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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Mpakeez


Beda Garak So IF ka..

haan😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Mr Perfect n Misfit








He is a perfect Prince
She is a Queen of Flaws
what will happen when they will cross their paths


Round-1

His car stopped at a traffic signal
where as she stopped her cycle right besides his car
whistling some tune n straightening her cap


he is so into his phone where as she carelessly whistle unaware of few men staring at her


Getting frustrated with the constant horns
he finally looked outside n saw her whistling n adjusting her cap


he looked at the other men who were staring at her n raised her eyebrows towards them

They moved their gaze n looked at other side

red light turned into green n they dispersed

___________


Round-2


Early morning exercise is his favourite part of the day
so he thought of doing some jogging in the fresh air rather than sweating at the gym


Dressed in his best gym wear he looked smoking hot making every girl stare at him


Wearing an oversize t with comfy lounge loose short
with a cap on her head
she started jogging while listening to her fav music


carelessly jogging she fell flat on the stomach

He stopped in his track n went towards to help her

She lifted her head from the ground n straighten her cap


he bent down a little n forwarded his hand towards her

she looked at him n he looked surprised by seeing her again


she did not even try to appreciate his gesture n stood on herself n dusted off her shorts


she straightens her cap n gave him a look n passed by him


he shrugged his shoulders n started jogging again


Round-3

An old lady was finding difficult to cross the road
she looked for help but no one was ready to help her

finally a pair of two strong hands helped her to cross her road

the old lady finally crossed it with armaan's help n blessed him by caressing his head

he smiles wide n went away n just to collide with her again

she rolled her eyes at him n thought him a stalker so pulled up her sleeves n straightens her cap meanwhile he notices her every move


she held his shirt n pulled him hard he cringed to see his shirt in a clumsy state n held her hands n pushed them gently n straightened his shirt n went away giving her a glare

she grins wide thinking that he got scared of her n went away while whistling again



Round-4


Looking at her again he made a face as she looks so weird eating her food like a child
her face is a mess n her shirt have those tomato stains on it
He never saw a girl like her before n he does not likes anything like this being a "Perfect Man" Himself

meanwhile her gaze fell on him n she kept her burger on her plate n warms up her wrist just to show him that she can beat the hell out of him

He smiles fakely with ohhh i got scared expression n she sat back n crossed her legs on the chair itself

No one in the whole restaurant looks as messy n untidy as she does


He payed the bill n went away not taking her imperfections anymore


she smiles wide n seeing him going out n enjoyed her meal



Round-5

Her toe started bleading badly n her face is covered with sweat n tears
in the middle of the road her cycle got crushed n she had some bruises on her elbows n wrists


He passed near by n looked at her in disheveled state
he soon got down from the car n went forward to help her


she saw him examining her toe n tried to take back her foot but he looked back in her eyes n blinked his eyes in assurance

she lowered her eyes n stopped moving n he got the clue n removed his hanky from his pocket n tied around her toe


he made her stand on her feet n held her by her shoulders n made her sit in his car...

she straightened her cap n he smiles slightly seeing her attitude




Round-6


Kicking his tyre he got frustrated as he is getting late n thers no mechanic to repair his flat tyre n he does not know how to change it

There she comes to his rescue on her cycle with the sweet smile on her face n an attitude to die for

she rings her cycle bell n he turned n looked at her

she arched her brow offering him help n he kicked his tyre n shrugged his shoulders


she parked her cycle n opened his cars boot space n removed an extra tyre n took few tools n in a matter of few minutes she fixed his tyre n impressed him by her cool stint


she winked at him n went away making him smile at her


Round-7

Both are smiling n talking with eachother while having a cup of tea

he leaned back on his car door n she sat on her cycle n they were having a great time chitchatting with eachother

He Straightened her cap n she punched him on his chest lightly n he winced in pain n she laughed like a maniac

Round-8

She made a weird face n does some yo yo poses while taking selfies n he literally hate that when someone behaves like a wannabe

she loves to irritate him n he always tries to change her in a better version but it doesnt even affect her a tiny bit


finally both smiles at the camera n ridhima clicked their selfie


Round-9

They have super long conversations till dawn n they never get bored of each others company

They r now face timing n she is narrating him some funny incidents while changing thousands of expressions n he just laid on his bed n watches her n enjoyes her change of expressions n laughed his heart out as her sense of humour is something which makes anyone laugh at any serious situation

he replies in his chuckles n she carries on with her silly jokes ...

