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Part 2

It's been about an hour since they have been driving constantly, having smiles on both of their faces. There is a complete silence in the jeep, yet, the silence is not an awkward one, there is some satisfaction for both Rajveer and Naina, in that silence.

They have been stealing glances at each other constantly, but none of them are ready to utter a single word. Maybe they want to enjoy this moment.

Today, there is a different type of glow on both of their faces. Even though the whole army is after them, still they are not scared. Why should they be scared? They are together, finally! They will face all the difficulties and challenges together. Their love is their biggest strength, so why be scared?

They have been through many difficulties and their love was tested at every step. Their love was questioned by many people, but what happened at the end? Their love won, because it is a true love that everyone dreams about!

It is now at a point where both of them are dying to say something, but none of them have the courage to utter a single word. Rajveer looks at Naina from the corner of his eyes and finds Naina staring at him. Naina quickly looks the other way and a smile creeps on Rajveer's lips.

He thinks of something and his smile gets wider. Purposely, he stops the jeep with a jerk with leads Naina to fall on his lap. She holds him by his shoulders for support while her eyes are closed out of fear. Rajveer puts his arms around her waist to save her from falling anywhere else. His smile gets wider when he sees Naina's eyes tightly closed out of fear.

Moving his lips near her right ear, he blows some air. A shiver goes through Naina's body and it succeeds in making her heart to skip a beat. Naina immediately opens her eyes and looks towards Rajveer. Her heartbeat picks up pace when she finds herself this close to Rajveer. They lock eyes immediately. Naina can see unconditional love for herself in his eyes. How lucky she is feeling right now to be with him.

She sees him smiling and her heart skips a beat. this is the most beautiful smile she has ever seen. Naina can also see some very well known desires in his eyes which causes her to lower her eyes out of shyness. Realising their closeness, Naina loses her grip on his shoulders and tries to move, but, Rajveer makes his grip tight around her waist, as a sign of not wanting to let her go.

She looks back up in his eyes and gives him a questioning look. When she sees his smile getting wider, this is when she finds out that he did all this on purpose, to bring her closer. Her heartbeat picks up pace while his smile does not leave his face. Naina's cheeks turns red out of shyness.

"ye aap kya kar rahe hain?"

questions Naina, whispering

Rajveer knows exactly what she is talking about but he pretends to act unknown. He tries his best to hide his smile.

"Mein? Kya kar raha hoon mein?"

he asks her, trying to act innocent.

Naina looks at his hand which is near her waist and through her eyes, she signals him to look towards his hands. Rajveer follows her vision. A smile creeps on his lips when he finds out where Naina is pointing, she is pointing towards her waist.

"Kya?"

he asks her, confusingly.

Naina does not have the courage to tell him to move his arms that are around her waist. She cannot tell him what she is feeling and what amazing things his touch is doing inside her body. She feels shivers in her entire body.

Rajveer looks at her and smiles at her vulnerability. His Cadet Singh who is always bold, and today, she is not able to tell him a simple thing? Wow! Interesting! This is going to be so much fun!

Rajveer again moves his lips near her right ear.

"Kya hua Cadet Naina ah Singh? Wase toh aap itna bold act karti ho or aaj itna sharma rahi ho?"

says Rajveer, huskily.

Naina's heart skips a beat and her cheeks turns more red (if this was even possible). She looks up at him and finds him smiling. This is when she realises that he is teasing her because he knows her condition pretty well.

She blushes and a smile creeps on her lips. As soon as she is about to say something, a gunshot is heard. Rajveer immediately leaves her and she sits up straight. They both look at each other in fear. Are they caught? Is this really the end? No, this cannot be it.

Rajveer carefully opens the door to get out of the jeep, to see, when Naina holds his left hand. He looks towards her and notices fear in her eyes, fear of losing him.

"Sir, please aap kahin mut jaiye"

requests Naina, with fear.

Her voice starts shaking and it reflects her pain. She has come this far with him and she will not back off. She will not let him face all this alone. She will always be with him, like his support .

