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Humera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ishachavan23
Nice one 👏 we need more stories like these to spread postivity and good messages. Good job budddy👍🏼

Thanks isha😊

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Humera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Dik..
Sachi main ek dm awesome n Sachs likha...
Too good noddy.. !!! 👏👏

thank you dodo

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Humera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: TaniDMGlover
Oho finally Someone is back!
I have missed your stories so so so much Na Lenin nahi tum to Gayab hi ho jati ho! Chalo ab bad main ache se datungi pehle let me tell you how this story was :p
As usual it was amazing, surprisingly no Armaan and still I loved it so much! It reminded me of all the golden days we have wiyubour cousins when we stay up late all night just to chit-chat, okay silly games and anything...it was such a heart touching story Na...one line that I loved the most..."it's 2017, but dil to 90's main hi hai Na" thsibwas like on point!
Pls jaldi jaldi likho, and bohot sara aur likho!

i guess iska reply maine theek se dediya tha if i am not wrong...

how can i not accept your command my highness...

tumne kaha likho

aur dekho mai aagayi .

😆

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Humera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: saniyapatel
Wow yaar nice apne purane din yaad dila diye,girls talk wonderful n thanx for coming back

thank you saniya😊

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Humera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: lashyyy
wow
so adorable seriously purane din yaad agaye before we have this mobile n lappy
we were much closer to each other
sach me it is cute with a beautiful msg or moral
finally glad ur back!! after ages

hey palak

glad to know that u like it.

yup technology snatched all the old school things which we used to enjoy before

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Humera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Mpakeez
Hello Mam..
Missing You So Much Humi.. But WhatsApp Block Hai to Touch Mai rehna Is Bit Impossible..

Ok Now About this Drabble..
Yai Padhke Mujhe Last Year Yaad Aaya..
If You Remember Last Year Yaha 6 months Curfew Tha.. And That Time Dad Hajj Ke Liye Gaye..

Ussi Time Saare Cousins Aaye aur Curfew Ki wajah se We Stay Together For 15-20 days ..
Internet Ban Tha
but Uske Bawajood Those Were The Best Days..
Ma Sha Allah I have 20-25 CousinS sab saath mai Thay..
We Played CRICKET, RACKETS, VIDOE GAMES, CARDS ..
We Chatted Till Wee Hours..
We Even Fought..
Even Boys Vs GirlS Group Bann gaya..
We Can't Go Outside The House because Of Outer Tension..
But We Still Lived Every moment..

I Remember 1 Of The Incident When Dad Was Comming Back From Hajj..
We Played The Bleach Holi..
God I am Still Lauging At That Incident..

And 2 Days Back On 1 Of My Cousins Got Married And We All Met Again And Did Mast..

Our House Is Adda When ever Any Get to Geather Happens..
So Again This Time we Did Pagalpanti..

And Now I am Missing Them All..

And Yeah You Gave A Good Message..
Outside This Tech World There Is Better World Waiting For Us..
We Just Need to Give a break This Smart tech Life and Cherish The Real..

Hope to See Some More Beautiful Message from YOU..
Take Care Yaar..
Missing you a Lot..

All i need to say is

Love u pakiiimannn( jaanemann)😆

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Humera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: phoo_honey
Again a beautiful update. It was simple yet innovative.
Love the trio talks and the positivity that one can feel just while reading is remarkable.
Keep writing more.

hey sara

how u doing???

u r such a sweetheart yaar

i always love your cute comments

😳

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Humera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Ek Ajnabee Se Mulaqaat ..

2004

Delhi

Its chilled atmosphere Everywhere in Delhi in the month of september...

The streets were calm n serene...

But the Excitement among the youth is something which is unforgettable...

its a concert of the nation's most lovable singer n this is the reason y everyone r happy n cheerful about...

they were actually very engrossed with their friendss n cousins n all of that sorts...

lotsss of enjoyment with minimal technology was the key of happiness at early 2000's...

until smartphones entered n all of the goodness vanished...

_________________________

she is here with her friends to enjoy her weekend

whereas he is forcefully dragged here by his friends...

Tu Hai Aasmaan Main Teri Yeh Zameen Hai

Tu Jo Hai To Sab Kuch Hai Na Koi Kami Hai

Tu Hai Aasmaan Main Teri Yeh Zameen Hai

Tu Jo Hai To Sab Kuch Hai Na Koi Kami Hai

Tu Hi Dil Hai Tu Hi Jaan Bhi Hai

Tu Khushi Hai Aasra Bhi Hai

Teri Chaahat Zindagi Hai

Tu Mohabbat Tu Aashiqui Hai Tu Aashiqui Hai

Tu Hi Dil Hai Tu Hi Jaan Bhi Hai

Tu Khushi Hai Aasra Bhi Hai

Teri Chahat Zindagi Hai

Tu Mohabbat Tu Aashiqui Hai Tu Aashiqui Hai

Tu Aashiqui Hai Tu Aashiqui Hai

KK is singing his most famous songs n everyone were enjoying his songs

singing alonggg with him waving there hands in the air...

Dressed in a simple jeans with white loose kurta n a pair of burgundy pumps She looked simple n beautiful with no makeup on...

ridhima smiles n looked at her friends who were dancing like crazy

swaying their bodies to the beat n she is calmly enjoying her time there...

whereas Armaan just entered the event n his friends joined the crowd n he cringed seeing the crowd...

he slowly slowly went towards his friends who maintained a good distance with the girl crowd...

he accidentally stood behind ridhima n smile slightly looking at the other girls who were drooling over him...

he looked soo dashing in his black jeans n black sweat shirt with a white collar shirt underneath...

