A Most Awaited Meeting- An SS- Completed- 2/4/18

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 7 years ago

#201

You described everything so beautifully! I was smiling all along! <3

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 7 years ago

#202

This update made me smile! Beautiful end!

Keep writing more.

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 7 years ago

#203

Fantastic chapters Srutha😊

The scenes between lord shiva and Devi parvati was so mesmerising

The ending was so beautiful❤️

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

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+ 29

Posted: 7 years ago

#204

Over the course of your narration, Devi Parvathi undergoes a definite transformation from a girl to a mature young lady love, a lovelorn devotee of Mahadev, even though it's only over the course of several months. I love that I could see into her mindset and read exactly what she was feeling when she thought out situations. Her thoughts flowed well with the occasional meetings with Narayan ,and moved the story along very quickly, which makes for an engaging read. Her emotions and the feelings are so genuine, and they are spot-on for a devoted young girl in her situation! Thank you Krishna for this well written SS .🤗