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Part 4



She stops with a jerk as something happens which shocks her. She finds Rajveer's grip getting tighter on her right elbow, his eyes blazing with anger.

"Aaj aisa keh dia hai per dubara mut kehna. Khabardaar jo mujhse door janne ki baat ki tumne."

warns Rajveer, sternly.

Naina's eyes starts brimming with tears. How can someone love her so much? Does she even deserve this?

With her right hand, Naina cups his face.

"Mein aapse kabhi door nahi jaongi sir"

says Naina, softly

Rajveer's eyes fills up with tears seeing the love Naina has for him. Taking her right hand into his, he plants a soft kiss over it. Naina shuts her eyes as she feels his soft lips over her warm skin.

Suddenly, a thought crosses her mind as she immediately opens her eyes. Her eyes fills up with tears again as the thought of losing him crosses her mind.

Rajveer looks at Naina and gets shocked on seeing tears in her eyes. He moves his head negatively, as a sign of warning her not to cry. He cups her face with his hands.

"Kya hua Naina?"

asks Rajveer, softly

Wiping her tears away, he places a soft kiss on her forehead.

"Sir mein kaise chal paoongi?"

question Naina

As soon as he is about to answer her, they again hear footsteps coming near them. Their expression changes as they look towards each other in horror.

Rajveer looks around as he tries to search for a place to hide. Suddenly, his gaze falls on a big tree. Not wanting to wait for a single second, Rajveer picks up Naina in his arms and he starts walking towards that tree.

Within few seconds, they reach that tree. Rajveer carefully looks at that tree and he finds a spot to hide. He notices that they can easily hide behind the tree. Taking few more steps, they reach behind the tree.

He carefully puts Naina down on a rock.

"Sir hum kab tak yoon bhaghte rahege?"

questions Naina, concerned

Rajveer looks at Naina and understands her concern.

"Tab tak Naina jab tak hamein koi chupne ki jagah nahi mil jati."

replies Rajveer, softly

But for how long? There seems to be nothing around. When will they find a place to hide? How many days?

It's getting dark by every passing second and they obviously cannot spend the night like this. They both started to get hungry.

"Par sir hu..."

asks Naina but stops abruptly

Naina stops abruptly as Rajveer puts his right hand over her lips.

"Shhh"

whispers Rajveer

He hears some footsteps. He carefully looks around and spots two people walking around the jungle, as of looking for someone.

Looking back towards Naina, he removes his hand from her lips.

"Naina yahan hamaray aas paas do(2) log hain jo shayad hamari talaash mein hain. Tum bilkul bhi awaz nahi karogi."

says Rajveer

"Tum yahan ruko mein abhi aata hun. Mujhe pata lagana hoga ke ye log yahan hamari hi talaash mein aaye hain ya nahi."

he says further, whispering

This succeeds in making Naina's heart to skip a beat. No, he cannot go alone. She won't let him. She finds him getting up and going away, just then, Rajveer stops with a jerk.

Looking back, he first looks at Naina, then he looks towards his hand and finds it in Naina's grip. Smiling at her gesture, he goes back and sits near her.

"Aap akele nahi jayege sir."

orders Naina, her eyes on the verge of crying

Rajveer senses Naina's fear and concern for him. He gives her a smile which ensures Naina that he'll be fine and nothing will happen to him.

"Mujhe kuch nahi hoga Naina!"

he says

Naina still does not want to let go off his hand so, she makes her grip tight on his hand.

"Please sir mujhe choor ke kahin mut jaiye"

Pleads Naina, whispering

Rajveer's heart swells with love for her. He does not want to leave Naina alone even for s second, but he has to, he has to leave her alone for few minutes, so, he can hear what those two people are saying.

"I promise you Naina ke mein das (10) minute mein tumhare paas wapis aa jaonga"

he ensures her.

She knows if he has promised something, he'll surly do it. Hesitantly, she leaves his hand and gives him a smile which ensures Rajveer that he can now go!

Before leaving, he plants a soft kiss on her forehead leading her to shut her eyes and it succeeds in making her heart to skip a beat.

Taking out his gun, he gives her a smile and walks towards the direction of those two men.

-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-

KMA - Abhimanyu's Room

Sitting on his bed, Abhimanyu is seen reading a very important file. Actually, he is reading less and thinking more about something which causes his face to turn red in anger.

"Naina hamaray sath aisa kaise kar sakti hain?"

He yells

Yes, Abhimanyu has developed feelings for Naina and now, he wants to get her at any cost, no matter if he has to betray Rajveer, his so-called best friend.

As soon as the cadets came back to KMA, they were sent to the detention centre for helping Rajveer and Naina escape. And this happened all because of Abhimanyu. If he wanted, he could have saved the cadets, but he did not. In fact, Abhimanyu is the one who sent them to the detention centre.

Putting the file away, Abhimanyu gets up from the bed and walks towards his side table. Pouring some water in a glass, he drinks it.

