have worried at all. so she's her Maasi. not mom. she's manhandling her. Nandini has already realized the futility of the war but the power hungry Queen won't ever get it. if the people die then King is useless. Avantika forgot that there were many who joined Chandra and were fighting them. Nandini is so compassionate. I'm sure she's like her mom. I don't think she got this quality from her dad. now I understand how she knows so well about medicine. she really thinks from her heart and with a clear head. of course she's right. she's fighting her own. Avantika feels she fell for Chandra and taunted her ? sick. why is she still calling Chandra a commoner ? she knows he's a King. she thinks Nandini will obey her if she reminds her of her duties. just like she did with the courtiers now.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nandini explained so well. but it's futile. Avan only feels she's praising the enemy. wow so Nandini was also born a commoner. her dad went from barber to King. that's a great rise. he reminds me of Voldemort here. so power hungry. Nandini tells the truth but Avantika can't bear it. she shows her real face now. she wants her dead but her dad wanted her alive. Avantika shows Nandini her power. she only wants her selfish purpose served. she can do anything for it. now I know the royal couple are made for each other. perfect pair. she acts as if she's doing a favor on Nandini. strange why did the King make Avantika her mom in front of all. and who is her own daughter? where does she live? she has to live hidden right? can't meet he mom easily. so was Chandra there all along ? he must have heard all then ? I really wish Nandini gets free from this hell soon. no one loves her here. why does she love her dad still? the sooner she goes to Chandra the better for her.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nalini seems an empty vessel an airhead. she knows nothing of warfare I'm sure. so she wants to marry Chandra. does Nandini feel anything for him? else she wouldn't be shocked hearing his name. it's so usual for Chandra. hmm as I thought Nalini is cheap. why are there no dirty rumors about Nalini? normally this news spreads fast. she's even flaunting her habit. the veil helps her hide her identity? but still people would know her nature right? Avantika can't control her own daughter so shows all her power on her step daughter. even padmanand pampers her. wow Nalini silenced Avantika. what filthy language. she even back answers her. Avantika is dumbstruck. Nandini Neela are good Nalini is rotten. I just hate Nalini. I want her punished. she's hell bent to marry Chandra. I hope it never happens. she really has no filter in thoughts or words.

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