The Eyes You Saw - Chapter 39 and 40 on Page 90 - Page 13

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

"Thodi Mischievous Thodi Serious" that's what I am!

Mischief part you saw already 😉 on Christmas eve!😆

But the diaries of a young girl is a beautiful idea... My daughter had long time back suggested it, saying my life story is like a film story.

Thanks for suggesting it.

Merry Christmas everybody.Adding the link of our Christmas party for anybody who wishes to see our mischief.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-3/4938880/merry-christmas-everybody-barnie-priyu-neha-wish-the-if-world

Originally posted by: Asyalover

lol😆 I am not commenting person but yours and Ashley's stories had mad me comment. this past few days i have been on Ashley's post find her stories and the ones she read. therefore i read some as well cause i love revenge, possessive, romantic, antsy, fri-nemies, hate/love, fantasy, supernatural or rivalry/secret love/marriage concepts type of stories.

i will wait for your this fanfic update and do pm me to recommend any long ff/ss on the concept i mentioned or which you find interesting.

I would like to recommend you 2 stories too which i totally love is on:

Asad & Zoya -> https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4712086/asya-ff-mohabbatein-part-18-updated-pg-140-20-12-16

Mugdha & Rajat https://www.wattpad.com/story/5433945-prithvi-vol-1

⭐️MERRY CHRISTMAS⭐️

Originally posted by: alanta

Thank you for this long update. This was a beautifully woven chapter, which was precisely written bringing out the shades of the characters with a brilliant narration 👏

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Wonderful chapter Sangeetha😊

The conversation between Nandini and lopamudra was interesting⭐️

The scene between Nandini and vaidji was nice❤️

Beautifully written chapter Loved how u gave importance to each n every character ❤️Though Nandini should know the truth but felt bad for her too as he is the one who gave her all the love from the time she is born n in return she had to see this day 😔😭Though short ChanDni scene was sweet Nandini telling Chandra as husband to Lopa 😛Akhir sach aahigaya zubaan pe 😉Wondering what will happen next

Originally posted by: JanakNandini

I really love this story.Perhaps more than Devils trap.You can ask me the reason ? Because you have potrayed different colors of all characters.Till now We dont know what will happen next.Expecting lots of twists and turns.

I have to appericiate your effort to bring out a story.That too when forum is dead.. .Kudos.Chandra and Nandini are always magical.Forget plus and minus. IF someday Suddenly if myself or you going to publish some book I would say Chandra and Nandini sowed the inspiration for us.I discovered my writing passion only here and so is you.

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Lopamudra really loves Nandini a lot

She is just a mere servant but the way she cares for her and is so concerned for her shows her deep feelings for Nandini

They are much more than just mistress and servant as Nandini treats her with the respect she deserves

Such relationships are very warm and such people can do anything for the person they love

I understand the point you made very well here

however much we struggle ourselves we never want our loved ones to have the same fate

we cannot see them struggle like us but our siblings learn from us so pick up some of our traits

Just one line - "I cant see her like this Lopa. She can't sacrifice her love for us" - and you have understood the underlying expression perfectly. 👏

You are so matured for your age, Priyu. You understand relationships well. I guess your mother has a strong influence on you, although I am not sure if you are your father's favourite 😉

It's so easy to see how fickle minded and shallow Nalini is so even I feel she will forget Chandra the minute she sees a more handsome person

Nalini just goes by the outer beauty and believes in the use and throw policy

Its part of the pampered princess upbringing that Nalini had, while she was born with 8 vile brothers (who were very much like their cruel father) and 2 sensitive and caring sisters unlike her. Nalini never thought that she would face a day like this - being in exile. And so, the old habits die hard.

But it's touching to see the subtle sadness in Nandini as it hints her deep feelings for Chandra

Wow, you brought one more feeling to that line - Care... 👏

Fear, Concern and Hope... I had applied these feelings to that sentence. Nalini told her that she had spoken to Chandra and he thought it was Nandini.

Nandini feared "Now he will not have a good opinion about me". She doesn't want Chandra having a wrong opinion about her.

She also doesn't want Chandra to trouble himself - thinking that he has fallen for a wrong woman. She was concerned about his feelings too.

So when Lopa says "Nalini will change her mind once she spots a new good looking man" she gets Hope. If Nalini changes her mind, Nandini will be guilt-free.

You've added Care - She thinks "once Nalini stops going to Chandra, Chandra's life will not be troubled anymore". Amazing...

As Neha put it in her comments "The crux of the incident, beauty of a piece of writing is when it has different colors to it." You've added one more shade darling. Thank you.

