Chandni FF: I hurt you Completed FF - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

71

Views

3.9k

Users

13

Likes

138

Frequent Posters

banuprasa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Part 3

Chandra came to the entrance of the room where he need to stay...

He checked whether it is locked...

But no.. it was slightly kept open...

Chandra was wondering how come its kept open...

He thought may be they might have clean the room for him to stay...

Chandra with a smile went near the door and lift the door stop...

Then opened the door holding the handle...

Before he could realise what is happening... he got something poured on him...

Chandra was wondering what it is...

He found some Rice or Wheat atta it was...

It was kept in the top of the door in such a way that... when the door get opened it will be tilted and pour all the atta on the person entering the door...

Chandra was completely white now covered with atta all over him...

Specially head & face...

He shake his head to get the atta out of him atleast to some extent...

Then entered into the room..

He kept the bag and rushed towards wash basin...

He washed his face first so that it wont enter into his eyes...

Still.. he cant get rid of it without taking bath...

He came back to his bag and took a changing dress...

He went to take bath...

He filled the bucket with water...

The wrapped towel on his waist removing his clothes...

He took the water in a mug and pour on his head...

Chandra: aaa...

He shouted...

He felt burning everywhere...

He opened the tap and took some water directly from tap and washed his face...

Then looked at the bucket and found someone put chilli powder in the bucket...

When filling water.. Chandra.. didn't checked it...

He pour on him chilli water which resulted in burning...

He swiftly pour out all the water from the bucket and washed the bucket well...

Then filled the water again and took bath...

Chandra came out changing dress drying his hair with another towel...

Chandra was wondering who might have done all these mischief...

Is it that Roopa???

Is she that much mischief???

When i saw in the temple... she doesn't seems to be like that...

But here.. she is quiet opposite...

He was surprised as he was not expecting her to be so mischievous...

He went to bed and looked around whether anything is there too...

But he cant find anything...

Still he slowly sit on the bed and checked whether anything is there to hurt...

After he was ok...

He lay down on the bed...

When he closed his eyes...

The princess who he meet in the temple is what occupied in his mind...

He was not getting any sleep...

Still he dont want to open his eyes and disturb her image which he is getting when he closed his eyes...

Chandra was asking to the image he was seeing...

'As you so much mischievous... really its hard for me to believe...

I really dont felt you to be like that when i meet you in the temple...

WHile here.. you are completely strange...

WHy are you so different here than temple...

Is it that you dont want to do any mischief in the temple...

But you know what.. i love to see you as the girl who i saw in the temple...

Its not that doing mischief is wrong...

But to this level to someone who is stranger and new...

Or you too got interest on me & because of that you are trying all these to tease me...

I really cant understand.. whatever.. I love you.. I love you so much...'

Chandra smiled...


angelsaranya thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#22
wow such a lovely update di😊chandra fell in love with nandini ❤️waiting for next di
Linsie thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Nice story...
thanks for the pm...
Linsie thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#24
kavitha_r thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Read all the chapters in one go. Chandra is an orphan who is working as an estate manager. Roopa is quite mischievous. Chandra falling in love with Nandini.
Vampire2468 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Awesome I think it's roopa who has done this mischief of pouring atta when Chandra enters room and adding chilly powder in the water bucket right??Soo good to see chandra falling in love with Nandini but does Nandini also has the same feelings for our Chandu????Do show nandu's prov too😳
banuprasa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Hi Dears,

Thanks for all your valuable feedback.. 😊
banuprasa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Part 4

Nandhini was inside her room...

She was lost from this world...

She was on the bed upside down hugging the pillow...

She kept her eyes closed so that the image which is inside her eyes is not get disturbed...

Yes. the image of the guy who captured her heart in the temple...

Just on the first sight.. just on the very moment.. just on the very second...

Yes... She went to temple that morning...

When she prayed to God and got prasad from priest...

She turned to go around the temple...

That is when she saw him standing in front of her praying to god sincerely...

Her eyes forgot to blink the moment seeing his handsome face..

And when it blinked... it captured the image of his face inside her heart...

That is when he opened his yes and look towards priest for the prasad...

But priest didn't see him and went inside...

He seems to be little upset... and she felt he might have felt bad that his prayer is not accepted by the God and the prasad is not given as blessings...

