It's not controlled AK/AR Note! PG 25

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candyprincess

@candyprincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: armaghan0
it was so cute😛 and sad 😭

thanks

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candyprincess

@candyprincess

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva
tht was gud yet sad1!!

thanks but happy parts will come 😆

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candyprincess

@candyprincess

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#103

Chapter 6

Kripa looked at Aaliyah she was sitting on the couch in Kripa's office drawing something on a piece of paper. Kripa had asked Armaan already if she could bring someone or to say Aaliyah he said it was fine long as there is no problem.

Kripa looked at the file once more everything was correct so now she had to hand it to Armaan. Kripa got up from her seat and went near Aaliyah .

"Aaliyah mom has to go somewhere I'll be back in a sec okay" Kripa said as Aaliyah looked up

"Okay" Aaliyah said going back to her drawing

"Don't go anywhere" Kripa said as she stood up again

"Okay mom" hearing that Kripa walked out the room

Despite of what Kripa said Aaliyah , Aaliyah got off the couch put the color pencils in the box and picked up her paper and color pencil box and made her way to the door. Aaliyah pushed the door open with her left shoulder while holding her paper and color pencil box.

Aaliyah looked around her surrounding, all she saw was an elevator door far at the other end, and Aaliyah turned around and looked at the three gigantic doors stood in front of her. Aaliyah knew she'd come out of the first door so she looked at the on in the middle and the one to that she looked at both doors and she made her way to the door in the middle.

Angad sat in his office looking through some of there past business deals, when his door just opened all the sudden Angad looked at his door no one was there but the door was still open a few seconds later his door shut and stared in amazement there was a ghost in his office.

Angad went back to his work, until he saw a piece of paper and color pencil box on his table, he just stared at it and saw the wheel chair in front of his desk moving back. And then Angad saw a little girl pull her self on to the chair she sat there for a second, she only reached the top of his table so she could not see anything on the desk, and then she stood up. Now Angad saw the little girl she was cute with the round face and wide eyes and the black hair band on her.

She stared at Angad for a second

"Who are you?" Angad asked after a while

"Mom said not to answer strangers"

"Then why do you go in a strangers office" Angad questioned

"Because"

"Because what" Angad asked looking at the little girl

"Can you please tell me your name" Angad asked

"Only if you'" she didn't finish her sentence

"If I what" Angad asked

"Give me another piece of paper"

Angad got some paper from the side of his desk and handed to the girl.

"Now tell me your name"

"Aaliyah "

"Okay Aaliyah whose your mom" Angad asked

"My mom" Aaliyah replied

"No what's your moms' name"

"My moms' name is mom" Angad just stared at the little girl and her answers made Angad smile, Aaliyah was back to her coloring.

Kripa entered her office to only find Aaliyah gone, Kripa was scared where could have she gone.

Kripa was about to go out of her office to look for Aaliyah when her office phone rang, Kripa went and picked up the phone.

"Hello Kripa" Kripa recognized the voice it was boss

"Yes sir" Kripa replied

"Can you come in my office I have a'kind of problem" Before Kripa could say anything the line went dead. Kripa reluctantly went to Angad's office and Aaliyah couldn't get that far could she.

Kripa knocked on the door, waiting for her 'are you single' calling boss

"Come in" Kripa heard from the inside, when Kripa entered the first thing she saw was Aaliyah

"Aaliyah " Kripa shrieked

Angad just stared at Aaliyah then Kripa, he had no idea what was going on.

Okay guys I know I haven't updated in a while and I'm sorry for that since I was busy with school and then I got sick, well I still am but I'm a little better than before BUT I don't have my voice back and it really sucks you can't say anything. Hope you guys liked the part and I don't know when the next update will be also I know this part was boring but in a few parts it will get interesting. Post your comments on what you thought.

Edited by candyprincess - 16 years ago

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#104

yayy u continueed!!!!!!

thatwas the cutest line a kid could give anybody
:my mom's name is mom!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 :

i hope u feel better.. continue when ur allll better!!

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candyprincess

@candyprincess

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: brainychild92
yayy u continueed!!!!!!

thatwas the cutest line a kid could give anybody
:my mom's name is mom!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 :

i hope u feel better.. continue when ur allll better!!

thank u and that line i swear i heard it some where while righting this part i'm like this line came up to my head and i'm like it go nice with this part but i still don't remember where i remembered this line from anywa than k u

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Neha

@miss_neha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#106

Such a sweet part!!!! I liked bhoomi n angad convo n da part where the door moves n da chair moves, but he cnt see who it is, soooooo sweet!!! 😆

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candyprincess

@candyprincess

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9
Such a sweet part!!!! I liked bhoomi n angad convo n da part where the door moves n da chair moves, but he cnt see who it is, soooooo sweet!!! 😆

thanks i'm really glad u like it

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candyprincess

@candyprincess

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#108

thanks guys for the comments but i didn't get alot this time. 😭 but i will try putting a part up in these few weeks or so

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Rutu

@berkeleygirl818

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#109

AWESUM!!!!!!! 👏 👏 bhoomi's REALLY cute!!!! n Angad n Bhoomis
convo was REALLY cute 22222!!!!!! 😳 😳 continue soon!!!! 😃

p.s. sorry for not commenting earlier!!!!!! 😆

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candyprincess

@candyprincess

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818
AWESUM!!!!!!! 👏 👏 bhoomi's REALLY cute!!!! n Angad n Bhoomis
convo was REALLY cute 22222!!!!!! 😳 😳 continue soon!!!! 😃

p.s. sorry for not commenting earlier!!!!!! 😆

thanks