I think Avantika herself was very ambitious so she didn't like sensitive Neela and ignored her always

Avantika seems to be a person who believes that emotions make you weak and a loser

I think she left Neela with Nandini as she had understood that they both are similar so will bond well

or she just wanted to ignore them both so thought they will be well occupied between themselves

Maybe Avantika doesn't complain about how Neela grew up as she is her own daughter not a step one

@BOLD - Your assessment of Avantika is absolutely right.

Nalini was an extrovert child so she was Avantika favorite. she pampered Nalini. Nalini saw the ways of her mother and imitated her so became like her now rather a worse version of Avantika. Avantika had indulged Nalini then but regretting it now when it's too late.

Children pick up from their parents. Parents are their initial role models. Nalini's genes itself is bad. What to do 😆

Originally posted by: 2filmy

It's so endearing to see Lopamudra fierce protectiveness for Nandini. She was so angry about Avantika comment of selling Nandini in the slave market.

This was Lopa's chapter through and through.

This chapter dealt with Lopamudra's love, gentle protective and sacrificing nature. But also her limitations of being a servant during the imperial times. Even if the royal people give them liberties, you will never know when they will withdraw... so, the servants will always be on their guard due to fear of being punished. Lopa is working for one such tyrannical group.

Her fear and hesitation to speak boldly during such imperial times, is thus justified.

I wonder what Avantika reaction will be if any one tried to do such a thing with Nalini.

karma will hit her very soon. If it doesnt, remind me 😆

I just loved the confidence with which Nandini replied Lopa her question about Chandra treating her as a slave. She knows him so less still analyzed his character so well.

So true, considering that she had not spent time with him at all as his wife. I guess thats a woman's instincts of her chosen man 😉 and also a judgement of a person by a Princess. Royalties are well trained to analyse and pass justice on their subjects.

Finally I see a small streak of rebellion in her as she wished she had not waited for Padma approval

She is questioning her own actions though weakly and for once a normal girl is thinking instead of a princess

This was a chapter for Nandini's self introspection about the life she thought she had lived so far and after the reality hits. She is not Daddy's little girl anymore. She is thinking from the angle of a daughter, as well as a Princess. As a Princess in Chapter 3 and 4, she realised that her father has been a tyrant, a people's dictator. This chapter she has realised that he is a selfish and extremely greedy father.

Vaid heard all so now he knows why she wanted him to fight her brother and he also knows that she was fully unaware about her father's conspiracy to kill him . It must have felt so good to hear her speak about him so candidly. she was unaware about his presence so she was fully honest here. he actually knew what she thought of him. what were his reasons to leave her to face her own fate? Chanakya s orders? or he wanted Nandini to see her father's true face?

Such a keen observer you are.

@BOLD - Hmm... Dont want to break the egg now 😉.

I don't think she really knows Chandra yet but I don't blame her for it too. I think people know she is innocent so they aren't angry at her. He can still marry her. I agree with her reason of Avantika agreeing to a truce. She can only do it for Nalini. Prince Malayketu will help them in the war if Nandini marries him?

Malayketu forces are the only ally that she has got. This is war alliance now.

But earlier, Padmanand had announced her marriage to Malay (when he was rejecting Chandra as common blood in the Swayamvar). I think that was mentioned in the 3rd chapter.

Poor Nandini. at this time she can't think that Chandra didn't kill her as he couldn't. It's very natural for her to be so hopeless and pessimistic now. anyone else in her place would have lost her mind fully.

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Beautifully written chapter Loved how u gave importance to each n every character ❤️

Ooh, you noticed girl ! Yes, I have been doing character building along with story building, every chapter.

1st Chapter was all Chandra,

2nd Chapter was all Nandini,

3rd Chapter was a sketch on Padmanand and Chandu-Nandu romance

4th Chapter was all about Avantika and her Army Men,

5th Chapter was dedicated to Sisters Nalini and Neela

6th Chapter was dedicated to Lopa and Treasures

7th Chapter will be for your favourite Malayketu 😉

Though Nandini should know the truth but felt bad for her too as he is the one who gave her all the love from the time she is born n in return she had to see this day 😔😭

yes, it hurts badly

Though short ChanDni scene was sweet Nandini telling Chandra as husband to Lopa 😛Akhir sach aahigaya zubaan pe 😉

They say the light in the lamp flickers brighter, when its about to be extinguished... Even though he is her enemy, he is after all, her husband. She has decided to die. If she won't his name to her lips now, when else will she take it? 😳

I will try to cover Chandu-Nandu romance somewhere in detail... I know I have to. But war time doesn't seem to be the time for romance to be covered in detail. Hence, covering in snippets.

Wondering what will happen next