Naina's eyes starts brimming with tears. Just the thought of losing him makes her want to cry out loud. Rajveer is not able to see tears in her eyes. Extending his right hand towards her face, he wipes her tears. Naina shuts her eyes, feeling his touch.

"Mein yahan hi hoon Naina! Mein kahin nahi ja raha hoon!"

says Rajveer, cupping her right cheek.

He ensures her that he is here with her, always, no matter what happens! A tear drops from Naina's eyes and lands on his right hand that is still on her cheek. He first looks towards that tear and then towards Naina. Rajveer moves his head from left to right to left, as a sign of warning her not to cry, ever.

"Naina, mein kuch bhi bardasht kar sakta hoon lekin apni Naina ki nainoo mein ansu bardasht nahi kar sakta!"

says Rajveer, wiping that tear off.

Naina opens her eyes immediately and a smile appears on her lips, a satisfactory smile which ensures Rajveer that she is now fine! Naina leaves his hand, the one she was holing, as a sign of giving him permission to go. Rajveer smiles at this and takes his hand off from her right cheek.

Carefully, he gets out of the jeep with a gun in his hand. Looking around, he points his gun ahead of him. He start taking baby steps towards a tree as he notices something extremely weird. Carefully, his gun pointed towards the tree, he reaches in front of the tree.

Moving slowly and carefully, Rajveer looks behind the tree and finds no one there. Suddenly, he hears another sound of a gunshot which causes him to turn around immediately.

As soon as he turns around, he finds a man laying on the ground, bleeding. This terrifies Rajveer and he wonders who shot this man. He checks the man and finds him dead. Rajveer looks up and finds Naina standing there with a gun in her hand, pointed towards the dead man.

Rajveer gets shocked. The first thought that comes to his mind is Naina's wellbeing and safety. He immediately rushes towards Naina. He holds her by her shoulders and checks her out.

"Naina tum theek ho na?"

asks Rajveer, worriedly.

"Tumhe kahin lagi toh nahi?"

Naina drops her gun and immediately throws herself in his arms. Rajveer hugs her back with the same intensity. Suddenly, he feels his shirt getting wet as he hears Naina's sobs.

"Aap theek toh haina sir?"

asks Naina, between her sobs.

It breaks his heart into million pieces to see her crying like this. She does not care about her safety, but she cares about him. How much can this women love him? Does he really deserve this?

Rajveer starts patting her hair, as a sign of telling her to calm down.

"Ssshhh Naina! Mein bilkul theek hoon!"

says Rajveer.

After hearing this, Naina calms down a little, but she is not ready to leave him. She tightens the hug while Rajveer reciprocates with the same intensity. They stay like this for couple of minutes.

Finally, they break the hug after few minutes. Rajveer looks at Naina and holds her right hand with his left one and with his other hand, he points it towards a route that leads towards a forest.

"Naina ab hum jungle ke raaste se jaiyege!"

informs Rajveer.

Naina looks towards the route where he is pointing and then she looks back at him.

"Lekin kyun sir? Hamaray paas toh jeep hai na?"

asks Naina, confusingly.

"Agar hum jeep se gayye toh wo log hum tak bohut asani se pohonch sakte hain issi liye..."

explains Rajveer, but gets interrupted by Naina.

"Issi liye hum Jungle ke raaste se jayege takke wo log hum tak itni asani se poohhnch na paye!"

Naina completes his unsaid words.

A smile creeps on Rajveer's lips after hearing Naina's sentence. She understands him the most. He looks towards Naina and finds her smiling!

"Chalein?"

asks Naina, smiling

"Chalo!"

answers Rajveer, reciprocating the smile.

Hand in hand, Rajveer and Naina starts walking in the forest. They both hear some strange voices which leads them both to start running. Not for a single second they leave each other's hand.

It has now been 1 hour and 30 minutes since they have been running constantly. Their breathing rate gets heavier due to all the running. Suddenly, Naina stops running. Rajveer looks towards Naina, questioningly.

