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Posted: 18 years ago
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*YOU GUYS I HAVE TO LET U NOE THAT ALLIYAH AND PRITVI ARE ENGAGED AND PRITVI DOESNT LIKE KRIPA CAUSE SHE IS VERY ATTRACTIVE AND RICH HE THINKS SHE IS A SPOILED BRAT

BUT SHE ISNT ok i hope that helps and to also tell you that pritvi has not met kripa yet so he doesnt know her

IF YOU GUYS WANT I CAN POST UP A CHARACTER DESCRIPTION so make up ur mind😳 😳

and tell me when you guys want me to update

okkkkkkkkkk

^_^

Edited by avantika_4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
how about u update everyday, make the parts a bit long!!!! 😆 😆 if
u have time, and u dont need to put up a character description, i am fine
with it, but if everyone else wants it, u can do it!!! 😊 continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part and plz plz plz update sooon.. cant wait to read more..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: desikudi818

how about u update everyday, make the parts a bit long!!!! 😆 😆 if
u have time, and u dont need to put up a character description, i am fine
with it, but if everyone else wants it, u can do it!!! 😊 continue soon!!!

same here 😃 BTW awsum intro to the story.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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you guys ill post a part up as soon as possible ok im writin a part rite now and ill also try to make it a long part as possible
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
THANXXXXX!!!!!!!! will b waiting for it!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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u dont need to put up a charecter discription. just tell us important stuff if we need to know, or else we'll just ask questions ourselves..
cant wait for u 2 continueeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RECAP
G1- hello........ ok.............tied up...............sure we'll be there asap........... bie
G2- who was it
G1- it was tony, he said boss wants the girl
G3- k lets get her now
G1,2- ok

They went to the room where kripa was tied up

PART 3

they walked to where Kripa was tied up and picked her up she tried her best to struggle out of there hands but couldnt because every single time she tried they just held
her even tighter than before!!!!!!!! So kripa just gave up and went with them.......
They got into the car and the man started to drive

(g1,g2)

g1- man i feel so bad for her lets give her some light
g2- yup ur are totaly rite im gonna take off the bandana from her eyes k
g1- ok

the guy took off the bandana and saw Kripa's beautiful hazel eyes with tears in them. The guy looked like he didnt even care when he saw the tears in her eyes
he just looked like a man who had no feelings. Soon they stopped the car Kripa started to struggle again. They 2 guys started to get angry

g1- STOP MOVING AND THATS IT MARK PUT THE BANDANA ON HER EYES AGAIN

Guy #2 did whatever he was told and tied Kripas eyes again and started to be rough with her ( like you noe pik her out of the car and drag her into the place)
The door opened and their were atleast 50 people dressed in a black suit and 1 guy in a nice black coat with blue faded jeans. The 2 men basicaally pushed Kripa in to the
large room with atleast 50 men and their boss in the big chair...... The man in jeans got up and moved his finger in circles and pointed to the door( if you saw this movement in
dhoom, john did this move in their first robbery)... all the men left the room, but the only men in the room was the man in jeans and the kidnappers..
man in jeans- mij, G1,G2)

mij- give her to me

The 2 men pushed Kripa to the man in jeans and left. Kripa was about to fall down but the man in jeans caught her. Since Kripas hair was open, Strands of hair were tickling
her face. Kripa kept on shaking her head, trying to move the hair off of her face but it wouldnt move at all. The man saw this and the took his finger and slowly fingered the strands of hair off of Kripas face. When Kripa felt the finger on her face she relaxed and didnt feel scared any more, she felt very strange but when his finger left her face she was back to the fear. The man swept Kripa off of her feet and walked to his newest farrari and put her in the car. He buckled her up so then she wouldn't fall down on the road or even get hurt. The man started to drive very fast but every like minute he would look at Kripa, her
beautiful redish and brownish hair and her small yet sexy figure. He just looked away and made sure he wouldnt look that way again.

in a bout an hour they reached a huge mansion and the man got out and this time his touch was very rude and he just pushed Kripa out of the nice farrari and dragged her into the banglow. The Mansion was nice and beautiful and it was nicely furnished but had a hint of party animals. A young man in is 20's came walking down the long stairs. He was wearing a nice WWF see threw t-shirt and dark blue jeans. You see his nice light brown eyes and then his sexy lips and a big stud in his right ear it was none other then Anghad Khanna. He sees the girl and grins evily as possible.

A- hey josh

you see the other guys eyes, lips, and her stud in his left ear.


Hey you guys im sorry i couldnt continue soon it just that i twisted ma ankle yesterday so i was in the hospital

QUESTIONS-

~ why was anghad grinning evily?
~ are josh and anghad freinds or do they have a family relationship
~ what is going to happen to Kripa?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RECAP-

The Mansion was nice and beautiful and it was nicely furnished but had a hint of party animals. A young man in is 20's came walking down the long stairs. He was wearing a nice WWF see threw t-shirt and dark blue jeans. You see his nice light brown eyes and then his sexy lips and a big stud in his right ear it was none other then Anghad Khanna. He sees the girl and grins evily as possible.

A- hey josh

you see the other guys eyes, lips, and her stud in his left ear. the guy was none other than josh!!!!!

TODAYS PART-

Josh- (also grinning) hey man wats happenin
Angad- nothing
J- so this is Kripa sharma
A- wow she sure is hot im gonna have a nice night tonight
J- yo anghad dont be so hasty now we gotta call her house first for the money
A- totally
J- ready
A- sure but lets see her face first
J- ok, but u do the honers
A- sure

angad slowly took the bandana off of Kripas eyes and he saw a glimpse of fear that gave him a good feeling. Kripa was super scared and felt like she was gonna die. She wondered if her mom and dad were worried for her, but she doubted it she knew her mother was happy she was gone. She also knew rite now her dad had gotten a call from alliyah since i was supposed to meet her. Angad could see pain,anger and a million more expressions in her eyes. But that didnt stop him from doing anything to her. He finally opened the bandana from her lips and how they formed a scream!!!!!1

Kripa- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

josh and angad jumped and were shocked that a girl that beautiful could scream so loud


SORRY GUYS I'LL CONTINUE IN A COUPLE OF HOURS LATER TODAY BUT TELL ME IF I SHOULD ADD SOME PARTS U WANT IF YOU DO THEN PM ME TODAY IM IN A VERY BERY GOOD MOOD TODAY

AVANTIKA_4EVER

Edited by avantika_4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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BEAUTIFUL GAL SCREAM BEAUTIFULLY 😆

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