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Part 4

3 Months Later!!

Ronit and Kajal had been walking on the beach hand in hand under the stars and the moon. They were oblivious to the world around them, and were just trapped on an enchanted island where it was only the 2 of them and their love. Well, Kajal's love! It was getting chilly and there the winds were indicating tht a storm was about to rise...not only outside but in Kajals life aswell. Ronit decided to rent a hotel room for a couple of hours...Kajal hesitated at first but looking into Ronits eyes made her trust him, and decided to go.

"How old are you guys." asked the petite lady on the other side of the counter.

"Well, i'm 16, turning 17 soon.' Smiled Ronit

"Well, you guys are to young to rent a hotel room"

"Look, lady my dad owns this place, so I can do whtever I want." The ladt almost tripped when she heard him say that, she had completely forgot that the was Ronit. Thr Ronit Malhotra only heir of Mr. Brijesh Malhotra, the owner of this and many other hotels.

"Ohh, i'm so sorry sit, I didn't recognize you, go to any room you like."

"Thats more like it. Give me my usual room" She handed him the keys. "Thanks" he said with a smile and walked off holding Kajals hand.

Minutes later Kajal and Ronit were cuddled up on the sofa, watching a movie. "Kajal" Ronit said while finding her hand and linking their fingers togethar.

"Hmmm." she said almost falling asleep in his arm. God I can die in his arm, she thought.

"How long have we been togethar."

Random Question, she thought."Exactly 3 months, 3 days and 3 hours." she said looking down at her watch.

"Perfect. Just Perfect. He said digging his nose into her hair.

"I know." Oh how she loved it when he did that.

"Kajal." He said again this time looking into her eyes with this naughty grin on his face.

"Yeah."

"Did I tell you how beautiful you look tonight."

"Hmm, let me think...no you didn't"

"Well, you look beautiful."

"Thanks"

"I love you." He said still with that naughty grin on his face. "I really love you." Soon enough he was placing sof gentle kisses on her neck.

"I love you too." She said wrapping her arms around his neck, getting lost in his world. It was when he started to un-zip her dress, that she came bak to reality. "Ronit" She quickly got up and faced her back towards him. "This isn't right."

"Babe. We've been togethar for so long now. I think were ready."

"No Ronit." she said getting a bit angry now.

"3 months sin't enough time. I think you should be married before you decided to go this far, or atleast a bit older. I'm only 15!!"

"C'mon sweetheart, stop being so uptight.'He said placing his arm around her waist.

"Ronit get away from me." He still didn't budge, he traced his finger up and down her bak, and once again attempted to unzip her dress. She got so angry that she just pushed him away and slapped him. He looked at her with an angry expression on his face, that scared her. " You little-"

he violently pushed her against the wall. "how dare you slap me." he said in the most angriest tone she has ever heard. "Ouch, Ronit yur hurting me."

"Oh am I really, and what do you think your slap didn't hurt me...huh...tell me Kajal...TELL ME!!!"

"Please stop shouting...look i'm sorry but what you were trying to do isnt right Ronit."

"Shut-Up...Your lucky i'm being gentle with you, God knows how i've spent these 3 months. Ha, I would have done this on our first official date, but you were too innocent, so I had to win your trust which I successfully did, and thats why your in this room with me today. But shit you turned your back on me. Jeez, I should have gone for Kripa or Sanjana, they would have been so much eaiser."

His words were peircing into Kajals heart like knives. She was completely shattered.

"I can't believe you did this.What about our friendship." She said with a tear rolling down her cheek.

"Oh God, the tears, listen that was all fake. I told you I had to get you to trust me."

"Your such a--" She said angrily.

"Such a what huh...Player...Canasova...Call me whatever you want baby...but just watch waht i'm gonna do to you.

As soon as he said that, he swung her around and threw her on the bed. "Ronit...please...please don't do this."

