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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
Part 24

Roli POV:

We were going towards the village...

I wanted to tell all the truth to Sid...

There is nothing to hide this anymore...

Otherwise my guilty conscious will kill me...

'Roli.. where are we going now... you are pregnant & its not good to travel like this...' he said...

'Its not wrong if we travel once Sid.. moreover i can only be in peace if i let you know this...' i said...

'Let me know what Roli...' he asked...

'Why urgency Sid... i am taking you there to tell the truth only... ' i said with a weird smile...

I dont know what will be his reaction... But i wanted to tell him...

I can even tell this at our home itself...

But i dont know why.. i wanted to bring him here & explain him in what situation the mistake happened...

I took deep breathe...

When we were nearing the village.. it was almost nearing midnight...

I identified the house and told him to stop...

He stopped looking at me shocked...

'Roli.. why are you telling to stop here...' he asked...

'COme with me Sid...' i said getting down from the car...

I hold his hand and took him to the house...

I dont know why he was tensed...

'Roli.. why are you bring me here...' he asked...

'To tell the truth Sid...' i said...

'Which truth Roli???' he asked...

I opened the door and went inside the house...

He came behind me with confused look...

'Sid... The truth behind the child...' i said...

'What it is???' he asked...

'Sid... it was just few days before our marriage... I was going to my village... on the way.. it was raining heavily... i was unable to drive anymore... i saw this house & parked the car there outside and came to this house... it was completely dark... I was unable to see anything in this dark room... Much later i realised some guy was inside this room too.. May be came here due to rain like me... In that situation... In this dark room.. In that coldness... I last some which a girl should not...' i said with tears sitting on the floor...

He was looking at me shockingly...

'I dont know who he is... by that time... our invitations were distributed and our marriage arrangements happened... i was wondering what can be done.. i was feeling guilty to marry you after whatever happened to me... Still i was unable to tell the truth to anyone and stop the marriage too.. we got married...' i said and took a deep breathe...

'You know how much difficult it was to even face you with that guilty feeling... I dont know why you were reminding me about that guy whenever i see you... If seeing you was that disturbing then touching you or being on your shoulder was something very far... i was almost broke down inside day by day... That is when like dropping a thunder on my head this pregnancy as symbol of the mistake i did before marriage in this room... Its horrible Sid... ' i said with all tears...

'I only need to thank you... without your support... really i might have died by now... ' i said concluding the truth...

I looked at him...

He was standing hearing everything with almost great shock...

He suddenly went down on his knees and sat on the floor speechless...

I was wondering what happened to him...

'Sid... are you ok???' i asked...

No response...

'Sid.. as you accepted this as accident without even knowing about it.. i thought of telling you the truth instead of hiding from you...' i said...

No reply...

'Sid... Does this bitter truth hurting you.. what happened to you... why are you like this...' i asked...

No response...

I was shocked when i saw tears on his eyes...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
finally roli told the truth to sid he is shocked can't wait to see his reaction update next soon Di its awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Part 25

Siddhant POV:

I was shocked when Roli told me to go the way the house was...

More shocked when she told me to stop there...

She got down from the car & went inside the house...

I was following her wondering why she is bringing me here...

To the place where i did that big mistake with that girl...

When she narrated as her mistake in that room in that dark night...

OMG... Am i hearing right...

Does this mean the girl is none other than Roli...

She was asking me so many things for which i was unable to utter single word...

Instead i was only standing speechless...

I went down on my knees and sat on the floor... with all shock occupying me completely...

'Sid... Sid...' she called shaking my shoulder heavily... to bring me back to conscious...

'Roli.. is that you???' the word came out finally from my mouth...

'What do you mean by that Sid... What are you asking 'is that you' she asked...

'I am asking about that only Roli.. is that girl you???' i repeated...

'Does this mean...' she was shocked & looked into my eyes with a puzzle...

'Yes Roli.. it was me who was with you...' i said shocking her now...

'What???' she asked widening her eyes...

