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Posted: 18 years ago
GREAT PROMO!!cant wait for the plan!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey i think itz more than 10 now......i mean 10 comments as u said....so plz continue soon...we r dying to read the next part...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Jus read ur ff, itz gfr8, pls cont soon.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey you guys im so sorry that i couldnt continue the next part its just that my keyboard at home doesnt work and right now im at school trying to type a part up so the next part may be up tommorow
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Posted: 18 years ago
You said that the last time! 😆 Please continue!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
kehtay hain sabar ka phal meetha hota hai per..... cant w8 no more😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
i am so sorry that i couldnt continue its just that you know school and other things its hard to manage so ill try to update tommorow at around 12 o'clock or else on monday i cant continue on the weekend because my keyboard is messed up and it doesnt work so i ordered another one they said it will atleast take a week or 2 so sorry again but the good news is that i have the part half way done so wait for tommorow 🤢
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Posted: 18 years ago
Kool... but seriousily cnt wait for da nxt part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap:

Alliyah- WHAT HELLO YOU KNOW HOW WORRIED I WAS LIKE GOD PRITHVI SAID YOU WERE USING ME FOR MONEY AND YOUR DAD IS SO BUSY THAT HE ONLY TALKED TO ME FOR LIKE 5 MINUTES THEN HE HAD A MEETING WITH THE POLUTION COMPANIES YOU KNOW WHAT I CARE ABOUT YOU SO MUCH AND YOU DON'T EVEN CARE ABOUT ME AT ALL

Alliyah was screaming so much that the phone went on speaker and angad and josh could hear what she was saying

Alliyah- WHY ARENT YOU TALKING NOW HUH

Kripa- ok Alli first of all I'm so sorry and no I'm not using you and if I was then wouldn't you be poor like the beggars on the streets and dad is always busy the only days he is not busy are the days when there is a full moon and I know that he has a pollution meeting because the world comes first and not family and YES I DO CARE ABOUT YOU and also I could only talk if you let me talk.

Kripa answered so calmly that angad and josh were shocked. The girl who was yelling like anything about an hour ago was actually calm talking to a girl who was screaming her head off. Angad was irritated, but josh felt weird like something was forming in his heart. Josh thought it was just sadness or just hunger because he hadn't eaten anything for the past day. But little did he know that in his heart there was a little seed of love growing

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Alliyah- oh sorry ab bhol why didn't you come to my house the way you were supposed to

Kripa- sorry madam I was very busy and on top of that I am in very bad shape so can you do me a favor

Alliyah- yes why not shoot


Kripa- can you please tell dad and the cops that I have been kidn………


But before kripa could continue someone had put there hand on kripas mouth and said
(Person- p)

Person- shhhhh… now its my turn to talk ok, josh please take her to the room and remember to lock the door

And the person was none other than Angad and kripa had many expressions on her face like anger, surprised, hatred, but the biggest expression was fear. Kripa had never seen angads face the way it was now. Angads face showed anger, and hatred. Josh was least surprised to see angads face like that, since he had seen this face for almost all the kidnappings he had done this was the first one where angad had been nice or even calm in the beginning and then rough now, because usually he was rough and only rough, and the most surprising fact was that angad had never been this calm with a girl. Josh just listened to angad and picked kripa up by her waist and started to walk while kripa just realized what was happening started to scream.

Kripa- nooooooooooooooooooo I wanna talk to Alliyah!!! Help Alliyah, please

While kripa was screaming alliyah was wondering what was happening but when kripa yelled help she understood that kripa was in trouble. So she asked kripa

Alliyah- kripa what is wrong? Whats happening? Why are you screaming? Are you o……

Angad- shut up no one wants to listen to your crap ok so now you must listen to me. Your darling friend kripa is with me ok the biggest gang in India has kidnapped her so if I were you then I would be scared because this is the dragon reapers gang If you want your friend to live then you better not tell the cops.

Alliyah who was still in shock was super scared for kripa but then she was also thinking if she should tell the cops or should she tell her parents

Alliyah- whaaat????

Angad- yes you heard me she has been kidnapped and if you want to see her alive then you better come and bring 300,000,000 dollars okay and also you need to come and see her so come to the American docks at midnight tonight if you want to see her

alliyah- o..ok (crying)

angad- and remember dont you dare tell anyone yet it will be the biggest shock of there lives

alliyah- ok

sorry for the small part it just that i have been busy and i have to study for my science test because the teacher is a curusss sorry asshole so wish me luck hopefully by next week ill have my keyboard if not then wait for next thursday or friday

love yall

avantika_4ever
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Posted: 18 years ago
hehe angad getting hotter by the minute lol if thats even possible...sigh... lol continue soon!

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