Sujal Kashish SS : The Renaissance * Part 2 updated Pg 3*

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rkchandni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Hope it keeps you excited, as I write further too.
Its set at the point where Sujal sets Mrs. Raheja free and releases her from the contract. He makes his effort to move on, finally.

Exact from this point i
I wanted some thing dhasu in kth
But I will like a great to read from this part
Dear olzz update soon

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Sanchari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Part - 1

Sujal

"Tumhare liye ab kuchh mehsoos nahi hota mujhe. Na pyaar, na gussa, na afsos aur na hi nafrat. Tumhare hone na hone se mujhe koi fark nahi padta. You don't exist for me Mr. Sujal Garewal."

This was all I could hear from the woman who had been the center of my existence, ever since I had first laid my eyes on her, the day she sat across me nervously fidgeting with her fingers, trying to make up answers for my obnoxious questions. The girl who had fooled me, into buying a bottle of vitamin supplements for her, the girl who hit my car in her euphoric exuberance and couldn't muster up the courage to help me but could go straight to the police to confess her deed.

Kashish.

The woman who had shown me samsara and nirvana at the same time ! The woman for whom I had won empires and the woman for whom I could sign them off, in the blink of an eye. I, Sujal Garewal, have ceased to exist for Her.

I could still see her lips moving, but nothing registered in my mind. I could hear her voice, the voice that could make my stone of a heart melt. Yet, today, nothing made sense. Suddenly, I found myself zoned out. It felt as if my emotions, senses and most of all, every molecule of my existence were being squeezed out, drop by drop ,gradually , till there was nothing left. Pain, I should have felt it. Immense pain. But, I didn't. Not even a bit. Not even when I am a broke again, unsure of how to put the pieces together, unlike the last time when she chose Piyush, my best friend, over me, my love, my devotion.

This ! Was this the end ? Was this the light at the end of the dark tunnel that my life had become ? Was this an end to the miseries that I had deliberately put myself into ? Was this what I had thought it would be like, when I had persuaded Kashish to work with me in exchange of the loan I had given to save the R & G ? Kashish, I had wanted my Kashish, for once to look beyond the wedded responsibilities of that sham of a marriage to Piyush, and pay heed to what her heart desired. But, had I been wrong all along ? Did she ever really want me at the first place ? Was it just a mirage I was running after ? Or had I really failed to notice my Kashish being smothered and Mrs. Raheja taking the place instead !

Mrs. Raheja, was all that was left of MY girl !

With this realization striking me like a thunderbolt, I came back to the present. I heard her saying ,

" I am here to repay the debts of my family, Sir."

Sir, the word took me back to those lovely days when I had dared to find happiness for myself. We would steal glances, share a touch here and there , sneak out for a hug and dream of a beautiful future together. Yet , today the Sir felt different. Distant, cold and bitter. She continued,

"... working for you isn't a choice. Meri majboori hai yeh. I am doing this for my husband, for the family I got married into. "

Husband. Every time I've heard this word from her mouth, it has pierced my heart and left me bleeding. But today, I will put an end to it all. Sujal Garewal will not tolerate anymore insults hurled at him, by his lost love, his Best Friend's wife, Mrs. Kashish Piyush Raheja. Sujal was never after Mrs. Raheja anyway. I had wanted my Kashish back but today I pledge to build a world, that without any trace of her!

"Before you go any further, Mrs. Raheja, let me inform you that you are fired. Your services are no longer required."

I finally let out the words which I had been striving to speak, since the last few minutes. An instant wave of relief hit me. I felt light. It felt like a burden had been lifted off my shoulders. I realized that with those few words, I had finally embarked upon my journey towards peace and tranquility. In that one moment, I had let her go, something which I had failed to do over and over again, even when she told me that she would be having a baby with Piyush. But now, when I had done the unthinkable, there was no looking back. I suddenly noticed her confident demeanor breaking, the gleam in her eyes fading away, her shoulders slumping down in defeat. Nevertheless, she still hit back at me..

"Maine aapse karzaa liya tha. Aur usey chukaye bagair main kahiin nahi ja sakti, Sir"

At that very moment I felt like laughing out loud at my own stupidity. How could I be audacious enough to think that Mrs. Raheja would give up without putting up a fight ! But, I wasn't ready for it now, not anymore. I just wanted her out of my sight, of my damn world.