Naina looks towards Rajveer, her whole body covered in sweats and her breathing rate gets heavier. Rajveer understand that Naina is tired and she needs a break. He leaves her hand

Rajveer looks around to find a place to sit. Suddenly, he spots a big rock. With his right hand's index finger, Rajveer points it towards that rock.

"Wo dekho Naina!"

says Rajveer.

Naina looks towards where he is pointing and she spots a rock. A smile appears on her lips, and a smile also appears on his lips when he sees her smiling.

"Chalo wahan thora rest kar lete hain!"

says Rajveer.

"Chaliye!"

says Naina

With a smile, Naina starts walking towards that rock while Rajveer follows her. Suddenly, Rajveer stops with a jerk and notices something.

"Naina!"

he calls her from behind.

Naina stops abruptly as she hears his voice. She turns around right away and what she sees in front of her shocks her. She notices Rajveer unbuttoning his shirt as he takes few steps towards her. Naina's heart skips a beat.

She does not understand what the hell is going on. They are in such a dangerous situation and he is taking his shirt off. What is going on? Her cheeks starts turning red out of blush.

She finds him coming closer. With every step he takes, her heartbeat picks up pace. It succeeds in making her nervous. Naina starts taking her steps back.

By now, Rajveer has unbuttoned his shirt completely. As Naina starts moving back, suddenly, her back hits the tree, which means there is no more escape for her.

She shuts her eyes out of blush and nervousness. She can feel Rajveer's warmth as she can feel him so close to her.

Rajveer looks at Naina and a smile appears on his lips. He, then, realises what Naina is thinking. Moving his lips towards her right ear, he whispers.

"Kya hua Naina?"

asks Rajveer, smirking

Within no time, Rajveer takes a step back. Naina opens her eyes immediately. She looks towards Rajveer and finds him standing a step away, his arms crossed over his chest , only in his small shirt that he was wearing underneath his actual shirt.

Naina wonders where his shirt went. With a smile, Rajveer gestures her to look at herself. Naina looks at herself and finds herself covered in his shirt.

Naina looks back up at him and gives him a questioning look. Within no time, Rajveer understands her confusion.

"Peeche se tumhari shirt...it's ripped off!"

explains Rajveer.

Naina now understands why he covered her with his shirt. She starts cursing herself under her breath for thinking about something else.

Rajveer knew exactly what she is thinking about. To tease her, he takes a step towards her and before he could do something else, he hears her loud scream.

"RAJVEER SIR!"

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Awesome update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's awesome.. please continue soon
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wow ...
nice os yr ...
keep writing aaj kal ache writers milte kaha h
Raj naina ki adhuri kahani ko hum yaha pura kar sake ...I m looking forward for more fic on raina
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Totally love it
Beautifully written
Next update mein thoda aur romance show karna
Continue soon
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Thank You! 😊
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Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

WoW interesting

Pl cont soon


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It's awesome.. please continue soon


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Originally posted by: RNforever

wow ...
nice os yr ...
keep writing aaj kal ache writers milte kaha h
Raj naina ki adhuri kahani ko hum yaha pura kar sake ...I m looking forward for more fic on raina


Thank you so much yaar! I am so glad you liked it and thank you so much for the complement! 😊
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Part 3

"RAJVEER SIR!"

And the next thing Rajveer sees is Naina on the ground, covered in mud. Since Rajveer took a step towards Naina, so, it led Naina to take a step backwards. Unknowingly, Naina stepped on something slippery which caused her to land on the ground, covered totally in mud.

Rajveer is just looking at Naina with his mouth half open in amusement. He has no idea what just happened suddenly. Naina is just trying her best to get up from the ground, but in vain. She gets annoyed because the mud got her all dirty.

After few minutes, Rajveer realises what exactly happened. Unable to control himself, he bursts into splits of laughter. Naina is looking so adorable in this condition that he is not able to stop himself from laughing.

