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Posted: 8 years ago
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seems interesting
plz update soon
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It was very nice...cont soon
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Superb prologue ! Update soon :) also pls do pm me when u update the story ! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting concept
Ouch kabir hate ananya but for what?
I love ananya bonding with her families it's so beautiful
Oh hell kabir getting married to ananya but just for his so called revenge
Poor ananya what she will do now?
Continue plz
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

seems interesting
plz update soon
thanks for pm

Thanku so much 😊
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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

It was very nice...cont soon

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Originally posted by: oneloverajeev

Superb prologue ! Update soon :) also pls do pm me when u update the story ! 😊

Thanku so much 😊
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

Interesting concept

Ouch kabir hate ananya but for what?
I love ananya bonding with her families it's so beautiful
Oh hell kabir getting married to ananya but just for his so called revenge
Poor ananya what she will do now?
Continue plz

Thanku so much dear 😊
You will get to know soon 😳
Let's see 😉
Will update tonight
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Two Days Before

Modi Bhawan
"Mani , mani , kaha chali gayi ye dobi (idiot)" Kokila was shouting rather than calling , jst then er sister in law Hetal came there
H-kya baat hai kokila , kya ho gaya
K-mota bhabhi ek to hame mandir jaane ke liye deri ho rahi hai upar se Mani ko main kabse bula rahi hu ki jab mota bhai , ahem , Kabir aur Jigar aaye to unhe chaay banakar de de par is mani ka koi ata hi nahi hai
Just then Mani enters in the kitchen , Kokila when saw her started basting on her
K- Mani kaha thi tum , main tumhe kabse aawaz de rahi hu sunaayi nahi de raha tha kya
M(little scared)-maaf karna naani bhabhi (Kokila) , vo Baa ne kuch kaam se bulaya tha
K-thik che , ab suno main aur mota bhabhi mandir jaa rahe hai , jab saare log ofice se aa jaaye to unhe chaay aur naashta de dena , samjhi gayi?
M-ji naani bhabhi
And both sister in law went to mandir
At Temple
Kokila and hetal did the prayer . When they were moving out they heard two women talking
W1-arey Mehta ji to bahut hi kismat waale hai jo itni acchi beti mli hai unko , buisness mein itna nuksaan hone ke baad bhi kaise pure ghar ko sambhaal ke rakha hai
W2-ha , maine to suna hai ki mr and Mrs Mehta dono ki tabyet thik nahi rehti ,aur unki beti hi akele pure ghar ko sambhaalti hai
W1-kismat waali hai Mrs mehta
W2-wo to hai aur kismat waale honge wo log jinke ghar mein unki beti bahu bankar jaayegi
Kokila when heard this she stopped and looked towards them , she went to the place where they were standing and said
K-Jai Sri Krishna , mera naam Kokila Modi Hai
W1-arey kokila ben aapko kaun nahi jaanta , jai Sri krishna
W2-ha Kokila Ben , aap hamari women society mein bahut mashhoor hai
Kokila smiled and said
K-aap log abhi kis ladki ke baare mein baat kar rahe the
W1-vo , vo to hum Ananya ke baare mein baat kar rahe the,Mr and Mrs mehta ki beti , abhi 3 mahine pehle hi raajkot shift hue hai vo log , delhi mein bahut bada kapdo ka yapaar tha unka lekin achanak ghaata hone laga jiski wajah se unka ghar aur unki factory nilaam ho gayi aur isliye vo lo Raajkot aa gaye , yaha pe apne puraana ghar jo unke ma aur pita ka tha udhar rehte hai
K-oh aur Ananya kaisi ladki hai
