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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey just caught up.....n ur fanfic is awesome........i enjoyed......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG im so sorry that i couldn't continue my mom took the internet off because i wasn't paying any attention to her while she was talking so i will post the next part up in 2 hours and please pm me and give me some ideas and your coming birthday kk
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap----------------

Kripa- alliyah where are you when I need you I miss you so much, and Mr and Mrs Wilson I really want your warm brownies and love that I never got from Linda and dad I really want to have my head in your lap Mrs. Wilson. Dad I know that you never had time for me but I will always love you and I hope you will seriously put Linda in jail for fraud with the money you put in my name and mom I really miss you I wish you never left me and took bhai with you I really miss both of you I wish you would come back………


And then she keeps on crying. Now the scene ends with all three divided up and crying in different places

part 9----------------------



Alliyahs house--------------


In a house a girl is pacing in the living room. She looks very worried and is on the verge of tears. There is a man sitting on the couch getting very annoyed at the girl because she is pacing up and down up and down. The girl starts to talk.

(Girl- g, boy-b)

g- Where is kripa it has been 7 hours since she called to say that she is on her way but she isn't here yet. Does it take 7 hours to come to my house?

b- Alliyah why are you so worried she probably was using you and so now that you are used up she let go of you. Just forget about her

g- No she has never used me I am also rich but not as her. She is the president's daughter for heaven sakes she has so much money that she could buy Microsoft and only lose like a couple dollars she could use money as napkins and still be rich but she never ever used me and pritvi if you ever say that again I will break this proposal ok because I could find someone even better than you but I'm not ok

Yes the girl is none other than allliyah and the boy is no other than prithvi………

Prithvi- FINE WHY DON'T YOU JUST FIND SOMEONE ELSE THEN HUH WHY ARE YOU LIVING WITH ME. JUST GO TO HELL

Alliyah- fine…… (sigh) I'm sorry prithvi I'm just upset that I cant reach kripa she was in a very bad state when she called she was crying for god sakes I'm sorry

Prithvi- I'm sorry to I am also upset but not for kripa but for you, look at yourself, you haven't eaten for the past 7 hours by saying that you will eat with kripa but she is not here so wil you at least eat now please for me

Alliyah- don't worry prithvi ill eat as soon as I get any information about kripa ok I promise

Prithvi- ok I' going to my office now and you better eat ok or else….

Alliyah=- I know I know I promise I will eat ok now go or else you will be late for office

Prithvi- ok bye love

Alliyah- bye jaan

Once that prithvi left and alliyah started to pace around the room again and kept on trying kripas number.

Alliyah- I know I'll ask Surya uncle

Alliyah dialed his number and waited for him to pick up the phone

Surya- hello

Alliyah- namaste uncle mein alliyah bhol rahi hoon

Surya- haa bolo beta kya baat hai

Alliyah- uncle kripa ka phone nahin lag raha, 7 hours hoge jab oosne phone kiya tha ke vo mere ghar arahi thi aur aab ooska phone bhi nahin lag raha

Surya- teek hai tum na phir se try karo aur mein bhi phone karta hoon teek hai

Alliyah- jee uncle, bye

Surya- bye beta

She turned off the phone and kept on dialing Kripa's phone number… meanwhile josh had kripas cell phone and was about to put it away when the cell rang. Josh looked at the number and said

Josh- this girl has been calling for the past 6 hours and it's getting very annoying god

Josh picks up the cell and was about to talk when Alliyah started to talk

Josh- he……….

Alliyah- KRIPA KAHA HAI TU… TUJHE PATA HAI KE MAINE PRITHVI SAI BE LARAYE (FIGHT) KI THI TUMARE LIYE AUR TUM KAHA HO ABHI ISI WAQT MERE GHAT AOU ABHI MEIN 5 MINUTE MEIN PHONE KAROGII TILL THEN THINK UP OF AN EXCUSE TEEK HAI

Saying that she shut the phone and this got josh thinking

Josh (thinking)- wow I can totally tell where this girl gets her attitude from, kripa even made her friends like her just hot pepper I wonder what she looks like

Josh(taling to himself)- oh crap, I forgot that she gave kripa 5 minutes to think up of an excuse, but I better sit by her while she is talking or else kripa is going to tell this chick that she has been kidnapped by angad and me

Josh goes to the living room and gives the phone to kripa

Kripa- what the hell do you want now

Josh- well 1 of your friends called and was very angry at you because you where supposed to be at her house or something and that she also had a fight with what's his name……. ummmm oh ya prithvi or something like that

Kripa- oh crap Alliyah

Josh- and she also gave you 5 minutes to give her an excuse so don't you dare tell anyone that you have been kidnapped by me or angad ok or else your body will be shown all over the world in pieces ok

Kripa- whatever

Kripa wasn't that scared of these 2 kidnappers because they didn't look like kidnappers they actually looked like decent folks but they weren't

Ring Ring Ring

Kripa- umm hello

Alliyah- WHAT HELLO YOU KNOW HOW WORRIED I WAS LIKE GOD PRITHVI SAID YOU WERE USING ME FOR MONEY AND YOUR DAD IS SO BUSY THAT HE ONLY TALKED TO ME FOR LIKE 5 MINUTES THEN HE HAD A MEETING WITH THE POLUTION COMPANIES YOU KNOW WHAT I CARE ABOUT YOU SO MUCH AND YOU DON'T EVEN CARE ABOUT ME AT ALL

Alliyah was screaming so much that the phone went on speaker and angad and josh could hear what she was saying

Alliyah- WHY ARENT YOU TALKING NOW HUH

Kripa- ok alli first of all I'm so sorry and no im not using you and if I was then wouldn't you be poor like the beggars on the streets and dad is always busy the only days he is not busy are the days when there is a full moon and I know that he has a pollution meeting because the world comes first and not family and YES I DO CARE ABOUT YOU and also I could only talk if you let me talk.

Kripa answered so calmly that angad and josh were shocked. The girl who was yelling like anything about an hour ago was actually calm talking to a girl who was screaming her head off. Angad was irritated, but josh felt weird like something was forming in his heart. Josh thought it was just sadness or just hunger because he hadn't eaten anything for the past day. But little did he know that in his heart there was a little seed of love growing

COMING UP- more love grows and more fights between angad kripa and josh

QUESTIONS--------------

~what is kripas excuse going to be?
~is josh in love yet?
~why was josh so upset when kripa yelled at him
~why was josh crying



hey you guys im so sorry that i didnt post a part yesterday but here you go a part this part is dedicated to MUNIZAAA for her birhtday. HAPPY BIRTHDAY MUNIZAAA and also HAPPY NEW YEAR

LUV Y'ALL

avantika 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nooo josh cant love kripa!! sisterly love is absolutely fine just not romantically! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is soo sisterly love!! i know it cuz he is all u went with that white *****[linda] and kripa is like u went to mom!!! mommy died

awesomee partz.. i was on vacation and just got caught up!!!!!

continue soooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
awesum part!!!
OMG i luv dis!! cant wait 4 Aaliya nd Joish 2 meet nd Angad nd Kripa 2 fall in luv 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Numera89

nooo josh cant love kripa!! sisterly love is absolutely fine just not romantically! continue soon!



yeah i agree...! awesome part though!!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.



yeah i agree...! awesome part though!!😳

lol, i agree 2!! sister n brother romantically🤢 can't even think about it. continue soon.............

Nalni😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey you guys im so sorry that i couldnt continue so i will continue soon

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