KaYa FF: Saath Nibhana Saathiya (Chapter 3 : Page 8)

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A man with a reputed family situated in a posh society of a big city of Gujarat started to hate a girl with his all mind and heart . The girl also does not like him but still keep quite because she don't hate him . According to the man the girl had done the mistake and he decided to punish her . What will happen to the girl now , if interested please peep in the story.

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BAA
The eldest in house , everyone loves her to the core . Every one respects her and her decisions . Sweet and bubbly nature . Her age is 55.

CHIRAAG MODI and HETAL MODI
Both are sweet nature couple , parents of the youngest son of Modi family Jigar . Always support each and every child of family . Chiraag modi , the first son of the family thus had taken the responsibilty of buisness and Hetal is housewife , a very responsible daughter in law of Modi Family.

PARAAG MODI and KOKILA MODI
Paraag Modi the small brother of Chiraag and Modi and younger son of the family and her wife a very strict woman with lots of ego inside her , she always taunts her husband for not taking responsibility of his family by joining buisness like his big brother Chiraag . As Paraag always have interest in writing poems but he failed in that profession due to family pressure and due to this he alwayd kept distance from his family . kokila does not like his attitude towards family and insted of supporting him she started taunting him . But she has also a soft heart.

AHEM MODI
Son of Kokila and paraag Modi and eldest n the family . Not bonded with the family too much but love his mom and his brothers very much . He has a soft side but always remain stern . Has a girlfriend named Anita but destiny had planned something else for him.

KABIR MODI
Son of Kokila and Paraag . A very sweet and gentle man to his family , love his family very much . Can do anything for his family . Runs to help buisness with his big brother Ahem , small brother Jigar and his uncle . He becomes angry very soon but then cool down also.

JIGAR MODI
The youngest son in Modi family , loved by all and loves all . Has chirpy and sweet nature just like his parents Hetal and Chiraag.

GOPI PATEL and RASHI SHAH
Gopi and Rashi are cousin . Gopi' parents died in a natural calamity when she was 5 years old and from then only sh is staying in her maternal uncle's house . Her Mama loves her very much but her Mami hates her and think her as burden , she always treats her as her slave . Gopi is a sweet natured , innocent and naive girl who is uneducated due to her Mami's behaviour towards her . Rashi also treat her as servant as her mother told her to do so from childhood . Rashi is educated and is child at heart who always what her mother wants her to do . Due to this she has also became a greedy woman.Gopi still respects both her mami and her big sis Rashi.

ANANYA MEHTA
Ananya is a sweet and innocent girl who always stands up for her and her family self respect . Her family was a very rich family who eventually faced financial crisis and so they shifted from Delhi to Rajkot in Gujarat . Her mother and father health never remaines good after that so she took the responsibility of her family and started teaching computer in school . She has BCs degree with her . She is an innocent girl with a heart of gold . Very childish and stubborn at sometime but her mother father loves her.

All other character will be introduced in the story itself . Do tell me if you like it or not
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"Pata nahi apne aapko kya samjhte hai , mujhe kya paagal samjh rakha hai ya fir darpok jo unki dhamkiyon se dar jaaungi , aur iss tarah se schhol mein aake mujhe intimidate karne ka matlab kya tha ,what does he think of himself , huh , mai unse nahi darne waali , unhe jo karna hai vo karle"She huffed in anger . She was pacing to and fro in her room still gulping the fact that someone name Kabir Modi insulted her dignity and also her self respect .

"Anu dikra" She heard her mother voice which brought her out from her thoughts.

AM-shu thayu dikra (kya hua beta) , tu itni ghabarai hui kyu lag rahi hai

A-kuch nahi ma , bas aise hi

AM- anu , main teri ma hu , aur maa se baatein chupana vo kya kehte hai english mein , ha not allowed

Ananya smiled at her mother ad said

A-kuch nahi ma bas school ka thoda kaam hai isliye , ye sab chodiye , aapne apni BP ki dawaayi li

AM-anu dikra tu meri fikr mat kiya kar itni , meri to vaise bhi umar ho gayi hai , bas ab tera ghar bas jaaye to chain ki saans lu

A-ma aap bina mera ghar bassaye bhi chain ki saans le sakti ho , aur aapki fikr karna mera hak hai jo aap mujhse nahi chin sakti.