W2-vo , vo to bahut hi acchi hai , swabhaaw se bhi aur surat se bhi , saare gud hai usmein
Kokila started thinking
K(pov)-hmm Mr and mrs Mehta ki family ko bahut nuksaan hua hai , unki beti bahut acchi bhi hai saare kaam mein nipurna(perfect) hai , agar main Kabir ka rishta leke Ananya ke ghar jaaungi to vo log fauran ha kardenge aur dusri baat unke aarthik sthiti ki wajah se Ananya bhi hamare ghar mein dab ke rahegi , aum mujhe mere liye ek bahu mil jaayegi
Kokila smiled at her thought and asked the two women about Ananya's address.
Modi Bhawan
All men were now at home and were resting in their respective rooms , but its not the truth
Ahem in his room was seating on the couch and was typing furiously when his small bro Kabir entered and frowned at his angry face
K-kya hua bhai , aap gusse mein lag rahe hai
A-Kabir abhi mera mood bahut kharaab hai , baad mein baat karte hai
Kabir sighed and sits on the couch next to his brother
K-bhai pareshaan to aap subah se hi ho , mujhe at least bataao to kya baat hai
A-baat ye hai ki meri shaadi tay ho chuki ho
Kabir looked at his brother confusedly
K-to bhai ismein itna pareshaan hone waali kya baat hai , shaadi to sabki hoti hai
A-ha hoti hai , lekin unki pasand bhi to matter karti hai , main kisi se pyaar kartu hu aur...
K-ek minute , ek minute bhai , kya kaha aapne aap kisi se pyaar karte hai , aur aapne ye baat mujhe batayi nahi
A-Kabir is baare mein hum baad mein discuss karte hai abhi tu meri baat sun , main Anita naam ki ek ladki se pyaar karta hu aur Mom meri shaadi kisi Gopi naam ki ladki se fix kar aayi hai
K-ohh , to aap mom se is baare mein baat kyu nahi karte
A-maine ki Kabir lekin jab Mom use milne gayi to Mom ne use keh diya ki vo hamari family mein fit nahi ho sakti , jiski wajah se use gussa aa gaya aur usne Mom ki insult bhi kardi
Kabir eyes got widened at this , he felt little anger when he heard his bro said that his girlfriend insulted his Mom.
K-bhai , are you serious , usne Mom ki insult ki aur aap use shaadi karna consider kar rahe hai
A-Kabir , jitna tum Mom se pyaar karte ho utna main bhi , aur mera mood sirf isliye off nahi hai ki mainAnita se shaadi nahi kar sakta kyuki usne Mom se meri insult ki par isliye bhi kyuki jis ladki se Mom ne meri shaadi fix ki hai use main jaanta bhi nahi hu , but fir bhi main Mom ki baat ko taal nahi sakta
K-hmm
Just then they heard the knock , they turned to door and saw Mani entering hurriedly
M-Ahem bhai , kabir bhai jaldi chaliye Naani Bhabhi aayi hai aur bahut gusse mein hai
Both Ahem and Kabir got shocked hearing this , they stood up and goes downstair
In Hall
Kokila was drinking trying to control her rage , she just can't digest that someone could behave like this with her , how dare she
All the family members came to hall and saw Kokila with angry face , her face was telling that something has happened with her which she can't bear.Her body was shaking with anger
Ahem and Kabir came to her and both sat on their knees in front of her
A-Mom kya hua
But she didn't answer
K-Mom bataiye na , kya kisi ne kuch kaha aapse?
Kokila looked at him with rage in her eyes , Kabir was also shocked , he hadn't saw his mom this angry before
K-kaha ! (she shook her head in negative) nahi Kabir kaha nahi balki bezzati (insult) ki hai meri , aaj tak kisi ne bhi mujhse is tarah baat nahi ki , aur vo ladki , usne mujhse kaha ki vo us ghar ki bahu nahi banegi jis ghar mein mujh jaisi sadsya rehti hai .
All got shocked including Hetal who was also there with her
H- lekin Kokila...
K-nahi mota bhabhi aap kuch nahi bolengi , aaj mujhe jo bezzati ka ehsaas hua hai vaisa kabhi nahi
Kabir and Ahem's eyes are filled with rage