"If only you hadn't slapped me sweetheart." He said un-buttoning his shirt. He got down beside her, and stroked her cheek..she got up and tried to run...but he grabbed her hand and pulled her down. "Where do you think your going huh." He laid her down, and laid on top of her. "Your gonna wish you were never born after i'm done wth you, this is what you get for slapping Mr. Ronit Malhotra." He started to viciously kiss her neck leaving scars. She began screaming but sadly, couldn't be heard through the sound proof walls. This time instead of unzipping her dress he basicalled ripped it off her. he began kissing her shoulders, and ears. her face...everything. While she just begged for him to stop, just to stop and let her go. But he had became an animal..and nothing wpuld stop him now. An hour later she found herself alone in this dark room. He had left.

She was sitting in a corner by herself crying her eyes out.

Meanwhile Sanjana and Kajal were at home getting worried. "Wheres this stupid girl, I swear as soon as she gets home, I will hurt her." said Kripa

"I know, if she was gonna be this late she could have called, and we could have gone to sleep."

"Sanju, im really scared I don't know why, but something doesn't feel right."

"I know, I'm getting the same feeling."

"Lets call Ronit. Maybe he'll pick up."

"Good idea. I'll call." said Sanjana picking up the phone. She dialed his nimber and waited for him to pick up, she was just about to put the phone down, but heard a 'Hello'. "Hello, Ronit. Hey this is Sanju. Do you know where Kajal is."

"Huh...Kajal..uhhh...No. Babez who cares about KAjal, when me and you can be togethar."

"WHAT"

"What happened" asked Kripa when she heard Sanju yell.

"You heard me, how about you come down, and me and you will..you get to know each other more."

"What the hell are you saying!!" Sanjana was so shocked..she couldn't believe wht she was hearing

"WHAT HAPPENED!!" Kripa yelled.

"Oh, is tht Kripa." asked Ronit "Bring her down to. we'll all have fun."

"YOUR SICKK!!...tell me where my friend is RIGHT NOW."

"Jeez, calm down, shes in some hotel."

"What hotel."

"I don't know the name. My dad owns it. Look I don't have much time, so you guys coming or not."

"GO TO HELL!!!!!!" as soon as she said that, she slammed the phone.

"What happened..." Kripa asked curiously.

"Oh,, trust me you don't wanna know. C'mon we gotta go look for Kajal."

"Ok wait...first tell me whats going on, then I'll come."

"Ok, heres what he said" Sanju told Kripa what Ronit had said on the phone to her just 2 minutes ago.

"That thing.I can't believe it"

"Neither could I. Now c'mon were gonna have to climb down the window. The mistresses won't let us leave this late." Said Sanjana

"Good idea. Shouls we call Aryan and Angad." asked Kripa

"Yeah, call them. Were gonna need some Help."

15 mintues later, they were all in one car, looking for Kajal. Kripa and Sanjana told Aryan and Angad what Ronit had said.They were pissed off, especially Aryan, this was his sister. They stopped at the last hotel Mr. Malhotra owned. All four of them got out of the car, and ran towards the door. The same petite lady was standing there. They showed her a picture of Kajal, and she told them that she had seen her come in with Ronit. They were relived, they had finally found her. The lady told them the room number and all 4 ran up the stairs to the room. When they got to the door they knocked, hoping someone would open it, but when nobody did they decided to just break it down, but when they turned the knob, the door opened.

They walked inside. The room was dark, they heard weeping noises, from the corner. Kripa and Sanjana spotted Kajal and ran towards her. Angad ran to the light and turned it on. Just then he spotted Kajals dress on the floor...confused as ever he picked it up and took it to Aryan. Kripa and Sanjaja, stared at it and the at Kajal. They saw bruises on her face, and neck. The guys quickly ran out of the room, to go find her something warm to wear while, Kripa and Sanjana took her to the bed. "What happened." asked Kripa...afraid to know the answer.

Kajal just started weeping and hugged her friends. She was so embarassed. She was ashamed to have fallen in love with this guy. She didn't know how to tell them what happened, but she had too. "Kajal please." Sanjana has interupped her thoughts. "Please tell us." Kajal looked up at her. Trying to find words.."Sanjana...Kripa...Ronit...he...he...he.."

