**Jaan-e-maan**(part 6,pg.12)

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ok were working on the next part...it shud be up in a while 😊

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haha...yehh lets just hope he doesnt turn out to be a 16 year old rapist like his father😆...hehe we shall continue soon😉

ahahaha....omg😆...no Kajal will raise him well...😳

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ahahaha....omg😆...no Kajal will raise him well...😳

hopefully she does😆

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hopefully she does😆

ya....wen are u gunna post the next part??😕

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Part 6

"Oh my god!!!" yelled Sanjana

"This is so exciting" Kripa added

"Can we go inside." asked Nausheen.

"Sure." replied the doctor

So everyone went inside and saw Kajal holding her little baby in her hands. Everyone walked up to her and smiled. Aryan went over and kissed the top of her head, and then looked down at the baby. "He is adorable." said Aryan rubbing the baby's cheek.

"I know." she said in a very soft voice.

"I've never seen anything so beautiful." said Sanjana bending over to see the child, she kissed it's forhead.

"Mind if i hold him" asked kripa.

"No, not at all." Kajal handed the little baby to kripa.

Nausheen walked over to Kajal and put her arms around her shoulder. "How are you feeling,sweetheart." she asked

"Good, just a bit tired."

"Awwwww." said Kripa interupting Kajal. "He has the most adorable eyes, their so blue."

"My baby has blue eyes." said Kajal surprised. "let me see." Kripa handed him back to Kajal. "They are blue." said Kajal starting to cry.

"Hey, hey don't cry now." said Angad. "And let me hold him, he looks so small." Kajal handed the baby to Angad.

"This baby is so adorable Kajal, I can't wait till he comes home with us." said Sanjana excited.

"Oh, you won't be so excited when he cries a night jaan." said Arjun putting his arm around her waist.

"Shut-up. I won't mind, i'll help Kajal take care of him."

"I'd like to see that happen." said Arjun laughing.

"Well. I'm not getting up in the middle of the night." said Kripa. "I like sleeping."

"Kripa, hunny we all know that." Angad said laughing.

Just then the baby started to fuss around. He looked like he was going to cry any secong now. "Uh oh" said Angad " I think hes getting ready to cry."

"Angad you don't know how to handle kids. Let me hold him now." said Sanjana. Angad handed him to her."Oh my God, he's so light."

They each took turns holding the baby, then a while later the nurse came in and told them they had to leave, a week later Kajal got discharged from the hospital, both her and her baby were doing fine. It was the baby's first night in the house. Arjun decided to come over and stay the night. He put his sleping bag in Aryan and Angads room. While the three girls were in Kajals/baby's room. The baby had finally gone to sleep, after crying for the last 3 hours. Kripa, sanjana, and Kajal were all exausted. "Taking care of a baby is hard work." said Kripa getting into her bed.

"Yeah, I know." said Sanjana.

"Ok guys lets get some sleep now, before this monstor wakes up again." said Kajal getting comfortable in her bed.

"Yeah, im so tired." exclaimed Kripa.

"Oh, Kajal I have a question."

"Hmmm" said Kajal half asleep.

"What are you planning to name your baby."

"I don't know, we'll talk about it in the morning, now go to sleep."

Sanjana went to shut the lights, and layed in her bed to sleep, three hours later the baby was crying to the top of his lungs. Nausheen came in and was trying to shut him up, but nothing they did worked. "Kajal shut him up right now." said Kripa.

"HOW!!."

"Turn him off or something." said Sanjana falling asleep.

"I can't just turn him off." Kajal said.

"Do Somethinggggg." Aryan said coming into the room. "Please I can't sleep."

"Yeah." Angad said yawning. "We have school tomorrow."

"No we don't it's Saturday."

"Oh yeah." said Arjun "But still, shut him up, he's been crying for the last 30 minutes."

"Were trying." said Sanjana. "But this thing won't turn off."

"Don't call my baby a thing."

"Sanju aren't you the one who said you will help take care of him."

"Yeah, but, I didn't--just shut up ok."

"Ok, im sorry." He said laughing "Did I tell you how cute you look in pajamas.

"No, but you can now."

"You look really cute in Pajamas."

"Will you 2 shut up and come help me here." yelled Kajal.

They all went to the baby, and were taking turns holding it and rocking it. Once he stopped crying, he was playful, and wanted to play. So everyone took turns playing with im and making faces. Soon enough one by one everyone was starting to fall asleep. In the morning the all woke up sleep on top of each other. the baby was safely tucked away in it's crib, while the rest were sleeping like trolls.

