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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: akriti154
Interesting prologue
do continue soon

Thank you so much Akriti. ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: akriti154
Congrats on d new one

Thank you. 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: SaRun.
Ohkay so I am finally here and even though late but im glad I am ! xD

Ohkay so my Adeel/Zeeshan isn't the right man for Noor? This broke my heart literally!

Amazing concept and so happy that you guys thought of sharing it finally even after 2 years.

This is going to be one amazing journey and I am so ready for it!

I'm glad you are here Hiral. ❤️

Aww.. Don't worry.. they've something more beautiful in store! 😳

Glad you loved the concept..

Well, I'm the reason behind two long years break coz I was supposed to post it and I was stuck in my 11th and 12th. :P

I hope you enjoy this journey.. ❤️

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pcnsb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Will update by this weekend. ❤️

Stay tuned.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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@whiterose29

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Res.

*Edit*

Loved the first chapter. 👍🏼

Noor & Zee's concert seemed to be very enthusiastic & fun-filled.

Lol... Noor being annoyed at the fangirling Zeeshan received after the concert was cute as well as amusing. 😆😛

Update the next chapter soon! <3

Thanks for the PM. 🤗

Edited by whiterose29 - 8 years ago

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pcnsb

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Res / Unres

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A beautifully written chapter.. ❤️

Thoroughly loved the character descriptions..

It started off with Noor and Zeeshan's concert, Symphony.

Loved how the crowd was so zealous and excited. You nailed the description of the concert environment. 👏👏

Pumped up energy levels of crowd, spotlights.. One could just imagine what an electrifying atmosphere it must be!

Enter, Samar.

"...Not breathtakingly handsome but he could struck the strings of your heart with his cheerful demeanor as easily as his fingers played with the strings of his black beauty.."

This has to be my favorite bit from his character.. ❤️

Then my Zeeshan. Uff.. *FIREEE*

The way girls screamed his name..

No doubt he's a sensation among girls..

A smile to die for? Hell yeah! I love Adeel's dimpled smile.

My Noor.. ❤️

I've no doubt that she looked like a fairy in her white sequined dress and a cute head gear..

Loved the song selection. 😳

Ikk Kuddi is a beautiful song.. I love it especially the Reprise Version. Its amazing! 👏

What I loved the most was how you synced the song with Noor's description. Brilliantly done! 👍🏼

My favorite bit has to be her smile, ..the who would light up darkest of nights..

Show had to be hit !! I'm so happy for them!

Noor and Zeeshan's bonding is adorable! Just like any best friends.. they tease each other, make fun of each other but in hour of need, they are the first to stand up by your side..

Aww.. my Noor is jealous of Zeeshan's fangirls. Can she be any more cuter?

Her, "Yeh Zeeshan hai koi Adeel Hussain nahi." had me in splits..😆😆

An amazing sneak peak into their world.

Update soonish!

Nandini

Edited by pcnsb - 8 years ago

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Sarthi Sharda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Superb update dear

Thanks for pm

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

The Whole Conversations were so Nice.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Loved it dear Shanu Awesome update
Love you lots 🤗
Noor and Zeeshan are too cute
Concert was really good ... And the song you choose was also beautiful
I just loved Noor authorization on Zeeshan and the way she shooed the girls away was really good 👏
I really wish that they both can be together
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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