K-jab mainuske ghar gayi uske mere bte , mere Kabir ka rishta leke to unhone meri bezzati ki
A-Mom aap bas uska naam bataiye main use chodunga nahi
K-nahi Ahem bhai , aap uske saath kuch nahi karenge , ab uske saath jo kuch bhi karna hai vo main karunga , Mom usne aapki insult ki hai na , ab main use dikhata hu ki Kabir Modi ki Mom ki insult karna ka anjaam kya hota hai
In Night
Kokila's Room
H- Kokila main sirf itna jaan na chahti hu ki tumne Kabir ko jhuth kyu kaha
K-jhuth ! mota bhabhi maine kaunsa jhuth kaha Kabir se , kya us ladki ne nahi kaha tha humse ye sab
H- kaha tha Kokila lekin us tarah se nahi jis tarah se tumne Kabir ko bataya
K-bas mota bhabhi , us ladki ne Kokila Modi se jis tarah baat ki hai us tarah aaj tak kisi ne nahi ki , ab mera beta use batayega ki Kokila Modi ki bezzati karne ka kya anjaam hota hai
Hetal shook her head at her stubbornness
Kabir's Room
K-hello maya , mujhe Ananya Mehta jo L.P. Vidyamandir mein school eacher hai uske baare mein saari information chahiye , with her family background and all
Next Day
L. P. Vidyamandir School
Ananya was taking class of computer in computer lab when a peon came and tell her that Principal is calling her
She goes to principal room and knocked the door
"Come in" the voice of the Principal came
She entered and saw one more man was present there also
An-Good Morning Sir
P-Good Morning Miss Mehta , aapse milne koi aaye hai , Mr Kabir Modi
When she heard the name, she got the worst shock of her life , her eyes came out of the socket , she can't believe this , she can't handle both mother and daughter one after the other
Kabir smirked at her , an angry smirk , and his eyes filled with rage
Principal took their leave as Kabir had told him that he wanted to talk with her in private
K-so Miss diamond girl , yehi samajhi hai na aap apne aapko
Ananya looked at him annoyed at his words
K-maine kuch galat kaha , mujhe to nahi lagta
A-dekhiye Mr Modi , kal jo kuch bhi hua us behaviour ke liye I am sorry , I know mujhe thodi aur shaanti se baat karni chahiye thi but...
Kabir cuts her in between and shouted in anger "but what , tum samajhti kya ho apne aap ko , how dare you talk to my Mom like that , itni badtmeezi se..
This time Ananya cuts in between
A-ek minute , ek minute badtmeezi se , mr main apne dushmano se bhi badtmeezi se baat nahi karti hu , to Mrs Modi ko to main jaanti bhi nahi thi
K-oh really , to tum kya kehna chahti ho ki meri Mom jhuth bol rahi
He started coming close to her with fiery rage on his face , she started going backwards and hits the wall . She got trapped between wall and the fireball in front of him.Kabir kept both hads on the wall either side of her.
Then hesaid in slow but dangerous voice
K-boliye Ms so called Diamond , kya tumne meri Mom ko nahi kaha tha ki tum us ghar ki bahu nahi ban na chahti jis ghar main vo rehti hai
Ananya got shocked hearing these words
A-no ways , Dekhiye Mr Modi maine jo kaha tha vo bhi aisa hi kuch tha lekin mera matlab vo nahi tha jo aap samajh rahe hai , aap...
Kabir again cuts and shouted "shut up , just shut up , tumne meri mom ki insult ki hai , ab main tumhe batata hu ki main kya kar sakta hu , ab tum dekho main kya karta hu"
Now Ananya also got angry
A-dekhiye Mr Modi maine aapki Mom ki koi insult nahi ki hai , so please stop this , aap...
K-I said just shut up , ab tum dekho main kya karta hu the one and only Ms . Diamond
Kabir smirked an angry smirk and went out while Ananya was looking at him shockingly , trying to register what just happened
TBC
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice ud
Kokila Modi ne sahi nahi kiya...
Kabir misunderstood Anu...
Now wat will kabir do with Anu???

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