Mayur SS: Strangers in the night Part 16/Page 27(The END) - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Peehu87

No update... Pls update soon😭


Give me some time..

I am really not getting time to write
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 15 Acceptence Page 25

Part 16


All of people said in union as soon they heard Samrat saying it.

Both Samrat and Gunjan were terrified about the consequences, Mayank went upto them pulled Samrat's ear and sai,Sam ke bacche kudh to beta tu apni love story bana raha tha aur meri bigadne mein laga hua tha..!

Samrat : Bhai please...please maaf kerdo...please chod do... dard ho raha hai..


Nupur came upto them and said,Uff Mayank tum na.. I am so happy with you guys, I am sure ye humme pareshan kerne ka plan Samrat ka hi hoga, meri behen to pakka aisa nahi ker sakti


Gunjan said keeping her head down, Vo Di... sorry... but iss baar idea mera tha...


Samrat : Dekha..

Nupur : What... Samrat tumne meri bholi bhali behen k saath kya kiya hai...


Samrat : Mene kuch nahi kara bhabhi...vo to bass you know my charm. With that he receives a slight punch from his brother and Gunjan.


Mayank : Chalo.. tum dono ki nautanki band ho gayi ho to family ko bataya jaaye...


Gunjan : But Jiju... kya vo sab... manennge...

"KYU NAHI MANENGE...



All 4 turned around to see their parents have heard their convo, they went upto their children and hugged them.


Mr. Sharma : Tum logo ko aisa kyu lagta hai ki hum sab pyar ke dushman hai... beta.. hum samjhte hai pyar ko... and I am so happy ki tum logo ne apne liye bilkul right life partner select kiya hai...


It was a double celebration for all of them now. Everyone enjoyed together, soon Sharma family left only to meet to fix alliance of Mayank and Nupur and after that they fix for Gunjan and Samrat.


After 2-3 days

Sharma and Bhushan family's elders have went to their family priest fix the date of Mayank and Nupur's marriage. Gunkan also went upto office to complete some work leaving Nupur all alone.


She was getting bored, leaning to the window she was thinking how a cruise voyage has changed her life forever, she was all stranger to him in that island but still he managed to become an important person in her life from stranger.


That night it changed, the warmth of his nearness changed that night. She was still unknown to him on that island but still slept beside him like she trust him more than herself. Was that trust enough that slowly ring the bells of love in her heart or the ringing was already done when felt relief that Mayank was also there to accompany her on island.

She was in her own chain of thoughts when she felt a pair of hands circling her waist.


Before she could shout or call out someone he turned her around making her face infront of him. Flashing hi million dollar smile he said " I told you that I will come not like your style but still I come in my own way and see here I am..."


She stood their silently like she was absorbing the moment. A moment ago she was thinking about him and now he standing here infront of her flashing his smile which always makes her go weakens... not saying much she just hugged him tightly. She wanted to absorb that moment and so she hugged him as tightly she could and whispered in his ears, "I Love you Mayank".


He hugged her back and said,"I love you too...I'll always be there for you... you know I never knew that strangers in that night will become lovers forever I mean I always felt all this so cliche and filmy but now I realized it then somewhere these words holds true because this what actually happened in our case...we were destined to meet, the nature has already played its card on us in made its way to that we could meet we could fight and finally we can fall in love"

He continued , " Everything just fault in two places and I realize that you really meant for me know because you are the only one who can handle my anger my temper my mood swings and romantic behavior and my sadu behavior. I love you sweetheart"


They hug each other enjoy the weather out and made plans for the future.

The end

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Posted: 8 years ago
Itna short update 😔 v nice dear just luv ur ss simply awesome👍🏼 will miss ur ss plzz start ur new ss/ff on mayur... Hope to see u soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
itna chotu sa update???? not fair. mera dil nehi bhara. i want a big imean jumbo size epilogue. plz plz. beautiful update. but want another one with some cute, sweet, romantic mayur scene.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful ending but so small congrats dear for successfully completed ur story eagerly waiting for nxt concept and thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice ending... Well written story. Loved your writings...
Would love to read more SS on MAYUR written by you...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ruhana05

Itna short update 😔 v nice dear just luv ur ss simply awesome👍🏼 will miss ur ss plzz start ur new ss/ff on mayur... Hope to see u soon 😊


Thanks you...

yest this is all it is.

Thanks for loving this SS. Thought the story was very simple and plain but still I am very touched the way you have appreciated it.


Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

itna chotu sa update???? not fair. mera dil nehi bhara. i want a big imean jumbo size epilogue. plz plz. beautiful update. but want another one with some cute, sweet, romantic mayur scene.



Thanks Faru..

I won't be dragging this SS but will try write a romantic update on Mayur with reference to this SS.

Will that be good.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Beautiful ending but so small congrats dear for successfully completed ur story eagerly waiting for nxt concept and thanks for pm


Thank you...

I don't have any story in my mind yet but will surely give you an update.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Peehu87

Nice ending... Well written story. Loved your writings...

Would love to read more SS on MAYUR written by you...😊



Thank you

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