~Fiction: Chand Chhupa Badal Mein ~ A New Beginning ~ Pg 33 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Loved it dear Shanu Awesome update
Love you lots 🤗
Noor and Zeeshan are too cute
Concert was really good ... And the song you choose was also beautiful
I just loved Noor authorization on Zeeshan and the way she shooed the girls away was really good 👏
I really wish that they both can be together
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊


Thanks Goldie. Love you lots too. 🤗
Noor and Zeeshan have a really adorable bond of friendship and that will be discovered more in the upcoming chapters.

Well, both are very possessive about each other hence the jealousy. 😆😆
But destiny has something else planned for Noor which will be even more beautiful. ❤️

Stay Tuned. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: akriti154

Amazing start
noor n zee's concert was a huge hit
zee pampering noor n teasing her that her husband wonder do it fr her n her rply was cute
she was jealous of d fangirling zee was getting
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm


Thanks Akriti.
Glad you loved it, Noor and Zeeshan will get more adorable. 😛

Stay Tuned. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: SaRun.

"Yeh Zeeshan hai koi Adeel Hussain nai" had me in splits!!

Loved the first chap. A nice intro to their world. Loving Noor & Zee's bond!

Continue soonish!!


Aww, thank you Babe. <3
Glad you loved it so much.

Stay Tuned. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Such a cute and lovely update!



Thank you Choti. <3
Stay Tuned.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: poojasidd123

A very interesting chapter!



Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Res. 😎
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Unres. 😛
Yeah. Yeah I'm here this early, unlike you. 😆😆😆
Like I say, I unres soon cuz being late or being lazy and unresing after that is a pain in the ass. 🥱

So to start with, Zeeshan is an adorable fella sleeping in the only lecture Noor doesn't has in common with him. 😆😆
I even loved how he smacked Noor's head who was so engrossed in reading. 😆😆
Then his gobbling up the whole of cheese sandwich with ketchup was funnier. 🤣
So, Noor is an avid Nora Roberts Fan like us. Hehe. 😉
And then her whole going jealous over the fact that Zeeshan had complimented Alisha who was showing off. 🤣
I want to hit Zeeshan with a hathoda as to how he can be so dumb so as to not notice that soft blush on her face whenever he talks about him and her. 😕
Guys don't tend to miss such things but I'm glad he does cuz Noor has something more beautiful in store for her. 😳

Zeeshan had have a difficult childhood and one can understand it from the bitterness he holds towards his mother. The way Noor consoled him and the whole flashback was so so beautifully written. 👏👏
Little Noor and Zeeshan, Their friendship, Their innocence is so beautiful.
The way Noor says she has ample time and gave him her chocolate was so so beautiful. ❤️
I don't blame Zeeshan for being against the ideas of marriage, kids and family but Noor's optimistic approach is refreshing balanced with his. <3
The way she fangirls about Shah and hates kjo. 🤣

I cracked up at how she poked ball point into his ear to wake him up. 🤣
Samar likes Noor. 😳
It was sweet of how, he is so nervous yet gentle around her. I for one, absolutely loved their bonding over Prose and John Keats. ❤️
But Zeeshan is jealous and though I somewhere understand the concept of his jealousy but asking Noor to stay away from him was a bit too much. 😳
She isn't a kid to be told as to what to do and what not.

Update Real Soon. 🤗
Edited by .Archangel. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Loved the chapter! <3 ⭐️⭐️


The best part was how Noor & Zeeshan became friends in childhood days. ❤️ The way she innocently told him that she has ample of time and asked him to play with her was really sweet & adorable. 😳
Zeeshan going bonkers in his jealousy was cute. 😛😆

Continue soon dear. 😃 And thanks for the PM, Shano. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Beautiful part Nandini
Awesome updated
Noor and Zeeshan have a great friendship
They both understand each other so well
I loved how Noor cheered Zaeshaan
His childhood was really hard
I can understand why his thoughts about love and family changed completely
Zeeshan possessive about Noor was sweet
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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