It's not controlled AK/AR Note! PG 25

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Cytherea

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Posted: 18 years ago

#81

awesum work!! keep it up!! cant wait 4 more

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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#82

tattoo on kripa!! wow.. i can just imagine finding out my spouse having a tattoo on my wedding nite especially after knowing them since 11th grade!!!! hahaha!!!!!!

continue soooooooooooooooooooonn

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armaghan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#83

awsome wiered am kinda confused abt shivs character but truly a unique fic

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Sumra

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Posted: 18 years ago

#84

wow....i luved it continue yaar....

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Neha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#85

really nice ff... cont soon 👏 👏 👏

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candyprincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: armaghan0
awsome wiered am kinda confused abt shivs character but truly a unique fic

Thanks and what are confused about shiv?? like he's not really in the story he's dead but will be brought up in the story .

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candyprincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: kyph_roxx
hey it has beens sooo long..... plssssssssssssss continue soooooooooooooon......

i'll try cont this weekend but don't know when but i will😃

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candyprincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9
really nice ff... cont soon 👏 👏 👏

thanks

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candyprincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva
waiting

sorrryyyy..it's just i busy lately but for sure i'll post a part this weekend

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candyprincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Chapter 5

Kripa waited for Kali's teacher to call her, Kripa sat there thinking about Sammy she had already met his teacher. The teacher was an elderly lady probably in here mid fifty's, when Kripa had entered Sammy's teachers; the teacher couldn't find her glasses so really couldn't see how Kripa looked or anything. Kripa had to say that she was Sammy's mother so the teacher would know; the teachers name was Ms. Paul, she had said Sammy was excellent and told her if she sought she could see there latest writing project they had done, it was on what they 'missed the most'.

Kripa took out Sammy's paper out of her purse and read it to herself again.

What I miss the most is my dad. I loved my dad a lot, we use to live in Florida where my dad and I use to play foot ball. My dad was the best dad in the world, I use tell my dad everything that happened but now my dad's not here any more but still I talk to my dad at night when everyone's asleep, I go to the window and talk to the sky I know that my dad can hear me I tell him bout everything that happened even about my mom how she misses him a lot. I wish my dad would come back so my mom could be happy so we could be a family again.

Kripa stared at the paper there were tears in her eyes, she thought everything would be normal again but she was wrong no matter how much she tried she couldn't close the emptiness Shiva had left in there lives. Kripa saw that it was her turn to meet Kali's teacher, Kripa stood up and watched the couple walk out of the teachers room they looked pleased probably got vast news about there kid.

Kripa entered the room to see the teacher sitting in her desk checking something off.

"Hi and who are you" the teacher asked as Kripa walk towards her

"I'm Kali's mother" Kripa said as she shook hands with the lady

"Oh welcome. My name's Ms. Patterson" the teacher said as she singled Kripa to take a seat

"I didn't expect Kali's mother to be so young looking" the teacher said, Kripa stared at the lady was she suppose to take this as a complement or offensive remark.

"Thank you I guess" Kripa said as she watches the teacher give a grin

"Okay so lets get to Kali she's a fine student but she seems a little off task and all" Kripa nodded

"She's very intelligent. But it seems as if she's holding herself as in she doesn't want be very social with the other kids, she keeps a distance from everybody" the teacher said as she finished. Kripa just gave a nod.

The only thing left to do was go home she already picked Aaliyah up from Misty's. Misty had literally pushed Aaliyah out of the house and slammed the door.

"Mom when are we getting home" Aaliyah asked as she pulled her self away from the window sited down next to her mom

"Just a little more" Kripa said as she squeezed Aaliyah into a hug

"Ouch" Aaliyah yelled out, Kripa instantly let go of Aaliyah

"What happen" Kripa asked

"It hurts" Aaliyah replied pointing at her right harm which against Kripa when she had hugged her

"Let me see" Kripa said as she tried pulling the sleeve up

"No" Aaliyah said as she pulled away

"Let mommy see what happen" Kripa said as she tried pulling up the sleeve again

"Aunty hit me there" Aaliyah said, Kripa didn't register what she heard then realized what Aaliyah said

"Let me see please honey" Kripa said as she pleaded Aaliyah , Kripa slowly pulled the sleeve up to see that her upper hand was bruised. Kripa ran her finger over the bruise instantly Aaliyah moved her hand away.

Kripa couldn't believe Misty could be such a b****. It wasn't really shocking that she hit Aaliyah because Misty carried such an attitude with her.

They were finally at the stupid apartment which there so called house. Kripa had put ice on Aaliyah 's bruise, and made dinner.

Kripa tossed and turned on the sofa she couldn't fall asleep, she was wondering what she could do since she couldn't leave Aaliyah at the b****'s house. Kripa came out of her thoughts when she heard a whisper coming from the room. Kripa got up and walked to the room and saw Sam standing at the window talking to the sky.

"Sam" Sam was startled by hearing his mom's voice

"Mom what are you doing up" Sam asked

"I could ask you the same" Kripa said as she stood in front of Sam

"Just nothing" Sam replied
"Just nothing. Its four in the morning and your saying just nothing" Kripa asked

"I couldn't sleep" Sam replied

"I know I read you're 'missed the most' paper" Kripa said as she kneeled down now she was shorter than Sam as she kneeled

"You did" Sam asked

"I'm sorry honey I can't give the happiness your father gave" Kripa said

"No mom it's'" He trailed off

"I know you loved your dad, and I guess I can't fill in the emptiness your dad left" she looked at Sammy he was looking at the floor

"I miss him mom" saying that Sammy just hugged his mom and cried he didn't cry a lot after his father's death but he couldn't hold his tears this time.

*Hope you guys liked the part. I know I haven't updated in a long time but I'm really busy so I can't say I'll continue often and I have my other fan fics which I have no idea when I'll update over that I have a huge writers block I not really sure on what to write next for my other fan fics so please bare me for now. Also I know there wasn't any Angad in this part but he will be in the next part so if you guys have any predictions on what you guys think will happen I'd love to know. Post your comments*

Edited by candyprincess - 16 years ago