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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

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+ 29

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

A splendid display of pathos in bonding and separation. A very well written chapter Shree .

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Anu

@SenAnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Awhh this was so beautiful !!!!!!!!! *Tears and Joy together*

This was a perfectly accurate description of what must have happened I believe truly and you put it out so well!!!!

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Fantastic chapter Shreya

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
The scenes were soo beautifully handled! Loved them! <3

Thank you Pro! 😳

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: _Meena_
awesome job

Thanks Meenz 🤗

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: SilverBell
Beautifully Written.

Thank you Nicita :)

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..
God, I hate you Shre, how could you write something so beautiful and yet so tragic? 😭😭
Hahahahahaha I am not that great, just stroke of inspiration. Thanks JanuMa 🤗

You have delved into Urmila's thoughts so perfect. I loved her strength in the face of Lakshman's misery, and I loved her gentle guidance to her sisters. You have portrayed her pain at the separation of Sita Ma so well, and I loved how in the end, Rama bade Lakshman to go to Urmila, because she too had lost someone very close to her.

Thanks a ton! 🤗 Glad you liked it 😳

The memory of Sita and Urmila was lovely. I could imagine it so well.

Thanks again Mama Bear 😉

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-
Awesome update!!
continue soonish

*coughs and mumbles about sooner updates*

Thanks Aishu! 😳

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Viswasruti
A splendid display of pathos in bonding and separation. A very well written chapter Shree .

Thank you so very much, Madhuri! I am glad you liked it! :)

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: SenAnu
Awhh this was so beautiful !!!!!!!!! *Tears and Joy together*
This was a perfectly accurate description of what must have happened I believe truly and you put it out so well!!!!

Anudoll! 🤗

Aww, thank you so much my kiddo! :)

Much love ❤️