He might have got hurt... and that very feeling itself was hurting Nandhini...

That is when he was turning from there while she forward her hand towards him with the prasad...

What if the priest failed to give the blessings... She is there to give the prasad to the person who took her heart the very moment...

When he looked at her... the eyes conveyed the words than the mouth can ever do...

She was unable to withstand his gazing eyes and moved from there to go around the temple...

As she moved.. she can see him coming behind...

She cant take it granted and think that he is coming for her...

Its a temple and after prayer every person come around the temple...

In that same way he might have come behind her...

Still the feeling inside her that he is coming behind itself was giving happiness to her...

After roaming around.. she felt that she cant stay there anymore...

If she stays.. not sure what her crazy heart will tell her mind to do...

She just rushed out of the temple and reached the house...

Since then.. she is in the bed only in his thoughts...

Avantika.. her mother too came to her room to call her for having food...

Avantika; Nandhini.. come and have food...

Nandhini; No mom.. i am not feeling hungry...

Avantika; Not feeling hungry??? surprised as i never seen you skipping food...

Nandhini: Please mom.. today i am not feeling hungry.. leave me.. please...

Avantika took deep breathe and went out of the room...

Nandhini continued on her own dream land...

When she turned towards the side...

He was lay down beside her with that killer smile...

Nandhini; you here..

She asked in surprise...

Same smile as reply...

Nandhini; Dont smile like that.. i am unable to even meet your eyes...

She said with a blush...

Still the same mesmerising smile...

She turned against him as she was unable to handle that smile anymore...

But she was unable to avoid him too...

She slightly turned her face to look at him while she found none there...

She sat on the bed and looked around...

Nandhini; Where you went leaving me...

She said with upset face...

That is when she realised it is her mere imagination...

Nandhini; Oh no.. how can i handle this...

She expressed...

She was restless minute by minute.. second by second...

The only thought now inside her mind is to see him again...

Nandhini: Where are you???

She puzzled...
angelsaranya thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#29
wow awesome update di😛😛😛nandini fall in love with chandra in an first meet it's really interesting di😆😆😆waiting for next...
banuprasa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Part 5

Chandra fresh up himself...

Its time for seeing around the estate...

MD already called him that he is sending a person named Ganesh to show him around...

When Chandra came out getting ready... Ganesh too reached the place...

Chandra; You are Mr. Ganesh...

Ganesh; yes Sir.. MD told me to show you estate...

Chandra: Yes lets go.. i am ready...

Chandra & Ganesh got ready...

As its hill station.. they were having a jeep to go around those up & down steep routes...

Ganesh seems to be good driver too...

He started the jeep while Chandra get on the front seat...

Ganesh & Chandra strated going around the estate...

It was very vast tea estate...

Ganesh; Sir.. can you sit that corner of the mountain...

Chandra: Yes i can...

Ganesh; Till there its our estate only...

Chandra; Oh ok...

Ganesh; Our MD is the richest in this hill station & hold max of estate volume...

Chandra: Good.. glad to know...

Ganesh; 1000s of workers are working with us...

Chandra; Obvious when the volume is huge...

Ganesh; Yes... they are paid every Saturday...

Chandra: Oh ok...

Ganesh: Can you set some houses that side...

Chandra: Yes i can...

Ganesh; Max of workers live there only...

Chandra; Oh well.. Its near for them to come for work...

Ganesh; Yes.. our MD only build houses for them together and made them stay there...

Chandra: So nice to know...

Ganesh; He is very nice person and do his best for others...

Chandra: I can get that seeing him...

Chandra smiled...

Ganesh; Sir.. you wish to go there...

Chandra: Of course we can.. we get chance to meet them...

Ganesh; yes sir.. thats why i asked...

Ganesh drive towards those houses...

All the way.. Ganesh was giving details about the estates.. their working.. this that...

That is when one more info was given by Ganesh...

Ganesh; Choti mam is just like his father & do his best for workers...

Chandra was thinking.. Choti mam.. does he mean his daughter...

He wanted to clarify with Ganesh itself...

Chandra; You mean daughter of our MD Sir...

Ganesh; Yes... we call her as choti mam only...

Chandra; Oh ok...

Ganesh; She teach education to those children... help girls to develop their knowledge & much more...

Chandra was more glad on hearing about her...

Ganesh; Even now.. she may be there...

