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Posted: 18 years ago
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so how is it so far you guys tell me so i can continue
plzzzzzzzzzzz and thank you 😳 😳


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Posted: 18 years ago
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coool promo....i think they kidnap kripa.....hmmm maybe angad saves her.....cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
just read it amazing part and amazing promo is angad the boss 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i think angad is the boss. hope not.. and hopefully kripa isnt getitng kidnapped. i like ur story and hoe u continue veryyyyy sooooooooonnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part and promo
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RECAP-
a girl was walking on a beach. shes wearing a blue tangtop with a white knee lengh skirt. you see her
teary hazel eyes and her shivering bright pink lips, then you see her face and its none other than our
darling kripa!! Shes sobbing like anything and is talking on the phone with a person lets see wats she's s
talking about and who she is talking to

P- Kripa stop crying and like tell me wat happened
K- fine i was on the computer and then mom came in the room with her fiance and like she told me shes
getting married again i told her that this is to much she needs to just stick with a man and just settle down ]
and then she just started yelling at me
P- Kripa shes your mom and you shouldnt take her words seriously
K- alliyah your saying that how can you, you noe that she treats me like shit and you also noe that i cant live
with her like that house is a living hell for me

yes the person on the phone is none other than alliyah

A- ok kripa why dont you come over then we can talk about it
K- ok
A- ok now stop crying like a baby i think pritvi is enough and i dont think that i need another baby and u noe that i dont like you crying and if you dont stop crying then i will start crying to ok
K- (starts laughing) ok
A- now thats like a good girl
K- ok enough im coming over now ok
A- ok see u in a couple minutes
K- ok bye
A- bye

PART 2-

Kripa turned around and started off to her car. When she was just about to hit the side walk a arm grabbed her waist and another hand covered her mouth. She started to struggle out of the persons arms but he just tighted his arm around her waist harder. Kripa saw another man with a cloth he just tied her mouth (coverd her mouth) but it was a stinky cloth and she fainted in the mans arms.


3 HOURS LATER-

Kripa finally woke up by the sound of voices outside so the smart thing to do was to listen to the mens conversation.
(G1,G2,G3)

G1- Hey man wats gonna happen to the girl we picked up
G2- I heard that there was someone who was willing to pay 50 grand for her
G3- Ya I heard that too but i dont think that the boss is gonna sell her i think he's gonna keep her
G!- I guess, hey why dont we have some fun with her
G2,G3- ARE YOU JOKING!!!!!!
G1- noooo
G2- boss said no one can touch her i heard that a year ago when she went to the club this guy tried to misbehave with her but she left then boss got a call from this man that he wanted boss to do somthing about this, the next day i heard that the guy was shot 7 times on the head.
G1- wow

tring alinga ling the phone rang

G1- hello........ ok.............tied up...............sure we'll be there asap........... bie
G2- who was it
G1- it was tony, he said boss wants the girl
G3- k lets get her now
G1,2- ok

They went to the room where kripa was tied up


COMING UP- new character




questions-

~ where are they gonna take Kripa?
~ who is the boss?
~ whats gonna happen to Kripa?


hey u guys tell me how am i doing kk plzzzzzzzzz give me atleast 10 comments

avantika_4ever
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Posted: 18 years ago
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DO U GUYS LIKE IT AND SHOULD I CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!

im thinking to play a game do any of u guys want me to make the game

iff u guyss do then plzzzzzz pm me thnks

Edited by avantika_4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is interesting!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 i think the boss is either Angad or Prithvi!! continue soon!!!!! 😊 once again GREAT job!!! 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20

i fink the boss is kripas dad 😃

love the ff 😃

i hope im right 😃

i smile 2 much 😃 😆

kanwer 😆

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