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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: cuteariya

this mother & son planning to destroy ananya's life how disgusting 😡
kokila lied to everyone abt ananya's behavior disgusting 😡
hetal know everything but still didn't clear anything
now what ananya will do?
continue plz

Hmm that's true
Let's seen what Ananya will do
Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanku so much 😳
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Congratulations on new story

Prologue is so Interesting and Captivating

Thanku so much dear
Glad you found it interesting 😊
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Thanku so much 😊
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Originally posted by: xFawadKhanx

Amazing concept!!

Thanks for pm

Thanku so much dear 😊
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Ananya was staring at her henna decked hands with tears in her eyes , she was lost in her thoughts . Sleep was far away from her eyes. Her thoughts went back to that day when her life got changed totally.

FlashBack
Ananya's Home
A-ma , haldi kaha rakhi hai , mil nahi rahi
Ananya shouted from kitchen , her mom who was watching TV with her dad replied
M-arey beta vahi pe hogi , acche se check kar
Just then door bell rang and Ananya's mom went to open the door.
"Jai Sri Krishna , said both the women standing on the door , Ananya's mom also joined her hands replying "Jai Sri Krishna to them.
One of the woman said to her
"Main kokila Modi aur ye meri bhabhi Hetal modi , hum yaha aap logo se milne aaye hai
M-oh , aap dono ko kaun nahi jaante , aaiye na andar
She lead them inside and told Ananya's father about them
F-aaiye na , plz baithiye
Ko-dhanyawaad
They both settled down and Ananya's mom went to kitchen to fetch some snacks and tea for them.
In Kitchen
M-Anu dikra , jaldi jaldi 4 cup chai rakh de tab tak main kuch khaane ke liye nikaalti hu
A-ji ma , lekin aaya kaun hai
M-arey vo Rajkot ki jo women's welfare association hain na unki do famous members hai Kokila aur Hetal Modi , vo dono aaye hue hai
A-oh , lekin kyu
M-vo nahi pata mujhe , abhi batayenge na tu tab tak chai rakh , main unke liye gaathiya aur paani leke jaati hu
Ananya nodded her head and started with her work.
In Hall
Ananya's mom Anisha said
An-hum log to bahut khush hue , ki aap dono hamare ghar padhaari
Hetal gave a genuine smile while Kokila gave a evil smirk to her .
Ko-vaise hum yaha ek bahut hi zaruri kaam se hi aaye hai
An-ji kahiye na
Ananya's father sudhir also encouraged them
Su-ha please kahiye
Ko-hum yaha aapki beti Ananya ka haanth maangne aaye hai mere chote bete Kabir ke liye
Anisha and Sudhir's face got lit up hearing this , they can't believe that such a good alliance had came directly to their home.
An-hume to yakeen hi nahi ho raha ki itna accha rishta hamare ghar par aaya hai
Ko-to kya hum is rishte ke liye ha samjhe
"Rukiye said Ananya . She was looking little shocked .
She came to them and after greeting said
A-aunty , main abhi shaadi nahi kar sakti
Kokila , Hetal and her parents also looked at her with shocked expression
Kokila also angrily stared at her for rejecting her proposal , but Hetal politely asked her
H-kyu beta , kyu nahi kar sakti abhi shaadi
A-aunty main seriously aap logo ko offend nahi karna chahti but abhi is ghar mein meri zyada zarurat hai , papa aur ma dono ko aur armaan ko bhi .
H-beta tum shaadi ke baad bhi to unka khyaal rakh sakti ho aur apni job bhi continue kar sakti ho
Kokila looked at hetal with little accused eyes
Ko-nahi mota bhabhi , shaadi ke baad Ananya sirf hamare ghar ki bahu banker rahegi , aur maaf kijiye ga Anisha ben lekin Ananya koi job nahi karegi
All looked at Kokila with shocked expression
H-ye tum kya keh rahi ho Kokila
Ko-sahi keh rahi hu mota bhabhi , mujhe hamare ghar ke liye ek bahu chahiye , jo grihasti sambhaale , naki bahar jaakar kaam kare
Ananya looked at her with shocked expression and then with a determined face said to her
Ananya replied politely to her
A-I am sorry aunty but mujhe lagta hai ki aapko aapke ghar ke liye bahu nahi balki naukrani chahiye , jo aapke ghar mein aakar aapke kehne pe uthe , aapke kehne pe baithe
Kokila glared at her and then standing up said
Ko-agar tumhe yehi lagta hai to yahi sahi lekin mujhe apne Kabir ke liye ek aisi ladki chahiye jo ek baar uske paas aaye to uski aur uske ghar ki hokar reh jaaye
This time Ananya replied with more politeness in her voice
A-aunty main samajhti hu aap kya kehna chahti hai lekin aunty mujhe pata hai ki aap logo ko ab tak pata chal gaya hoga humari family ki condition , as aap dono bahut famous hai Rajkot mein , aunty mere ma papa ne mujhe padhaya likhaya taaki mujhe kisike saamne kabhi haanth failane ki zarurat na pade , but jab mera time aaya unhe sambhaalne ka to main kaise unhe akela chod sakti hu , mere chote bhaai ke padhai ki zimmedari hai mujhpar...