Throwing that glass across the room in anger, Abhimanyu picks up his phone from the bed as he dials a number.

"Hello"

comes a voice from the other side of the phone

"Kya Raj or Naina mile?"

asks Abhimanyu, sternly

"Nahi sir abhi nahi lekin hum jald hi dhoondh leinge unh dono ko"

replies the person on the other side of the phone

"Yaad rahe ke Naina ko kuch nahi hona chahiye and Raj...Drop him dead as soon as you find him"

orders Abhimanyu

With that, he cuts the call as his eyes starts blazing with anger.

-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-

With his gun pointed outwards, Rajveer carefully starts taking baby steps towards the direction of those two people.

After few minutes of walking, Rajveer is finally able to reach the people. As soon as he spots them, he runs and goes behind a nearby tree. He is close enough to hear their conversation, but far enough to hide himself from them.

With a gun in his hand, one of the men looks around as he tries to look for someone.

"Itni raat ho rahi hai or wo dono abhi tak nahi mile."

he says to the other man

"Boss ka order hai ke hum tab tak unh dono ko dhoondhte rahe jab tak wo hamein mil nahi jaate. Or us Captain ko toh maar dene ka order hai."

replies the second man

"Or wo ladki?"

the first man asks

"Us ladki ko kuch nahi hona chahiye"

replies the second man.

Rajveer is hiding behind the tree, listening to their entire conversation. Something he knows for sure is that these two men are after them, but he fails to understand who their boss is. Who is that person that is after Rajveer's death? And why does he want Naina to be alive? So many questions but he does not have the answers.

Deciding to inform Naina, he decides to go back where Naina is.

-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-

It has been eight minutes since Rajveer has been gone. Rajveer has promised her that he'll be back in ten minutes, but her heartbeat picks up pace. Naina starts getting restless by every passing second.

She feels that something bad is about to happen soon. But what? This is what she does not know. She does not have the courage to lose her Rajveer sir.

Naina's thoughts are broken by a loud sound. This jerks her and she manages to stand up. Her foot had gotten a little better, so, she is able to walk a little.

Following the sound, Naina takes few steps towards it and

BOOM

A gunshot is heard leading her heart to skip a beat. Suddenly, her gaze falls on something that is few meters away from her which leads her head to spin. She feels like the Earth has been slipped from underneath her feet.

"NOOO"

she yells out of breath

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Part 5

Naina's eyes starts brimming with tears as she starts crying out loud on seeing what is in front of her. She is not able to believe her eyes. Although it is getting a little dark, but she is still able to see clearly with the help of a torch. She sees blood everyone but she is not able to spot anyone there.

The torch drops from her hand as she continuously cries. Her loud sobs her heard in the entire forest. Her heart says that the blood is not Rajveer's blood, but someone else's. But, still, she feels as if something bad has happened.

By every passing second, her sobs gets louder as she goes down on her knees. Suddenly, she spots something few meters away. Standing back up, she picks up the torch and she walks in that direction.

Walking few steps, she finally reaches and looks at that thing carefully with the help of the torch. Her heartbeat picks up pace with fear as she finds out what exactly it is; it is none other than the handkerchief she gave him.

Naina feels as if someone has taken her soul away from her body. She looks at that handkerchief carefully to check if it's really that one. Her heart wants to deny it, but unfortunately, it is exactly the one she gave him.

"RAJVEER SIR!"

yells Naina, sobbing

Her voice echoes in the entire jungle as her sobs gets louder by every passing minute. She is not able to believe her eyes. Taking the handkerchief in her hand, she hugs it and she cries.

"Aisa nahi ho sakta. Aap mujhe choor ke nahi ja sakte. Aapne mujhse waada kia tha"

she mumbles between her sobs.

She wants to deny the facts, but, the truth is what she is seeing in front of her. Suddenly, she spots few footsteps in front of her . Looking carefully, she realises that those footsteps are in different sizes which confirms that there were many people there. Looking ahead she realises that the footsteps looks like someone has been dragged. Along with the footsteps, she sees few drops of blood.

This calms her a little as it confirms her that Rajveer is alive and he has been dragged, but he is alive.

"Mein aapko dhoondh kar hi rahoongi sir"

yells Naina as she wipes her tears

Today, right now, she promises herself that she will find her Rajveer sir at any cost. She has promised that she will not leave the people who kidnapped Rajveer. She will not sit until she finds him. She will fight for him from this army, and from this entire world. If there is ever a situation where she has to choose between Rajveer and herself, she will choose Rajveer's life. She will not let anything happen to him, and that is a promise that she makes to Rajveer and herself.

"Mein ladoongi! Is poori duniya se ladoongi aapke liye Rajveer sir! chahe is ke liye mujhe kuch bhi kyun na karna pare"

With this determination, she starts her mission, to find her Rajveer sir!