"Jo paise maine loan ke taur par R&G ko diye, woh tumhe waapas lautane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Samajh lo ki who meri taraf se tumhe aur Piyush ko shadi ka tohfa tha.

Bas, mujhpar ek ehsaan karna, phir kabhi peechhe mudkar mat dekhna. Phir kabhi mere aankhon ke saamne mat aana"

Tearing the legal contract papers binding Mrs.Raheja to me, I ended , all that was ever there between Kashish Sinha and Sujal Garewal. I searched her face for a reaction and saw relief flood through her. Had she been waiting for this moment all this while? Was she so eager to put everything in the past and move on ? Huh! Who was I kidding? She had already moved on. The day she had slept with Piyush and slapped it on my face the next morning, my mind knew she had moved on. Far beyond my reach. But my heart fooled me into believing otherwise. Damn heart ! You're such a fool.

Now, it was time to leave. Time to venture into the new world which I shall create, for myself, by myself. I left the room with long , resolute strides, without sparing as much as a glance at Kashish. This was the beginning of my Renaissance.

Liked it ? Hated it ? Lemme know.. 😊

Edited by BedouinMe - 8 years ago

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rkchandni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Wowww
Thankuuu so much for d update
I just loved it tooo good
Sujal is also moving on
Those dialogues scenes wre took my 12 yrs back
U know what d line
U don't even exist for me Mr sujal garewal
Tumhara ho na hona was ibhated d most
M looking frwd too this
If possible olzz update soon with longgg part

Love

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Loved it...

This scene had brought tears in my eyes...

When Sujal had said, " Main tumhe iss contract se, apne zindagi se...bakshta hun Mrs Raheja"

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Sanchari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rkchandni
Wowww
Thankuuu so much for d update
I just loved it tooo good
Sujal is also moving on
Those dialogues scenes wre took my 12 yrs back
U know what d line
U don't even exist for me Mr sujal garewal
Tumhara ho na hona was ibhated d most
M looking frwd too this
If possible olzz update soon with longgg part

Love

This was a high point in the show. They had a big opportunity to make Kashish yearn for Sujal, now that he had finally decided to move on from her. That could have at least redeemed Kashish to an extent, testified her 'once there' love for Sujal. But they killed Piyush and everything changed!

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Sanchari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Loved it...
This scene had brought tears in my eyes...
When Sujal had said, " Main tumhe iss contract se, apne zindagi se...bakshta hun Mrs Raheja"

This was the point where I just wanted Sujal to go miles away from her and fall in love with someone who would actually care for him. I wanted Kashish completely away from Sujal and his life!

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

This was amazing!! The whole scene with Sujal's perspective was really poignant.

I am a huge Sujal fan, but frankly I wanted him to leave Kashish alone. A woman's NO is a NO and I was glad that finally he had let go her and understood that he no longer holds the same place in her life.

And I quite admired Kashish's commitment to her husband and the father of her child barring her constant headache inducing lectures about her holy sanskaars.

It was fate that drove her to Sujal and not her feelings. Piyush's death entangled Sujal in such a web of love, guilt and misery that he had no respite.

Finally the man is gonna get his freedom. It's time for Kashish to burn for him now.

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Sanchari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: pearl.white
This was amazing!! The whole scene with Sujal's perspective was really poignant.
I am a huge Sujal fan, but frankly I wanted him to leave Kashish alone. A woman's NO is a NO and I was glad that finally he had let go her and understood that he no longer holds the same place in her life.

And I quite admired Kashish's commitment to her husband and the father of her child barring her constant headache inducing lectures about her holy sanskaars.

It was fate that drove her to Sujal and not her feelings. Piyush's death entangled Sujal in such a web of love, guilt and misery that he had no respite.

Finally the man is gonna get his freedom. It's time for Kashish to burn for him now.

This is what I intend to show. Let's see if I am able to justice to it or not.