At Initial days they used to change each other according to their personal peferences coz they r poles apart
but now they r just themselfes happy n comfortable with eachother

they accepted eachother the way they r n there is no awkwardness between them



Round-10


she wore his gifted T n he wored hers gifted T
they both set eachothers caps n turned towards the mirror

"Mr Perfect" is written on his T
"MisFit" is written on her T
"Best Friends Forever" written on their caps


she took her mobile phone n he kept his one hand inside his pocket where as his other hand armed around her shoulder

she sticked her tongue out n he sternly looked at her n just then she clicked the pic making it a perfect picture



_________


EveryStory Is Not A Love Story
It Something Beyond The Love...



N it was a story of two complete different human beings
who accepted eachother without judging one other's personality
n became best of friends in no time




So heres my another piece of work which is like more than the drabble n less than the os
i hope it make sense
n i really want to write something different this time apart from love stories or marriage stuff
n one thing i really changed here is
there's no long conversations no touchy touchy romance no rona dhona
just something out of the box
which am sure u all will appreciate
n yeah little late to wish but nevertheless
Wish U All A Very Happy New Year
Just Be Happy Healthy N Stronger version of yourselfes this year
Loads of Love
Stay Blessed
Humera


Edited by ITSABOUT_DMG - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: saniyapatel

Jst Awesome n plz plz plz continue with ur ff dil mein ho tum sirf tum n remaining two n thanx for pm

Thanks saniya😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: TaniDMGlover

This is sooo cute!
It was such a refreshing concept...Bina zyada tham jam also the story was so beautiful writer and every emotion was on point! Kudos to you for that! Pls write more and do me a favour and update all your stories cuz I am waiting eagerly!

Thanks tani
glad to know that u liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Beautiful drabble...

Very nice 😊

thank u😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
thanks😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: punamluvshilpa

its awesome humera,par itna chota kyon tha? start karte hi khatam ho gaya,arey thoda long likhna tha na..aur dusre ffs ud kar rahi ho kya? agar kar rahi ho please mujhe link dena..

love u
punamdi

Thanks punam di
drabbles chotey hi hotey hai na isliye maine zyaada strech nahi kiya isey
dusre ffs bhi karungi update jald hi
love u too.
take care
😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Mpakeez

Le Aagayi Mai..

Chal is baar Bakwass nahi karti direct Commet..

Yai drabble Pehle wale se different tha..
It Was ARiiissshhh Drabble..
What i liked about it, is that First time I don't want more..
I mean Perfectly Likha tha..
It had Perect starting and ended in same way..
Uske liye .. Clap.. Clap.. Clap...

And Sab se badi baat Drabble Hamare bachpan ke time se connected tha ...
Tab no cell Phone.. Smart Phone... No Social Media.. Limited Technology..
Fir Bi life best thi..

I really Miss those Days..
Tab Song Sunke Likha Craze huwa karta tha..

And Is mai Aik aur Best thing Thi.
Ki You Choose KK as a Singer..

Wow Humi Unique Choice..
Uske song kitne unique hote thay na..


Thank you for this Hatke PIece of work.. With Extra Hatke song..


Love you..
And Write more..


le mai bhi aagayi😆
mujhe bhi mast laga likhte waqt
no extra conversations no eyelocks bass normal reactions
something which i could never even think of but maine try kiya n u all loved it toh mujhe badi khushi hui
i know yaar
early 2000 days were the bestest days for any 90's kid
woh pop albums
woh colorful tape recorders, woh pyaari aadatein
ufff
dnt get me started now
i can even write a book on those days
bass time machine mil jaye
phir toh mai wahan jaakar kabhi wapas nahi aaungi aur waqt thama dungi
chal phir milte hai next comment mei
ab bye
n yeah.
love u
😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: lashyyy

aww it was sooo cute yaar
its been long i read something like that
nothing extraordinary just so simple cute but bohot jaldi finish hogya mujhe thoda or padna tha
coz it was written so perfectly

Thanks palak
kya karun yaar drabble tha na zyaada aur nahi likhna chahti thi
but glad to know that u loved it
bye
take care
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: phoo_honey

As always beautiful. Love the story, it was refreshing and very sweet. Please do write more!


Thanks Sara for loving it
bye
take care
😊

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