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sonalgupta2004 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
But I m loving it
All bhabhi and Nanad talks and masti
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thats right Sonal
I want to change things up a bit from where there is unmistakable sexual attraction between the leads from the first chapter itself to a situation where they wake up and realize one morning well into their married life



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Posted: 7 years ago
I guess, teeku thinks Harit is also getting married to her for Chandan. So she is not thinking beyond Chandan.
Nisha, we clearly understood Teeku has zero expectations from this marriage, but what about Harit?
Can you please give us an insight of Harit's thought about Avantika? Does he feel angry or jealous whenever Avantika keeps taking Chandan's name in there one line conversation? Please, please give us an update on this.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Tikku is not thinking about Hard and Rock at all
And in last chapter he declared not having time for honeymoon
The story is becoming more and more interesting
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Posted: 7 years ago
Meeta-Teeku relationship is so sweet ! Love it !
The talk'is not going so well. She is thinking only about Chandan. When the thinking shifts to his Chachu, then Teeku will start giggling !!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nisha ... apparam enna achu ???
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Posted: 7 years ago

Paint of love

The same disquiet and restlessness was in the air at Bareilly also. Harit was planning to work clear until the day before the wedding.

The Vaidyas were not big on party for the sake of partying. There was no bachelors party for any of the boys, nor was there a "cocktail party since the Vaidyas did not drink alcohol. Lakshmi had hosted a keertan/ladies sangeet night in the front lawn, that turned into a women only jagraata with men going to their rooms to sleep as early at 10 PM.

The Vaidyas were a traditional simple non pretentious family. Losing Hemant had caused them to mellow further

Sita Ram was easily one of the most influential men in Bareilly but he wore his position and power very simply. He would stay up late hours in case he was told by the guard at the gate that someone was in dire need of legal assistance

Everyone realized Chandan was the big factor in the alliance but no one said anything aloud lest they hurt the other person

The couples spoke privately with each other on the topic

Chandan had gotten worse the last couple weeks after Avantika's sighting

He had cried inconsolably the day after the engagement

Harshal had spoken to the principal at the school Gauri and Garima were to enroll Chandan, but he had thrown such a fit on the first day all options to send him to school before the wedding were off

Some took it as post traumatic stress after losing his parents, some took it as post traumatic stress as being yanked away from Avantika

"Seedhiyon ke paas jo suite hai who deejiye phir aap Harit ko Lakshmi was firm with the contractor

"Auntyjee paint sookh jaaye to aap kal samaan lagwa lein

"Beta 5 din mein shaadi hai, aapko tab se kaha Harshal ke babuji ne Lakshmi was not happy

Suman was heading up the stairs

"Kya hua Ma, aap jaayen wheezing shuru ho jaayega aapko

"yeh keh rahe hain, sealant aaj laga hai, paint kal lagega to 4 din mein kaise sookhega?

"Bhayya aapko Babuji ne kaha na? Suman was a little more patient

"Ab shaadi hogi aisa to nahi bataye rahe

"Umm.. aapse poochhkar tay nahi kar paayenge bhayya... aap please woh ya to doosri taraf jo suite hai woh sahi kar deejiye?

"Arey nahi, odhar to bohutahee kaam baaqi hai he grinned revealing paan stained teeth

"Tch

"Ma aap andar jaayen

"Harit ke suite mein ek uska daftar hai, ek kamra saalon se band hai, ek unka bedroom hai"

"Haan to Avantika ko unke saath rehna hai na, waha unke room mein reh lengi

"Ab dono mein aapas mein koi moh to hamey maloom nahi pada Lakshmi mumbled sadly

Suman could not bring herself to lie

"Amma... who Dilli ki hain, aur yeh London padhey hain, apne aap mel ho jaayega aap chinta na karen she hugged Lakshmi

"Rishabh ne kal kaha unke phone ko dekha usme kahin Avantika ke saath baat cheet (texting) nahi lagi

"Amma... Rishabh bhi bina baat ke na Suman was frustrated "Hum baat karenge aapko zaroor galat kaha hoga she made an excuse on behalf of her husband

Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yikes!!! The parental units are having upset stomachs about this relationship though it is arranged...
Delightful updates Nisha!!! Thank you!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thats right Sonal

I want to change things up a bit from where there is unmistakable sexual attraction between the leads from the first chapter itself to a situation where they wake up and realize one morning well into their married life





Getting excited, Nisha!
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Posted: 7 years ago
I hope the next one has both of them together in space and time

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