Kripa woke up and found herself in Angads arms. How did I get here, she thought. Then she looked at him, how cute he looked sleeping. worrying about nothing. His arms were around her in a protective manner, kinda showing that she belongs to me and noone eles. Kripa liked that feeling. "Belonging to him" she thought. She knew she had started to develope feelings for Angad, but wasn't sure if Angad felt the same way, but now finding herself in his arms like this, she knew that he felt something for her aswell. She slowly got up trying not to wake him, but failed. He opened his eyes and saw her looking right at him. They stayed in that position for a while. "I'm so sorry." said kripa breaking the silence. "I didn't want to wake you up."

"It's ok, sorry for having my arms around you so tightly." he said

She blushed and just walked away. He went back to sleep, after watching her leave.

Soon everyone was awake. They all had breakfast and were now just sitting and watching Tv. Aryan and Sanjana were playing with the baby, when kajal came and sat with them. "What should I name him guys." she asked confused.

"I don't know." said Aryan confused.

Kripa, Angad, Arjun nad Nausheen came and sat down aswell. "I think you should name him Karan." said kripa.

"Karan, I like that name." said Kajal. "but he doesn't look like a Karan."

Kripa Agreed. "How about we name him Sachin." said Aryan.

"No, reminds me of cricket." said Kajal.

"Jeez, ur so picky, how about Sagar."

"Nah, Sagar doesn't suit him."

"How abbout ANGAD." said Angad.

"Your so hopeless." said Kripa laughing and hitting his arm.

"I like the name Arjun."

"I like that name to." said Arjun smiling.

"I'm not naming my baby after any of you guys, if I have to name him after someone, it's going to be my father."

"If you even think of naming my nephew Mansukh, I will hurt you." said Aryan.

They just sat there for the next hour thinking of names for the baby. "I got it." said Kajal. "I have the perfect name."

"Which is?" asked everyone.

"Armaan." said Kajal. "My baby's name will be Armaan."

"Thats such a cute name." said Kripa. "I love it."

The next day there was a knock on the door. Kajal ran down to see who it was. When she opened the door she was surprised to find her mom standing there, along with Kripas and Sanju's moms. "Mom!" she exclaimed.

Kripa and Sanjana came running down, with the baby after they heard Kajal say Mom. When they came doen they saw all their moms standing there. Kajal Kripa and Sanjana were really close with each others moms, and called them mom aswell. They called Kajals Mom "MOM" and Kripas mom "MAMA." and Sanjanas mom "AYE" (you know what they called Kkusums mom in Kkusum. Yeah thats how you pronounce that 😆 )

"I can't believe you guys are here."

"We had to come darling." said Kajals mom pulling her daughter into a hug.

"Yeah, we had to see, our grandson or granddaughter." said kripas mom, also giving her a hug.

"Where is he or she." said Sanjanas mom, also huggin Kajal.

"It's a boy, and he's over there Aye, with your daughter."

All the moms walked over to him, he had gotten a bit bigger and his nice big blue eyes were much more noticeable. As soon as all the mothers looked at this baby they melted it was the most cutest thing ever.

"Kajal, he looks exactly like you, when you were younger, except his ears are different, and his lips, but the rest of his freatures are all yours." said Kajals mom holding the child.

Soon Angad and Aryan also came down. Aryan was totally dumbstruck seeing his mom standing there after so long. "Mom." he said. She looked up at him and had tears in her eyes. "Aryan." she said. "My baby, come here." she handed the baby to Kripas mom, and ran towards her son, pulling him into a big hug. "I missed you so much beta." she said crying.

"I missed you to mom."

"How is your dad." she asked, wiping her tears.

"He's good." Then he saw Angad just standing there feeling a bit awkward."Mom this is my best friend, Angad, and Angad this is my mom."

"Hello Aunty." he said politley touching her feet. Soon enough everyone was introduced. Nausheen came back from work and was surprised tp see all of them here, at her house. She would have to make adjustments for everyone. Arjun also dropped by that day, and met Sanjanas mom, who ended up falling in love with this boy. She was happy with Sanjanas choice, which made Sanjana happy.

They were all sitting and talking when they heard a knock on the door. "Who could it be this late." asked Nausheen confused. So she went to go open the door, when she opened it she was shocked to see who it was!!!

"YOU!!" she exclaimed

"Shhh, Armaan baby be quiet please." She said while walking towards the door. "Who is it Nausheen." she said, not looking at the door.

"Kajal." said the person. Kajal froze it was his voice!

"Ronit." she said almost about to cry. "What are you doing here."

He looked at the baby and smiled."Armaan. You named our baby Armaan."

"OUR baby." said Kajal.

"Well he is my baby too."

"NO ronit he's not YOUR baby."

Everyone ran to the door as soon as they heard Kajal starting to yell.

"RONIT!!!" exclaimed Kripa. "What are you doing here."

"I'm here for Kajal and our baby. Kajal I realized my mistake after you left me, I realized how much I actually liked being with you, so will you just give me another chance, please, you even have my baby."

