Arnav-Khushi: Hold me like I'm more than just a friend (Part 10 - p55)

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Very gripping story
Beautifully written
Got me hooked
Really liked the way you explain Arnav's and Khushi's POV
Hope things get easy for them

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Your Arnav is worthy of your fey, delightful Khushi. His moral compass, his fortitude, is exemplary.

My first reaction was that he should confide in her. She is his wife. But, then you realise theirs is a relationship that was still at its nascent stage. And the duties of a lifetime would still take precedence at this moment.

Self sacrifice is admirable in its place, but he needs to balance it with the responsibility and duty he has to the woman he has married.

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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Beautiful update...hope everything between Arnav and khushi is sorted out soon...

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Cant see arnav suffering soo much 😭

Pls make khushi know the truth in some way !

Update next part super soon...

Thnxx for pm 😊

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Soo it's Akash
I feel bad for both Arnav and Khushi
I really hope Khushis joins the dots before Arnav does anything drastic

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#186

I think she deserves the truth man. Pls open up now if you want her to live. She needs this much at least. Your brother can I think now learn to live life on his own than being a parasite.

Cheers

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malarun

@malarun

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#187

I simply like the way you wrote this story, I stumbled on thsi story and read all parts in one go, I have not read your previous stories I will start reading them asap.

Extremely beautiful way of expressing the emotions, waiting to see arshi moments...

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Mrieshka

@Mrieshka

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#188

What a beautiful story and brilliant concept and writing. Arnav and Khushi are star crossed -- my heart cried on their irony.

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Although my heart goes out to Arnav and Khushi both, but Arnav should understand he can't put Khushi's life and happiness at stake for protecting his unworthy brother.
Arnav is trying to protect someone , who is totally selfish and insensitive. Rather than knocking some sense into his younger brother's head, he is sacrificing his and Khushi's happiness. High time Akash owns up his own responsibilities!

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#190

Time for a nudge for Arnav to do something to make Khushi stay...

Values are important in life, they help you grow into the right kind of person. Remorse is also good since that makes him regret his mistakes. But sometimes priorities need to be set in life irrespective of these two.

I will not say Arnav took Khushi for granted because thats not intentional here. But somehow it became unintentional here...