KK- common everybody sing with meee

crowd- oohhh

there's so much echo in the event

he again started singing

Yaaron Dosti Badi Hi Haseen Hai Yeh Na Ho To Kya Phir Bolo Yeh Zindagi Hai

Koi To Ho Raazdaar Begaraj Tera Ho Yaar Koi To Ho Raazdaar Yaaron Mohabbat Hi To Bandagi Hai

Yeh Na Ho To Kya Phir Bolo Yeh Zindagi Hai

Koi To Dilbar Ho Yaar Jisko Tujhse Ho Pyaar Koi To Dilbar Ho Yaar...

She kept her hair behind her ears n jumped in excitement as it is her favourite song...

he gave her a perplexed look n

she was abt to fall but he held her from her shoulders

she widened her eyes as someone held her n her back was facing him

she slowly looked at his hand which were securely holding her...

he saw a glimpse of her face as she just looked sideways at his hand trying to.adjust the scene ...

he slowly removed his hands as she is stable now...

she turned at him n he is astonished to see such a beautiful face

same goes with her

his smashing looks makes her speechless as she turned to thank him for saving her from falling...

they both were engrossed in eachother not even bothering

abt the concert...

someone pushed armaan accidentally n he stumble on ridhima

this time she held him by his arms where as his face was an inch away from her face...

their eyes were locked with eachother

Hoosn Ka Maara Hoon

Dil Se Begaana Hoon

Mastana Ajnabee Hoon

Thoda Sa Deewaana Hoon

Mehki Hawaon Ne Mujhko Bulaya Hain

Pariyon Ki Nagri Mein Pardesi Aaya Hain

They both stood straight n awkwardly looked here n there...

Ladka Yeh Kehta Hai Ladki Se

Hoton Pe Dabi Dabi Hasi Se

Aaya Hoon Door Se Karne Main Dosti

Haath Mila Lo Ajnabee Se

Armaan looked at ridhima who was getting nervous

he smiles n turned his gaze away

Ladka Yeh Kehta Hai Ladki Se

Hoton Pe Dabi Dabi Hasi Se

Aaya Hoon Door Se Karne Main Dosti

Haath Mila Lo Ajnabee Se

ridhima looked at him who was smiling n was abt to look at her but she again looked back shooking her head slightly...

Jaan Lo Maan Lo Chehra Mera Pehchaan Lo...

They both now face eachother n said at the same time

Ar-sorry

Ri-thank you

the music is loud so she could not hear what he is saying...

she nervously moved further near his ear n said

ri- thank you

she quickly turned away n went away from the hall

her bracelet fell down n he picked it up n searches for her but could not find her so he moves away from the hall in search of her...

he started searching for her everywhere but she was no where to be seen...

he looked at the bracelet smiles n kept it in his pocket...

then suddenly he saw her going out from a near by restaurant...

he quickly reaches for her n before talking to her he took a deep breath n said

Ar- Excuse me

she turned at him n again got surprised to see him ..

she thought he is stalking her so decided to give him an earful

Ri- Tum

she pointed her finger at him to yell at him

but before she started abusing him he took out her bracelet from his jeans pocket n showed it to her

She bit her lower lip n kept her strand of her hair behind her ear n took it from him..

Ri- Thank you...

He smiles at her n slowly moved away from her...

she looked at her bracelet n then looked up at him...

he turned his back to her n smilingly was walking away where as she stood at the spot n kept on admiring him for his kindness

he stopped on his track n she turned her back n playfully hits her head...he turned at her n saw her moving away n again turned away

atlast they both turned at eachother n finally looked at eachother at the same time...

they smiles at eachother n he waved his hand at her...

she smiles more n he ruffles his hair seeing her smiling brightly...

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she was playing with her bracelet laying on her bed thinking abt him...

he was looking at the ceiling by laying on his bed trying to frame her in his mind...

Next Day

it was raining cats n dogs n he parked his bike nearby restaurant n stood inside the restaurant ruffling his hair ...

a lady covered her hair with her duppatta n took a shelter in the restaurant

clad in a pastel churidaar she unknowingly stood beside him who was checking his watch...

the water drops were dripping from her hair

she pushed her hair back n a few drops fell on his face...

he wiped them n looked at her n again got Amazed to see her again

she felt someone's gaze n looked at him n she was dumbstruck on accidentally meeting him again...

Ar- Hi

Ri- Hi

her heartbeat raised by his gaze on her whereas he smiles fully deepening his dimples...

They both looked at the rain feeling happy to meet again...

Ek Ajnabee Haseena Se

Yun Mulaqaat Hogayi...

The End...

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Hi guyz

I got inspired by early 2000's pop albums n so here is my little piece of work...

hope u all will like it...

please do read n like n comment below...

your feedback is important to me...

love u all

Humera..

Edited by ITSABOUT_DMG - 8 years ago

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Saniya Patel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Jst Awesome n plz plz plz continue with ur ff dil mein ho tum sirf tum n remaining two n thanx for pm

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TaniDMGlover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

This is sooo cute!
It was such a refreshing concept...Bina zyada tham jam also the story was so beautiful writer and every emotion was on point! Kudos to you for that! Pls write more and do me a favour and update all your stories cuz I am waiting eagerly!