"Hahahahahaha"

laughs Rajveer, looking at Naina, holding his stomach with both of his hands.

Hearing his laughter, Naina looks up at him immediately and finds him laughing at her. A smile also creeps on her lips. Naina's heart skips a beat as she hears the sweet sound of his laughter.

Mentorship memories starts to play in both of their heads, how Rajveer fell in the mud water which caused Naina to laugh out loud.

For a moment, both of them stop laughing and start looking into each other's eyes remembering those beautiful moments spent together in the mentorship program. Rajveer is lost in her beauty. Naina lowers her eyes out of shyness on realising Rajveer's intensions that are clearly evident in his eyes.

A smile creeps on Rajveer's lips on realising Naina's vulnerability. Something crosses his mind which causes him to bursts into splits of laughter again.

"Hahahahahaha"

he laughs again.

Naina looks at him in amusement. She has no idea what caused him to laugh.

"Kya hua aap hass kyun rahe hain?"

asks Naina, confusingly.

Rajveer starts laughing even louder. With his right hand's index finger, he points it towards Naina.

"Dekho...aapne aapko...hahaha...poori cartoon lag rahi ho."

says Rajveer, between his laughs

Did he just call her a cartoon? Naina looks at him shockingly with her mouth half open. In irritation, she stands up, wipes the dirt off with his shirt that he has given her. Wearing his shirt back, she puts both of her hands on either sides of her waist.

"Haan haan hass lijiye...badi hassi aa rahi hogi na aapko...wase bhi mein Aapki Ritu chudail se toh theek hi lag rahi hoon!"

says Naina.

Her voice reflects her irritation and jealousy. Rajveer suddenly stops laughing and looks at Naina, shocked. Where did Dr. Ritu come from in all this?

"Is mein Dr. Mishra kahan se aa gayi ab?"

asks Rajveer.

Naina does not utter another word. In irritation, she crosses her arms over her chest and turns her head the other way. A smile creeps on Rajveer's lips on realising Naina's condition. Oh! So, she is jealous!

"Ohh ab mein samjha!! Tumhe jalan ho rahi hai!"

says Rajveer, smirking.

Naina immediately looks at Rajveer.

"Mein kyun jealous hoongi?"

asks Naina.

Yes, she is jealous, but she won't admit it. But, he is also Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat. He knows how to make her confess about her jealousy. How jealous she felt when she saw him and Dr. Mishra together.

A smile creeps on Rajveer's lips as he thinks of a strategy. He takes a step towards Naina.

"Toh tumhe koi farak nahi padhta tha jab tum mujhe Dr. Mishra ke sath dekhti thi?"

he asks her, smirking.

Naina's heart skips a beat as she finds him taking a step towards her. She lowers her eyes out of shyness as she takes a step backwards.

"N-nahi!"

replies Naina, stammering.

Rajveer's smile gets wider on seeing Naina's vulnerability. He takes another step towards her while she takes a step back. An idea strikes his mind while his smile does leave not his face. He stops abruptly and his expressions becomes serious.

"Toh iska mathlab tumhe koi farak nahi padega agar mein kisi or ki taraf..."

asks Rajveer, sternly.

Naina looks up at him immediately. How dare he say that? How can he even look at someone else? Her expressions turns serious. Her eyes starts blazing with anger. With her right hand's index finger, she points it towards Rajveer as she takes a step towards him.

"Khabardaar Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat agar aapne mere ilawa kisi or ki taraf dekha toh...Chahe wo AAPKI Ritu ji hi kyun na ho!"

warns Naina, looking straight in his eyes, emphasising on "Aapki Ritu Ji"

A wide smile creeps on Rajveer's lips after hearing this from Naina. This is when Naina realises how Rajveer provoked her to utter these words.

"Toh aap ko koi farak nahi padta Cadet Naina ah Singh?"

asks Rajveer, smirking.