-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-


Rajveer was unconscious for couple of minutes, laying on the ground, somewhere in an unknown area. just as if his fate is with him this time, he slowing starts gaining his consciousness. All of a sudden he feels an intense piercing pain shooting up on his shoulder, The world seems in hyperdrive as adrenaline pulsates through his veins with loud booms, every sound is magnified to a countless number. he is not able to breathe, his vision is clouding. Rajveer slowing sits up straight as he tries to recognise where exactly he is. Soon his gaze falls on his right side.and he sees droplets of blood on the ground. Following the direction of where the blood is coming from, he looks towards his right shoulder. This is when he realises that he has been shot.

He tries to think of what exactly has happened earlier, but fails miserably as his pain is unbearable. Suddenly, a thought crosses his mind.

"NAINAAA!"

he yells

His heartbeat picks up pace on not finding Naina near him. After few seconds, all the flashbacks seems to play in his head; how he promised Naina that he will be back within ten minutes. His breath hitches in his throat on not finding her near him. Where might she be? Is she alright?

"Naina kahan ho tum?"

he yells again

His voice echoes in the area where he is, but he fails to recognise the place due to it being dark. With his left hand, he tries to search for his handkerchief, but a shiver goes through his spine when he fails to find it. This is the first gift that Naina gave him and he lost it?

Rajveer's eyes starts brimming with tears on the thought of losing Naina. No, he cannot lose her. he will fight for her until his last drop of blood.

"Naina!!! mein tumhe apne aap se door nahi jaane doonga"

he whispers between his sobs

"Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye lekin mein tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga

Rajveer promises to himself that no matter what happens, he will not let anything happen to his Naina, his Cadet Naina 'ah' Singh, his love! He manages to stand up on his feet despite all that pain from that bullet. He is a solider, a true solider, he knows how to bear it! With the determination to find Naina, Rajveer slowly moves ahead, injured.

-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-

"Captain Abhimanyu aapko Brigadier Chandook ne apne cabin mein bulaya hai"

informs an orderly, standing on the door of Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan's room

Abhimanyu, who was busy in reading a file, he looks up at the orderly immediately. Orderly's words succeeds in making Abhimanyu's heart to skip a beat. He wonders why BC has called him in his cabin.

"Theek hai hum abhi aate hain"

replies Abhimanyu

With that, the orderly leaves from there. After two minutes, Abhimanyu closes the file and makes his way towards Brigadier Chandook's cabin.

Within few minutes, he reaches in front of BC's cabin.

Brigadier Chandook's cabin

Brigadier Chandook is seen working on something very important when a knock is heard on the door. Shifting his vision from his work towards the door, he looks up.

"Come in!"

says BC

As soon as BC utters these words, the door is pushed open and there stands Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan. Walking up to Brigadier Chandook's desk, Abhimanyu salutes him.

"Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan reporting, sir!"

he salutes BC

"At ease Captain"

says BC

Abhimanyu stands in an at ease position.

"sir aapne hamein bulaya?"

asks Abhimanyu

"yes, Captain! Maine ye janne ke liye tumhe bulaya hai ke Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat and Cadet Naina Singh Aaluwalia ko dhoondhne ki zeemedari tumhe di gayi hia. kya progress hai ab tak?"

asks BC sternly

Abhimanyu's breath hitches at this and his heartbeat picks up pace with fear and nervousness.

"Sir abhi unh dono ki talaash jaari hai"

informs Abhimanyu, with his eyes cascaded downwards.

Brigadier Chandook looks at Abhimanyu and senses something very fishy in his behaviour. Brigadier decides to ask him, but stops abruptly as he decides to figure out the reason behind Abhimanyu's behaviour own his own.

"You may leave Captain"

orders BC

Saluting him again, Abhimanyu leaves from BC's cabin. As he is walking towards his room, he gets a phone call. Picking up the phone call, he answers it while an evil smile is evident on his face as he sees the caller ID.

"kaam hua?"

asks Abhimanyu

"ji sir!"

answers the person on the other side.

Another huge smile creeps on Abhimanyu's lips as he gets the news that he was waiting for.

"Bye Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat! Hamein aapki bohut yaad aayeg dost!"

mumbles Abhimanyu, under his breath with an evil smile

-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-

As Naina stands, gazing at the dilapidated house. she shivers, as though, ice had replaced her spine. The cold air enveloped her entire body. The multiple layer of clothing could not protect against the deathly cold. The walkway leading up to house are cracked. Weeds and dandelions poked out from these cracks. Red roses grows wildly in thick batches by the gate. The moonlight cast a ghoulish glow on the house. Vines forms a twisted maze upon the side of house, reaching their tentacles towards the roof. The house's walls shows black decay by neglect.

As soon as she takes a step forward, she hears a scream. She stops in her tracks right there as her heartbeat picks up pace. As soon as she turns around to see what has happened exactly, someone puts a cloth on her nose which also covers her lips.

She tries her best to protest, but soon, she falls unconscious on the ground..

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