Kokila cuts her in between
Ko-to hum hai na uske liye , hum log tumhare pariwaar walo ko har mahine paise de denge unki zarurat ke hisaab se
Ananya looked at her with shocked eyes while her parents lowered their head embarrassingly , Hetal also looked at Kokila with shocked eyes and shook her head disbelievingly .
H-Kokila ye tum..
But Ananya cuts her in between
A-aunty please bahut ho gaya , aap mere pariwaar waalo ko samajhti kya hai , aap unki bezzati kar rahi hai , unhe kisi ke upkaar ki zarurat nahi hai , unki beti hai unke paas abhi jo unhe sambhaal sakti hai hamesha . Kisi ka koi ehsaan hame nahi chahiye , ab aap jaa sakti hai (joining her hands)Jai Sri Krishna.
And she went to her room . Kokila looked at her with shocked expression , her eyes are filled with rage and Hetal was looking embarrassingly to Ananya's parents.
An-dekhiye aap..
But Kokila stops her from talking by showing her hand .
She marched outside angrily followed by hetal .
Later in Night
An-anu dikra main samjh sakti hu ki jo unhone kaha vo thik nahi tha , par fir bhi tujhe thodi shaanti se baat karni chahiye thi
A-ma unhone hamare pariwaar ki bezzati ki , aur aap keh rahi hai ki mujhe shaanti se baat karni chahiye , mujhe nahi lagta maine kuch galat kaha unse , ab so jaaiye , good night.
FlashBack End
Tears came out from Ananya's eyes , she can't wipe them also because of her mehendi.
A(pov)-ab pata nahi aage kya , kyu hua ye sab mere saath kanha , maine to kuch galat nahi kiya unke saath fir bhi upar se Kabir ji pata nahi vo aise kyu behave kar rahe hai mere saath , maine to aisa kuch nahi kaha tha Kokila aunty ko fir bhi
Just then she felt a hand wiping her tears from her cheeks
She saw her small bro Armaan standing in front of him with a genuine smile, she also gave him a small smile
He sat down in front of her
Ar-di , aap bilkul tension na lo , main ma papa dono ka bahut acche se khyaal rakhunga
Ananya smiled at him
An-rakhna hi padega , tere paas aur koi option nahi hai
Ar-hmm , aur agar mere jiju ne aapko pareshaan kiya na , ya zara sa bhi rulaya na to bas ek phone (showing his index finger), ek phone karna mujhe aur fir dekhna main kya karta hu
Ananya raised her brows at him
An-Accha , aisa kya kar lega
Ar-arey di aap jaanti nahi ho mujhe , agar unhone aapko dukhi kiya na to main
An-to tu kya
Ar-to main unse haanth jodke request karunga , ki aisa na kare
Ananya slapped his arms and said
An-idiot , tujhse aur koi ummeed bhi nahi thi
Ar-to karni bhi nahi chahiye , dekha hai na Kabir jiju ko , unki body ko dekh ke koi paagal hi hoga jo unse panga lega , aap bahut lucky ho yaar
Ananya smiled at him sadly
MODI BHAWAN
Kabir's room
Kabir was standing at window looking outside thinking about the event occuring in his life
K(pov)-yakeen hi nahi hota ki ye sab main kar raha hu , ek ladki ki zindagi barbaad karne jaa raha hu , but she deserves it , afterall usne jo mom ke saath kiya , unke saath itni badtmeezi se baat ki , she deserves it , use to main sabak sikha ke rahunga , samajhti kya hai vo khud ko , but kya vo seriously aisa kar sakti hai , sagaai ke time pe uske behaviour se to aisa nahi laga tha
FlashBack
Kabir said to Ananya "Congratulation for the engagement , would be Mrs . Kabir Modi
She looked at him shocked , her eyes are clearly telling she was not a bit amused seeing this but was seriously shocked and devastated seeing this.
She lowly whispered so then only he could hear her , her voice was trembling with shock and anger
A-y..ye sab ...k..ya hai
He smirked at her , his sarcastic smirk and whispered her back
K-Kyu Ms Diamond , kaha tha na ki sabak zarur sikhunga , meri mom ko bola tha na ki tum aise ghar ki bahu kahi nahi banogi jis ghar mein unke jaise log rehte hai , ab tumhe usi ghar ki bahu ban na padega , aur meri wife ban na padega , kya karogi
Ananya was going to shout when he stopped her by shaking his head
K-aisa karne ki sochna bhi mat , tumhare pariwaar waalo ko dekho kitne khush lag rahe hai , dekho dekho (he pointed to their direction , Ananya saw happiness in her family eyes , the happiness she had never seen before , the glow on their face was telling that they had achieved aim of their life , Ananya can't snatch this happiness from them , she again turned towards him with tears in her eyes , Kabir smirked seeing tears in her eyes) , dekha na kitne khush hai wo log , wo log samajh rahe hai ki tum mujhse bahut zyada pyaar karti ho , aur isliye vo bahut khush hai ye sochkar ki unki beti ko uska pyaar mil gaya (then he moved little closer to her)kaha tha na ki tumhari zindagi ko hell banake chodunga , welcome to hell would be Mrs. Kabir Modi
Ananya looked at him with tears and anger in her eyes and her anger increased looking in the eyes of that person who is responsible for all this, "Mrs Kokila Modi who was standing with a egoistic smirk on her face.