This succeeds in making Naina's heart to skip a beat. She cascades her eyes downwards. Rajveer takes a step towards her while she takes her steps back. He waits for her to say something, but she does not. Her cheeks turns hot red out of shyness. She keeps changing her vision from one thing to other

"Hmmm?"

he asks her, smirking.

With every step Rajveer takes, Naina's heartbeat picks up pace. She keeps walking backwards until her back hits the tree. This is when she realises that there is no more escape for her. She tries to leave from her left side, but Rajveer blocks her way by putting his hand on the tree. Same repeats on the other side.

Naina's heartbeat increases after finding Rajveer so close to her. She can feel his warm breath over her face. This succeeds in giving her shivers in her entire body. Naina finds his lips coming closer, she closes her eyes tightly.

Rajveer smirks at this. Moving his lips close to her right ear, he breathes on her skin. His warm breath succeeds in doing some amazing things to Naina.

"Mujhe nahi pata tha ke kabhi mujhe Cadet Naina ah Singh ki ye side bhi dekhne ko milegi!"

whispers Rajveer, huskily

"Quite interesting I must say!"

he says.

Naina opens her eyes immediately and looks at him. They lock eyes immediately. Rajveer's gaze falls on Naina's lips and a sudden desire appears, to taste her lips.

But he also knows it's her first time. Even though he is dying to taste the sweet juice of her lips, he does not want to rush things. He wants to give her some time and not make her uncomfortable. He does not want to do anything which Naina does not want.

Something he does not know is what Naina is feeling. He does not know that Naina wants the exact same thing. In fact, she is waiting for him to make the first move. She waited way to long for this, and now, she cannot wait any longer.

Rajveer takes a step back to give her some space. A sudden disappointment is evident on Naina's face with this action of Rajveer's. This is when Rajveer realises what Naina wants and a huge smile creeps on his lips.

Wanting to make the first move, he, again takes a step towards her. And before he can do anything, they both hear footsteps. Rajveer and Naina look at each other in horror. Their heartbeat picks up pace with fear.

In no time, Rajveer grabs Naina's left hand with his right hand.

"Chalo Naina!"

says Rajveer, out of breath.

They start running through the forest with full speed. They are scared, scared of getting caught. They both know if they get caught, both of their lives will be in danger and they cannot risk that. Rajveer's and Naina's biggest fear is losing each other. They know if they get caught, they will never be together, and this is what's worrying both of them.

"Sir, ab hum kya karein?"

asks Naina, out of breath as she keeps running.

Without stopping, Rajveer looks towards Naina in fear, then looks back ahead.

"Naina hamein kahin chupne ki jagah dhoodhni hogi. Hum kab tak yoon bhaaghte rahege?"

replies Rajveer

This is true, they cannot just keep running away. They need to think of a strategy. They need to find a place to hide, so, they can come up with a plan and make their next move. But the question is, where will they hide? They cannot seem to spot any place.

Fear is evident on both of their faces. It has gotten to a point where both of them are exhausted. They are not able to run anymore, but they have to run until they find a safe place. Their breathing rate gets heavier by every passing minute as they keep running.

Suddenly, a small rock comes in Naina's way which leads her to trip and fall. Automatically, her hand slips from Rajveer's hand and she ends up falling on the ground.

"Aahh"

she whines in pain.

Naina has sprained her ankle due to the trip and fall. Rajveer automatically stops and sits near her. He gets worried. On one side, some people are after them, and here, Naina fell.

"Tum theek toh ho na Naina?"

he asks her, worriedly

Naina diverts her attention from her foot towards Rajveer. Her eyes starts tearing up, not because of pain, but because of the thought of losing Rajveer.

"Sir mere pawoon mein mooch aa gayi hai. Aap please jaiye is se pehle ke koi aapko pakad le. Mein chal nahi paoongi. Mein apni wajah se aapki jaan khatre mein nahi daal sak..."

says Naina, but stops abruptly.

She stops with a jerk as something happens which shocks her.

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Edited by Raj_Naina_LRL - 8 years ago
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