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Pratty11

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Posted: 7 years ago

#351

Sangeeta di you are such a brilliant writer! 👏

I never watched Chandra Nandani and so I don't know much but what I can say it was too too good 😃

I wish the CN forum was not dead and you could have posted it there for the regular viewers to read it also...

But plz keep up this good work and keep posting more like this for us to read as well 👍🏼

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#352

Wow Di

the first thing I noticed for this update is the length

This is a longer update than your usual ones

isn't it ?

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#353

Now the instant flash on anger on Rajmata face is interesting

Ok so now it is clear Rajmata knows Avantika and she is her bhabhi

what a dramatic turn of events

she knows very well how Avantika is and so is upset at this decision

before going further I want to say something

We often hear that parents have to pay for the sins of their parents

this part of the story shows us exactly that

It is so clear her that Nandini will be judged for her parents

People wll first assume that she will be just like her step mom

she has a difficult job to win over every one with her love

I know Chandra will support her always and be her strength

But this will be a difficult journey within the kingdom

Of course Chanakya did not understand the question

so he answered it in a normal way

He did not know that these 2 ladies know each other

Rajmata is upset both with the king and her son

she fear for Magadh once more and understandably so

Chanakya had thought that Rajmata will be happy with the war news

but on the contrary she was so angry

so now the flash back will start

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#354

So Nandini was a good luck charm for Nand ?

as his luck changed from her birth ?

Now I know why he wants to keep Nandini to himself

Nand considers her as his lady luck

this is also one of the reasons why he gave her the master key

as per him the master key is with his lady luck

so his treasure is completely safe as long as it is with her

this is also one of the reasons why he wanted her to fight

and made her the chief commander in the war

when lady luck is with you you will win every war

so many things are making sense now

I even feel Nandini was like a golden goose to Nand

It's like with her in his life he will get everything

why do I feel Chandra Dev Gupta is Chandra Gupt Maurya ?

You mentioned Nandini being born and then Chandra Dev being 3 years old

also Chandra Dev Gupta and Chandra Gupt Maurya

the second name is clearly derived from the fist with some changes

Nand really had started playing his game a long time back

He was too greedy and he played dirty too

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#355

Avantika was married so young ?

that is really so terrifying

an age which is meant to play and enjoy

was an age then when girls were married off

they did not have the sense not the understanding

so they did not know what was happening to them

and then they were burdened with responsibilities

instead of playing with dolls she has to do her wifely duties

I assume it was a 20+ years agee difference between them

Of course I understand how difficult it was for her now

she had such heavy responsibility on her weak shoulders

there was no one to guide her in the right way too

OK I want to know one more thing

how old was Nand the time he met Avantika ?

He already was married and had a daughter

So I assume he was in his mid 20s ? or more ?

The age difference between Nand Avantika must be less

than that of Avantika and her husband at that time ?

Also the Piplivan king must have had other wives ?

How come they did not help her of befriend her ?

they could have shown her the right way too

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#356

the son was her own right ?

she became a mother at 15 only ?

This is such a scary thought now

Of course the sly fox that Nand was

was waiting for such a chance to fulfill his goals

he must have observed that Avantika was the easiest target

it was very easy to manipulate and brain wash her

after all she was just a teenager and immature

how was he appointed in the palace ? as the barber ?

Pipli king father was not alive I assume ?

as if that was the case Nand could not enter so easily

some one should have warned Avantika about Nand

He also had a daughter she too had a son

but as you said she did not know this was immoral

there was no one to guide her and show her the right way

actually I think this was not love too

just infatuation that she thought was love

may be Nand was closer to her age and talked to her sweetly

so she had assumed that it was love

So Nand is also a lecher as he touched Avantika often

I feel so bad for Avantika here

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#357

I understand the situation of the courtiers too

they too could not do anything as nothing was in their hands

neither could they have done anything to Nand

She was just petty jealous of the power the king had

I guess being the sister of a king she was a spoiled brat too

Wow so Nand manipulated her to kill her husband

that was her first sin that no one knew about

I feel for her but I can't sympathise with a murderer sorry

Nand just told her what she wanted to hear

he was appeasing and flattering her ego in a way

Suryadev seems to be such a good king

He took on all the responsibilities so well

Pity his sister did not learn anything from him

I think the courtiers made a mistake here

they should have informed him about Nand Avantika

it should have been nipped in the bud itself

a stitch in time saves nine and it is proved here

but they remained silent as Surya Dev was in mouning

Even Moora was too good a queen

both the children got each other as play mates

but Surya was oblivious of the fox Nand

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#358

Of course Avantika the pampered spoiled brat that she was once

she lost all the privileges that she used to enjoy earlier

sorry but I can't sympathise with a murderer

she took a life so good that all the colors went from her life

she is thinking of what all she lost

did she ever think of the kingdom that lost its king ?

or the baby who lost his dad for his mom ?

she deserves to be royally ignored now

for once she should know how it feels to be ignored

Of course Nand followed here here with his sinister plans

he gave her everything that she craved

he knew her very well so manipulated her too

he knew exactly how to make her dance to his tunes

he had her wrapped around his finger in a short time

she just was a mere puppet for him

and a ladder or a stepping stone to his success

her body had its own urges I can imagine

Nand just increased them and took advantage of it

but there must have been spies in the palace

could Surya Dev do nothing at all ?

Nand was after all an outsider

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#359

sorry Di

I will review this update in parts

surprise tests are going on now

so it will take a bit time

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Fantastic update 👏I loved the way u gave a detailed description of how Avantika the young Queen became a Tyrant Queen unwilling...Now I understood why she was so fearing about Nand...That Nand is really very cheap...Now how much cheapness he will show 😡
He is going to get downright cheap !

But what about Sunanda n Nandini? What happened to Moora n her unborn child n Chandra?

Coming coming. Actually, the life from Avantika's eyes only got too long an update. So, i thought of covering Nandini from another POV.
Moora and her child also will come later.

Now she got to know Chandra being her own blood n the rightful heir to the kingdom

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