My Intense Moments with ARSHI-'Love ME Forever'Teaser#2 on p

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❤️Here it is all about...❤️
My Most Intense Moments with Arshi- Love ME Forever

I am bit apprehensive about this one. First it is my very first Short story...since who have read my work know, I don't know how to do short. In my head it is very intense, so just hoping, from paper to your hearts it would come out as intense.

To move ahead in life and embrace her future, she would have to go back and revisit the past.
Dilemma would strike again...Who would she choose this time?
The one who has promised to love her forever...
Or the one, she had promised to love forever...

Love ME Forever
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Ok Guys!
You all have been always very kind to me and my ideas. So bear with me. I have been plagued with this idea and would love to bring it out on paper one of these days. Yes, I am still completing this other fiction "BOUND By BLACKMAIL" and this weekend, I would post the next part also.

But the idea for this fiction "Love ME Forever" came over on July 4th when due to the fireworks, I couldn't sleep a wink. Ever since this idea has been intensifying in my head and I am so tempted to write this one.
It is not going to be a long fiction like my other two i;e; Breech of Vows and Bound By Blackmail. With this one, I might go for 10 parts maybe, unless I go crazy with idea once again...😆

Over next three days...I would be posting very small teasers...let me know if you like it and if you would like me to continue--
I am not giving any synopsis for this one...This one is going to be complete surprise except the teasers of course...😉


TEASER NO- 1

"What are you going to do, my Son?" Shashi Gupta asked, staring at the tensed back of the man who was looking out of the window, staring at far horizon, trying to soak in the last of the Sun rays on this chilly evening. Evening that had become ever chillier since his estranged daughter's last phone call.
"Arnav?" He called again and the man in question turned towards in his direction to face him. Arnav gave a rueful smile towards the gentleman and nodded. " Don't worry, Uncle, I am not going to fall apart because your daughter has grown up at last and now wants to finish the charade of our marriage."

"Oh! Arnav. Beta." Shashi Gupta shook his head in misery and looked towards his son-in-law with sad expressions and said." Don't forget Son, she had love you forever."
Arnav picked the picture of young lady in question from the mantle and stared at her smiling face, caressing her with his eyes. A hollow laughter came out of his throat as it almost choked him and he said. " I know Sir. Don't I know that? It was me who couldn't promise her "forever." Saying this, he again turned to look out of the window and recalled this last conversation with his wife where she asked him with unwavering surety. " I want divorce Arnav. I have found somebody who would love me forever."

Ah! Isn't that he always wanted for her..."Forever"
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Teaser No 2-

"What did he say?" Shyam's tone was solemn as he asked the question on which depended most crucial decision of his life.
"He agreed." Khushi whispered back and tried to hold together her shaking hands under the table.

Next words, both Shyam and her spoke at the same time, where he said in a hopeful tone. " Well that's good."
She said in a trembling one. " But."
Her " but" got Shyam's attention first as he prompted. " But?" And when he noticed that this phone call had probably taken more out of her than either of them had expected, he asked more sharply. " Does he want something from you in return?" "Does he still love you?"

Khushi almost laughed at that because Shyam's concern was so ridiculous, but she was more upset at herself, for her bitterness was still raw somewhere, even after four years of separation from her husband. Bitterness that she converted into a mocking tone as she informed Shyam. " Arnav Singh Raizada never loved me."
Here she said those words and was still alive.
There was a time when she thought she would die without his love.
His mild affection to her heart stopping deep devotion was never a match to begin with and yet she had married him in a hope he would return back that love one day, Even an iota of his love would have been enough for her. But even that was asking for too much from mighty Arnav Singh Raizada.
The only ground they ever matched was passion.
Where passion was important in their married life, it was the hope for his love that was her sustenance.
And the day he exhausted that hope for her, she almost died with grief.

So yes, Arnav Singh Raizada never loved her.

Hoping for forever was a long time, he couldn't even love her for those six month of their marriage when they were together.
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So, let me know who is interested.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting concept so would lov to read
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Teaser No 2-

"What did he say?" Shyam's tone was solemn as he asked the question on which depended most crucial decision of his life.
"He agreed." Khushi whispered back and tried to hold together her shaking hands under the table.

Next words, both Shyam and her spoke at the same time, where he said in a hopeful tone. " Well that's good."
She said in a trembling one. " But."
Her " but" got Shyam's attention first as he prompted. " But?" And when he noticed that this phone call had probably taken more out of her than either of them had expected, he asked more sharply. " Does he want something from you in return?" "Does he still love you?"

Khushi almost laughed at that because Shyam's concern was so ridiculous, but she was more upset at herself, for her bitterness was still raw somewhere, even after four years of separation from her husband. Bitterness that she converted into a mocking tone as she informed Shyam. " Arnav Singh Raizada never loved me."
Here she said those words and was still alive.
There was a time when she thought she would die without his love.
His mild affection to her heart stopping deep devotion was never a match to begin with and yet she had married him in a hope he would return back that love one day, Even an iota of his love would have been enough for her. But even that was asking for too much from mighty Arnav Singh Raizada.
The only ground they ever matched was passion.
Where passion was important in their married life, it was the hope for his love that was her sustenance.
And the day he exhausted that hope for her, she almost died with grief.

So yes, Arnav Singh Raizada never loved her.

Hoping for forever was a long time, he couldn't even love her for those six month of their marriage when they were together.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love to read your fiction, keep it coming
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The second teaser was also superb yar
looking forward to read this
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Would really love to read this story, please do continue

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