Her mother smiled at her. Ananya put her head on her lap and her mother started caressing her hair which Ananya loved very much , she smilingly closed her eyes

AM-beta tu hamre saath hai na to hume kisi cheez ki fikra nahi rehti , tu har vo cheez jo hume chahiye hamare maangne se pehle laake de deti hai , Armaan ki college ki fees manage karti hai , meri aur tere papa ki dawaaiyon ka kharcha , aur apne liye tinka bhar bhi nahi .

Ananya smiled widened at her mother statement

A-ma jab meri maa itne pyaar se mujhe unke haanth ka bana tasty tasty khaana khilaati hai , papa mujhe jeene ka sahi dhang sikhaate hai to aur mujhe kya chahiye . Aur meri life mein entertainment ki kami bhi nahi , all thanks my chota bhai "Armaan , THE JOKER"

The two of them laughed and then they both went to hall for dinner with their family.

HERE ON OTHER SIDE

"Tumne meri baaton ko seriously nahi liya na Ananya ab dekho main tumhare saath kya karta hu , tumhari life ko main hell mein convert karne waala hu , get ready Ms. Mehta"
And he smirked.

NEXT DAY

After Ananya came from school she found a note on her dressing table which says
"Anu dikra jaldi se jo maine kapde aur gehne rake hai bed pe vo pehenke Shubh hall pahuch , hum tera waha wait kar rahe hai ".

Ananya got confused by this note but she had to follow the instruction of her mother else she will get a good lecture from her afterwards.

She dressed in the lehenga looking pretty and gorgeous


She went to the hall and saw many people there

She thinks "Shayad kisi ki shaadi ya engagement ka fuction hai , hmm ab chalo anu apni family ko dhundho " She moved her gaze here and found her family waving at her from stage , she when raised her hands to wave them and tell them that she is coming , she got the biggest shock of her life . Her yes popped out and her mouth hung open at the sight in front of him.

She was looking at him in shock while he was smirking at her reaction , Armaan came to her and leads her to the stage , she moved with him like a lifeless doll who can't sense anything right now .

She when came up on the stage , he move towards her and said in low and husky voice "Congratulations for the Engagement , would be Mrs . Kabir Modi"

TBC

I know guys that it seems the story like "Marraige for Revenge" , but believe me it is different , ver different , hope you like the prologue and riya di if you had read this then I am seriously saying I not used your story concept in mine its seriously different . Do read and comment.
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Wow vaishnavi
New fic and interesting concept
Nice character sketch
Totally different from reporters
Prologue is also great
Waiting for first part
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting concept
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Kaya in saath nibhana saathiya
I don't know how to react...
Kabir sharma sae kabir Modi ban gaya 👏 👏
One request vaishu...Pls story Kaya par hi focus Karna..It's just a request..Becoz I don't like ahem and hoping Jodi(it's just my opinion)
Continue soon
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Wow vaishnavi

New fic and interesting concept
Nice character sketch
Totally different from reporters
Prologue is also great
Waiting for first part
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Thanku so much dear
Glad you are liking the concept
I was scared about this
Will continue soon 😊
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Originally posted by: Ariya_1325

Interesting concept
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Thanku so much
Will continue soon 😊
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Originally posted by: prasannakamila

Kaya in saath nibhana saathiya
I don't know how to react...
Kabir sharma sae kabir Modi ban gaya 👏 👏
One request vaishu...Pls story Kaya par hi focus Karna..It's just a request..Becoz I don't like ahem and hoping Jodi(it's just my opinion)
Continue soon

Actually ye khyaal mere dimaak mein bhi achanak aaya 😊
Ya this is kaya based only bad thoda bahut ahem gopi and jigar rashi hoga, don't worry 😊
Will update soon 😳
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