"What the hell do you think of yourself Mr.Ronit Malhotra, your going to come back to me and I will accept you. How do you even know this kid is yours huh."

"Because I know, and I know you know that is child is mines." he said

"Well you lost all the rights from this child, you didn't even know I was preagnant."

"Because you never told me."

"Ronit just leave, please, we don't want anything to do with you." Sanjana said getting irratated now.

"Well, I want something to do with Kajal and MY SON."

"He Is NOT your son. Ronit please just leave. I don't want to see you ever again."

"But kajal--" he said coming close to her. "We shared something special which gave you Armaan."

Aryan got pissed of now, How can he say that after raping my sister, he thought, so he went and grabbed Ronit by the collar. "What the hell do you think of yourself.You didn't share anything special. Do you know what she went through that night, NO YOU DON'T!!"

"Aryan leave me."

"You just shut up." he said letting go of his collar, "And get out of here before I call the police."

"Fine, i'll leave but I will come back. For Kajal and my son."

"HES NOT YOUR SON." yelled Kajal while Ronit walked out the door. "He's not your son, hes mine and only mine." She said hugging him tighter.

Hours later everyone was sitting in the family room, thinking about what just happened, and how awkard they all were feeling. Kajal wpuldn't let go of Armaan, she feared that if she let him go then Ronit would come and take him away from her. She didn't want that, she loved Armaan he was her life now. She had decided never to get married but to stay single and raise her son, she decided that she would give him her own name. He didn't need a father, she would be one to him, bith a mother and a father!!! "Kajal." said Kajals mom. "Beta, were all worried about you."

"It's ok mom you don't have to worry."

"Yes, I do sweetheart, your my daughter and I want whats best for you."

"And what is that mom."

"Well, I want you to get married to Ronit."

"WHAT!!" yelled Kajal Kripa and Sanjana at the same time.

"Mom, she can't, look what he did to her." said Sanjana

"Yeah, i will not let Kajal go back to him, he doesn't deserve her."

"Sanju, Kripa, we know you care about Kajal alot but he is the father of her child." said Sanjana's mom

"Aye, you don't understand."

"No Hunny, you don't understand, who would want to marry a girl who alread has a son." added Kripa's mom.

"Mama, I don't want to marry anyone."

"Kajal, you can't live your life alone."

"Who says i'm alone, I have Armaan, and he's all that I need."

"Don't worry mom I will always be with her, and I don't want Kajal going back to that guy, it's my job as her brother to take care of her, and protect her." said Aryan.

"Yeah, and now i'm here too." said Angad smiling proudly.

"Same here, Kajal's like my little sister. I've known her for so long, and I will always be here for her." said Arjun.

"Arjun, I love you." said Sanjana hugging him.

"I know." he said smiling.

Aryan was going to burst with Jealousy, but controlled his feelings and just smiled. "You kids are so sweet, it's ok Kajal I won't force you to do anything you don't want to do." said Kajal's mom. "Ok, now you kids go to bed, it's getting late."

"Yeah, and I better get going it's getting late." said Arjun.

"Ok, i'll walk you home." said Sanjana

"Sure.Bye Everyone."

Sanjana and Arjun left. And everyone eles went up to bed, Aryan ran straight to his room, and looked out his window to see what Arjun and Sanjana were doing. He didn't want to but had no choice, he couldn't stop himself.

"Arjun, your so sweet."

"Less then you." he smiled.

"No really your such a caring guy, and I love you for supporting Kajal."

"It's my job. Anyways, you better should get going, it's getting cold out."

"Alright bye." she turned around to leave when he held her hand. "This was the dullest goodbye ever." he turned her around and made sure she was facing him, and brought her close to him, so close that they could feel each other breathing.

"Well, your the one who said that I should leave."

"Well, now i'm telling you to kiss me." Before she could say anything, he kissed her, he kissed her much more passionately then he had ever done before, when he let her go, she was out of breath, she had never experienced something with so much emotion, so much love. "Bye sweetheart." she said and walked away leaving him smiling.

Edited by ***HumTum*** - 18 years ago

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Bubbly

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: Bubbles_Rox

ya....wen are u gunna post the next part??😕

we just did 😛

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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#87

that was amazinggggg.... so sweeeeeeeeettttt!!! and she better not go to ronit!!! she deserves sooo much better!

contineu vvvv soooonn!!

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Jyoti

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Posted: 18 years ago

#88

awwwwwwwwwwwwww...tht was chooo cute 😳 😊

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Neelema

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Posted: 18 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: ***HumTum***

we just did 😛

yes i read it...it was chooo cute...😳

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Neelema

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Posted: 18 years ago

#90

awwwwww...omg...that was sooooo cute...i loved it please continue soon...awww...poor Ronit...lol...awwww...blue eyes does that mean Kajal has blue eyes too...😳😛

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