Arshi SS : Back In Time... Chapter 5 is up ! (24-May-2018)

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Reviving this FF after a long hiatus. The story starts from the point where Arnav finds Khushi's suicide note .. Read on ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter Two


For only the second time in his life, Arnav Singh Raizada was numb. All he could see was the light outside the operation theater indicating that someone was fighting for life. Every sight around him was a blur. Every sound was muffled. Inside the OT, Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada was fighting for her life. He hoped she was fighting for her life. She was a fighter. Always ready to take on adversity. But only sometime back she had been ready to give away her life. But he still hoped she would fight on..

He had no recollection of the events since Khushi's hands had brushed his and she had fallen down. The man standing next to him, however, did. Akash Singh Raizada had been to his in laws' place to get an important signature from his brother when he saw the said brother darting like bullet shouting Khushi's name. He followed his brother only to hear a loud thud seconds later and see his sister in law lying in a pool of blood. He had seen the ashen look on his brother's face who had to be literally heralded into the ambulance to rush Khushi to hospital. Doctors had immediately called in for operation. They were in mortal peril. God forbid if something happened to ASR's wife, they could all say goodbye to their careers.

The entire Gupta and Raizada clan had reached in no time and there was a range of flow of emotions from silent sobs of Naniji, to truck loads of tears from Payal and Anjali and constant "Hai Re Nand Kishore" of Buaji.

Akash was, however, not worried about any of these. His single focus was the stoic silence of Arnav Singh Raizada - volcano waiting to erupt.

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After what seemed like eternity, the OT lights went off and doctor appeared. His update : multiple fractures , internal injuries, a broken back and a severe head injury. Mrs Raizada was critical and currently oscillating in and out of coma.

The doctor's update did nothing to change Arnav's demeanour. He remained unmoved, silent, stone-like, sans expression.

He wanted to pray, he could not. Because she has one said - " Jis din aap ko devi maiya par vishwas hoga, us din afsos hum wahan nahi honge". He could not believe in Devi Maiya now. What if KKGSR decided to fulfill her prophecy ??

So, he sat in same position, with the same expression for 24 hours, while Anjali fussed over him, Akash cajoled him, Buaji coaxed him, but Arnav remained void of any emotion.


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Some 20 Hours Later ...

There was a darkness that seemed to engulf her.. like she could not see, could not hear, could not feel anything. And then there was .. light !

She saw her Amma, her Babuji ... she hadn't seen them since she was eight. They were smiling at her. But then she saw her Babuji .. Shashi Gupta .. the man who had loved her, nurtured her, made her the woman she was and just like scenes from her life began to play in her mind...

Bauji teaching her to make jalebi... babuji dancing at jiji's wedding.. Khushi falling into the arms of Arnav Singh Raizada.. jiji's broken marriage... the goons... the saviour... Delhi.. meeting her nemesis again in Delhi... realising her new boss is the same man ...

"Maine kaha tha na mera naam Arnav Singh Raizada hai... aur mein apni kismat khud likhta hoon.. aur sirf apni nahin auron ki kismat bhi main hi likhta hoon".

"Kya karoon tumhra saath? tumhein bakwaas karne ke liye bacha loon... ya chhod doon?"

"aapke bachane se humein girna zyada pasand hai"

"Bhul gaya tha main girna to tumhrai fitrat mein hai".. said Raizada as he let her fall from the first floor of his office

With that KKGSR opened her eyes ...



Edited by quickbrownfox - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting. Please continue soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter Three
Though Arnav Singh Raizada had virtues equal to his vices... patience was definitely not one of them. He had rushed in to the ICU the moment doctor had said - "Mrs Raizada is conscious".. He did not wait to hear the rest of the statement. If he had, he would have been better prepared for the storm that was brewing inside the ICU..

(All dialogues are in English henceforth. Hindi Dialogues are used only if they are directly from the show)

"You? What are you doing here? Wasn't it enough that you let me fall from such a height.. that you have now come to trouble me in the hospital also? What do you think of yourself? I dont want to see your face. Mr Raizada.. you can leave" .. with this blast Khushi seemed to lose her consciousness again and the several monitors around her started beeping abnormally indicating cause for alarm...

The medical staff rushed in and set to administer some injections .. gauging the various monitors.. with the doctor shouting instructions at nurses...

At the end of a chaotic 15 minutes, the situation seemed to be under control.. Khushi had been sedated.. her BP had been normalised and her husband had been ushered out of the ICU.

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" Mrs Raizada is under extreme stress. She has had a severe head injury. Now what is the exact impact of these injuries can be known only once she is awake. With what just happened inside, my guess is she is not too keen on meeting Mr Raizada. So i'd suggest once she is awake.. someone very close to her... someone who can keep her calm should meet her and try to talk to her...she is still very unstable and we cannot afford a repeat of this episode"

If any other man had asked Arnav to not meet Khushi, he would have punched him square in the face. But this was Dr Sumit Khandelwal... supposedly the best man in this hospital to save his wife...

So our angry young man could only say " Ok. Then let Payal meet her."

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Dr Sumit Khandelwal was in charge of this extremely critical case. At the age of just 30, with just few years of practice behind him, he had attained decent credibility in the medical circles. He had seen a fair share of lifeless patients in OTs. He had gone about treating them with his most professional demeanor . Never ever had he felt sorry, or sad if the patient was sinking or happy if the patient recovered. Never ever had any patient been able to arouse any emotion in him... then why looking at this lifeless girl made his heart constrict.. why , for the first time, his hands shook while he performed surgery... why did he feel it was important for him to save this young girl with the most cherubic face..

He sat in his office thinking all of this when the nurse informed him that Khushi had regained consciousness.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Seems like khushi has lost some memory
Now this dr too?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great stuff! I'm guessing Khushi had a partial memory loss. She's referring to tht office incident where Arnav let her fall.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Poor thing. It will be a long road to healing. She should have been stronger than that though and not tried to kill herself.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh oh...I think Khushi lost partial memory and is linking this fall to the office fall!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is alovely story...pls continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kushi lost memory and blasted on arnav.
Nice update. Pls pm me whenever you update.

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