'Yes Roli... you told your truth.. now its my turn to tell you all the truth... Yes.. it was few days before our marriage... i went to near by village to distribute invitation to my friends... while returning it was raining heavily... I was unable to drive.. i stopped the car in the opposite side and came inside this house...' i started narrating...

She was hearing everything in shock...

'I was waiting for the rain to stop & the girl come inside... i mean you... i was lost in that situation & came near you... We made love... But we didn't ask for any of our details nor we saw each other...' i said while she was hearing with same shock on her face...

'I was thinking of asking your details while you suddenly left me alone & went from here... As neither i saw you nor know the details.. i was unable to locate you and as you said proceeded with our marriage... i was equally feeling guilty to move with you as a wife without knowing you are the same girl... I was infact felt relieved from guilty when you said not to touch you... but its fact that i fall for you... i started loving you.. Still as you said.. you were reminding about this incident a lot... I was finding so much disturbed... Later when i came to know about your pregnancy.. i understood you did the same mistake i did before marriage.. but i promise i was not expecting the mistake was between us Roli...i am sorry...' i concluded...

Its was turn of Roli now to sit speechless in all shock...

I went near her and hold her shoulder...

'Roli... are you ok...' i asked...

'Siddhant... then its you...' she asked now...

'Yes Roli.. its me... and whatever happened is between us...' i clarified...

She touch her stomach...

'This baby is not of some stranger.. its ours Sid... You know how bad i felt to give your name for someone else baby...Now its not like that.. its yours.. its ours...' she said with tears of happiness...

'Yes Roli... you are mine.. i am yours... this baby is ours... there is no need for any guilty conscious from now on...' i said her with a smile...

'Oye Sid... what are we waiting for ...' she asked...

'What??' i asked...

' you idiot.. what was the urgency that day... otherwise we might have enjoyed our married life all these days happily instead of feeling all these guilty right...' she asked...

'Roli... its not mistake ok... dont blame me.. what can i do.. when you are so beautiful even in that dark night...' i said...

She smiled...

I pulled her towards me & hug tightly...

'Take me in your arms & lets go to our house man... i cant wait anymore..' she said...

I took her in my arms & dropped her in the car...

I sat on the driving seat while she lean on my shoulder wrapping her hand around me...

I know she is emotional & didn't start the car..

She cup my face & kissed everywhere on my face...

I cup her face & kissed everywhere on her face...

She lean on my shoulder while i started the car towards our house...

After parking the car.. i took her in my arms till our room...

I dropped her on the bed and lean beside her...

We shared hugs & kisses...

Now we are not feeling any guilty...

We didn't commit any mistake with any guy or girl...

I kissed on her stomach with all love towards our child...

She kissed on my forehead...

We made love with all longing of all these months...

Though our junior was reminding us about him kicking then & there inside her stomach...

Days were passing...

Roli was admitted in the hospital for delivery...

She delivered a baby boy whom we named as 'Roshan'...

Though he is result of that dark night.. he is the light of our life...

Lets pray to God to bless us with all happiness & love forever... 😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Hi Dears,

Thanks for all your support and feedback...

This concept is strange & my updates were strange as well...

I dont know how much it was entertaining...

Still a different try on different concept...

Do give your feedback...

Bye...

Banu...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
it was awesome Di loved it enjoyed it a lot congrats for successfully completing this Ff waiting for ur next concept eagerly gd ngt
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Wow di what a Story i loved all the parts. Congrats di for completiing this ff. Waiting for your next Story
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Awesome ff didi just love it...congorulation for completing this ff sucessfully...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
aww!!!! finally guilty feelings over...😆😆😆awesome story...i really love the story...love u banu di...beautiful ending...🥳🥳🥳eagerly waiting for ur next concept...😊😊😊
Edited by angelsaranya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow an awesome ff ...congratulations Di ...I Loved it a lot...waiting for your next ff ...come soon with next ff Di please
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice story dear congrats for successfully completed ur ff

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