Chandra now got excited...

She is going to be there is some great news for him...








Nandhini was restless...

She want to get rid of this condition...

She decided to go to those children of their workers atleast to divert her mind...

She swiftly got ready & looked at herself in the mirror...

Not sure why.. but she felt that she is looking more beautiful today than normally she looks...

Still she turned sides and checked herself whether she is ok in all aspects...

She was wondering about herself...

As its not her usual...

She normally never cares for any make up or beauty...

Infact she use very mild make up and simple jewellery...

But today.. she felt like should not look dull...

But at the same time.. she is not interested to over do the make up also...

She finally got satisfied herself combing her disturbed hair a little...

She took her bag and came out...

Avantika: Nandhini... where you started...

Nandhini; I am going to teach those children...

Avantika; But Nandhini.. atleast you have some food.. you didn't had lunch too...

Nandhini: no mom.. i am getting late...

Avantika; Nandhini.. you are talking as if your appointment is getting delayed.. you are only teaching voluntarily and they are not going to tell you anything even if you go late...

Nandhini; Mom...

Avantika; Come.. have fruits at least...

Avantika took her to dining and gave her some fruits...

Without any other way... Nandhini started having those fruits...

After having fruits.. she rushed towards those houses...






Chandra reached the place where houses were there...

When they got down.. the people who were there were surprised to see some new person there...

Ganesh: He is Mr. Chandra our estate manager...

All were surprised to know about their new manager...

They gave warm welcome to him...

They offer tea to him...

Chandra was overwhelmed seeing their affection...

Chandra went around those houses meeting those people...

Inside his heart.. Ganesh words were going on...

Chandra was thinking.. Ganesh said she may be here.. while she is not seen anywhere...

May be she is somewhere that side...

He went around here & there meeting people...

In short in search of her...

He cant find her anywhere...

He got little upset when he came back to Ganesh roaming around everywhere and found her missing...

But at the same time.. he cant even ask anyone why she didn't came today...

How can he.. is she a worker to ask being manager...

She is MD daughter.. and its her wish when to come or whether to come...

WHo is he to expect her to come just because he is searching for her...

But all these mind talks were not accepted by his heart...

His heart was badly searching for her...

Ganesh noticed his face turned dull...

Ganesh; Sir.. what happened.. you are dull...

Chandra; Nothing.. just like that.. may be due to new place...

He tried to manage...

Ganesh: Ok.. shall we move sir...

Somewhere his mind was not accepting him to go away giving up about her meeting...

Chandra: If you dont mind.. can we spend some more time here.. this place is so nice...

Ganesh; of course Sir...

Ganesh was wondering why he is interested to be there..

Chandra was going here & there talking to them some or other...

Now Ganesh need to return...

Ganesh: Sir.. MD will be searching for me.. if you dont mind... shall we start...

Chandra; Of course we can.. come.. lets go...

Chandra knows he cant push him to stay more...

Ganesh get into the jeep...

Now its turn of Chandra to get in...

He was wondering... why i feel uneasy... something is there...

When he kept his one leg on the jeep to get in and was about to get in...

He saw her...

Yes.. he saw her coming towards those houses with a bag...

May be she carries books in that bag to teach them...

On seeing her his face brightened...





Nandhini who was rushing towards there casually lift her face & looked at their jeep standing there...

Nandhini was thinking.. why jeep came here... for whom...

She lift her face & saw him.. the guy who stole her heart in the temple...

She was pleasantly surprised...

She was wondering.. how come he is here...

And that too why he is getting into our jeep...

Nandhini looked at him surprised...

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 15 days ago

A shy young artist pours her soul into hidden sketches, never suspecting they reach an unexpected admirer. Trapped in webs of deception that...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 14 days ago

Inspired by the timeless Bollywood tale "Raja Hindustani", this story unfolds in the snowy embrace of Manali, a free-spirited taxi driver and a...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 months ago

In Every Birth, Find Me The night air in Mathura was thick with monsoon rains. In her small room lit only by a flickering diya, Radhika drifted...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 14 days ago

Written on the lines of the film Punjabi House, this story follows a young man burdened by debt who fakes his death and hides in a Punjabi...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 months ago

Whispers of Maya The glass towers of Delhi glittered under the cold moonlight, but inside the corner office of Ruan Publications, darkness...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".