BTW, I remember you from the Reporters forum , mainly from those 2 long Sujal Garewal fangirling threads. 😉

About Sujal, the man was damn unlucky. Every time he thought this was the end of chasing Kashish, something would come up and he would be falsely accused & brutally shunned by his own people and he would be back to his obsession. Being a good boy, was so not in his destiny until Piyush died. 😉

Kashish : I wish the woman could talk less. Good, you decided to stick by your decision of marrying Piyush . But just to reassure herself and show the world how right she was, she constantly belittled Sujal's love for her, starting from the day of her marriage to Piyush. Just because you married Piyush, you don't get the right to call the other person's love to be mere attraction. After what happened, she and her holy husband should have either left Sujal alone or shown some empathy instead of lecturing & flinging the mangalsutra at his face in every alternate confrontation! 😆

Edited by BedouinMe - 8 years ago

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rkchandni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

This was a high point in the show. They had a big opportunity to make Kashish yearn for Sujal, now that he had finally decided to move on from her. That could have at least redeemed Kashish to an extent, testified her 'once there' love for Sujal. But they killed Piyush and everything changed!

True I wanna now kashisg to burn for sujal
N that to with piyush alive

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Sanchari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Part - 2

Kashish

"... Mrs.Raheja, you are fired. Your services are no longer required."

The words came out of his mouth and reverberated in my mind crushing me down. I should have felt relieved instantly. But I didn't . And I knew why. If Sujal fires me from the position of his secretary it would mean doom for Piyush and my family. He will take over R&G to get back the money he loaned. I couldn't allow this to happen. Not this time. Not ever. I will not allow Sujal Garewal to trample our happiness yet again. Come on Kashish, you cannot allow this man to defeat you yet again. I found myself saying,

" Maine aapse karza liya tha. Aur usey chukaye bagair main kahiin nahi ja sakti, Sir"

Sir. Yes. You are that to me Sujal. You are only that to me ! This is all that is left of us. You are the boss I have been forced to work under, for the sake of my people. And I, Mrs. Kashish Piyush Raheja, will go through this ordeal and come out of it unscathed, untainted. Once I come out of it, the name Sujal Garewal would be out of my life forever. The man for whom I had once felt boundless love. The slightest touch from him could make my body tingle deliciously and my heart would flutter at his sincere words. But things have changed and so have my feelings for him. Over the months, my feelings for him have transcended from love to remorse to hatred to disgust and today , at this juncture , I feel nothing. Yes. Kashish feels nothing for Sujal anymore! If he thought, he was going to have me bothered by forcing me to work for him, I was going to prove him wrong.

You have been wrong all the way, Sujal, blinded by your obsession. But, what he spoke next, brought me out of my reverie.

"Jo paise maine loan ke taur par R&G ko diye, woh tumhe waapas lautane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Samajh lo ki who meri taraf se tumhe aur Piyush ko shadi ka tohfa tha.

Bas, mujhpar ek ehsaan karna, phir kabhi peechhe mudkar mat dekhna. Phir kabhi mere aankhon ke saamne mat aana"

Did he just say, what I thought he did ? Was this the moment ? The moment when Sujal Garewal would finally give up his obsession of getting back, what was never his at the first place. The moment when he would finally walk out of our lives, forever. My eyes turned heavenwards on their own accord. Was this the end of an era? I knew it had just been a few months, but suddenly this felt like a rebirth. It felt like my caged soul had been set free. This was the end. The end of whatever ever transpired between Sujal and Kashish and I couldn't thank the almighty enough !

I saw him leaving the room with resolute steps and banging the door close, behind him.

I slowly slumped down on my knees. It suddenly felt like all my strength had been drained out. All the power I had gathered in myself to put up with this man, had left my body. It felt surreal. Was it time to forget these last few months as a scary nightmare? Mistake. Falling in love with Sujal was the biggest mistake I had ever made. But now, it's all in the past. It is time to embrace life with renewed hope. I had a loving husband by my side and a new life within me to care for. Nothing could go wrong now. I would no longer allow our lives to be jeopardized by any Sujal Garewal.

Coming out of my reverie, I pulled out my cellphone to call Piyush but decided against it. How could I inform him about this , over the phone and miss to see the relief spread across his face ? This was a moment we deserved to share together. This moment was going to mark a new beginning in our relationship. Free of any trace of fear, apprehension or uncertainty. The rising Sun tomorrow, shall mark our Renaissance.

Edited by BedouinMe - 8 years ago