Kabir was glaring at her but due to guest he pretended that he was lovingly staring at her .
After sometime Ananya convinced herself that she has to do it , but some questions were still haunting her , they both were sitting on chairs side by side , Ananya slowly whispered to him
A-mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai
Kabir smirked and said- Jitna puchna hai puch lo Ms Diamond , shaadi ke baad puchne ka maunka mile na mile
Ananya looked at him with angry eyes
A-how did you do this
Kabir smirked and said chalo bata hi deta hu , itna to jaan ne ka hak hai tumhe , tumhe yaad hai main tumse tumhare school milne aaya tha , us din mujhe pata tha ki tumne meri baton ko seriously nahi liya , isliye next day subah subah jab tum school gayi to tumhare pariwaar waalo ko bataya ki tum aur main ek dusre se 2 mahine se pyaar karte hai (Ananya' eyes became big as saucer , she can't believe that he told her family this , Kabir again smirked seeing this)fir maine unhe hum dono ki so called love story jo ofcourse fake thi vo batayi , then maine unse ye bhi kaha ki maine hi tumse kaha tha unhe ye na batane ke liye , kyuki main sabko surprise dena chahta tha , and you know the worst thing I said to them(Ananya looked at him with accusing eyes) , maine unse meri mom ke behaviour ke liye maafi mangi , lekin unhe kya pata ki is maafi ke badle unki beti ka sukh chain cheen ne waala hu main
Ananya head was lowered , she wanted to cry but se can't in front of her parents , who are more than happy with this arrangement , but she needed answer for one more question of her
She , in her trembling voice , gulping her clogged up throat asked "aur ab meri family ka kya
Kabir looked at her , his face became soft hearing her voice for a second but soon his face got hardened remembering her behaviour with his mother
K-don't worry Ms Diamond , main aapki tarah nahi hu , aapke mom dad shaadi ke baad mere bhi kuch lagenge ,and I will look after their needs , not as Mr Kabir Modi but as a family member , main tumhari tarah nahi hu jise bado ko respect kaise dete hai ye bhi nahi pata
Ananya looked at him with amused eyes
A(pov)-ye aise kyu baat kar rahe hai , kya inhe nahi pata inki ma ne meri family se ki tarah baat ki . Kya ye sach nahi jaante , ya jaan buchkar anjaan ban rahe hai , but ye meri family ko fir itni respect kyu denge , kya sirf mujhse badla lene ke liye
Ananya was lost in her thought when suddenly a bowl of curd fell on her lehenga , she looked at her lehenga stained in white curd , "today god was not with her , she came out of her trance hearing a female taunting voice , she looked at the direction and saw lady clad in blue bandhani saree was shouting at the girl who was fearly looking down
L- haye haaye , ye kya kar diya tune gopi , hone waali dulhan ki puri dress kharaab kar di , aisa koi karta hai kya
G-maaf karna maami vo galti se ho gaya
Ma-areymujhses kya maafi maang rahi hai , Ananya se maang
Gopi turned towards her , she was shivering because all eyes are looking at her only . Ananya understood it stand up from her seat , Kabir also stood upexpectingn lot of drama from Ananya's side , but got shocked hearing her
A- um its ok , aap faaltu mein tension mat lijie , galti se ho gaya hoga , main ise saaf karke aati hu , maa chaliye na
Anisha nodded her head and both gone from there
After exchanging the ring when they again were seated on chairs
K-tumse ye expected nahi tha
She looked at him confused
A-kya expected nahi tha
K-yehi ki tum koi scene create kiye bina unhe aise hi chod dogi
A-kinhe?
K-meri hone waali bhabhi ko , jinhone tumpar dahi giraayi
A-aapne dekha nahi vo kitna dar gayi thi , faaltu mein scene create hota to vo ro deti
K-tumhe kabse dusro ki fikar hone lagi
Ananya glared at him which he equally return
FlashBack End
END

Hello to all
Finally maine kuch update kiya
Do read and comment please
Edited by vssdp - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Wow vaishu kamal hi kar diya tune to. Very different story. I loved the little Gujarati flavour in it. I hate this kokila for distorting ananya's image in front of kabir. I hope kabir will discover the truth. But the good thing is that kabir and ananya are getting married. Very nice concept loved it thank you for the pm and do continue soon. Love
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Awesome update
Totally different concept
Just love it
Beautifully written
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Amazing and Awesome...👏 👏 👏
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loved it...
Kabir is so handsome and evil...😉
😳...Loved to see the dark Kabir...
Update it soon
and
PM me...
Thanks for this PM also...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update dear
Loved it
Different concept
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

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