"he WHAT...what did Ronit do."

"He raped me." Lighting could be heard outside, while she said those words. Aryan and Angad were standing at the door...with a sweater and track pants. They were just as shocked as Sanjana and Kripa. Kajal started to cry violently..and hugged herself. Kripa and Sanjana got up, and walked towards the door, the took the clothes and walked back to Kajal. "Ok Kajal, go put this on...or you'll catch a cold."

She got up took the clothes, and went into the bathroom....10 minutes later she came out. She found the fireplace on, and cups of Hot chocolate on the table. She ran towards her brother and hugged him, she hugged him to tightly. Sanjana came and started to caress her hair. "It's ok Kajal, it's not your fault. We all trusted him." said Sanjana

"Yeah, I can't say I know what your going through, because I really don't, but please don't cry. we can't see you crying." said Kripa.

Kajal, let go of Aryan, and looked at her best friends. She wanted to just run away from there. She couldn't face them anymore. She would never be able to look at herself in the mirror again.

"Kajal, please calm down." said Angad "Just drink this hot chocolate you'll feel better."

Kajal, decided that she wouldn't run, she needed someone, and right now there was more then one. there were 4 people here with her. She went and sat down. Nobody said anything, they just sat quietly. "Thanks guys" said Kajal finally breaking the ice.

"For what." said Aryan

"For, just being here."

"How coukd we not come Kajal, me and Kripa were so worried when you didn"t get home."

"Yeah. We were planning on killing you."

"I would rather have died."

"SHUT-UP." said Kripa and Sanjana at the same time. They went and sat next to her. "Look your our best friend Kajal, we all treat each other more like sisters, and your pain is our pain." said Sanjana.

This touched Aryans heart. He then knew he was in love with this girl, well if this wasn't love it would sure turn into love one day, she was so caring so concered about her best friend.

"Shes right Kajal, don't think were gonna leave you for even a minute, because we'll always be here for you, whenever you need us. Theres no need for you to say thanks, this is our job, were in this togethar, and whatever is to happen in the future, we will always be there by your side."

Kripas words brought tears in Angads eyes. She was amazing, she knew the right things to say. She cared about her friend so much he thought. He now knew, that this is the girl he has always been waiting for. Maybe he was to young to think about that, but he did know, that his feelings for Kripa had gotten much stronger.

Kajal had tears in her eyes. "Thank you guys so much, I couldn't ask for better friends...you guys are the best, and i love you both.You gave me courage, and brought me back to life. I love u two, I really do." She said smiling and crying at the same time

"We love ya too." The both said crying aswell. Al three hugged, while Aryan and Angad stood there smiling.

One Week Later

Kajal was slowly coming back to normal, she now decided that she would never marry. Which upsetted both Kripa and Sanajana, they all had such dreams about each others' marriage. But they decided to respect her feeling, and had their fingers crossed that maybe someday a guy would come, and give Kajal all that she desereved.

The next couple of days passed with all of them completing their examz for the first term. Now they were free for 1 week. They decided to get togethar at Aryan and Angads dorm and celebrate. They were all just sitting around when Kajal flt really sick. She quickly ran to the bathroom. When she was out everyone looked at her scared. "What happened, are you alright?" asked Angad.

"Yeah, i'm fine" she said smiling "Just an upset stomach."

"Kajal your hiding something from us." said Kripa.

"No, seriously it's nothing."

"Kajal, tell us the truth."

She walked over to Aryans bed, her back was facing all of them, they were standing there curiously waiting for her to say something.

"Guys...Im Preagnant"

They all stood their shocked, with nothing to say.



****OK GUYS HERE IS ANOTHER PART OUR FAN-FIC..HMMM INTENSE HUH...BET U DIDNT KNOW THIS WAS COMING!!...NEWAYS LEAVE UR COMMENTS.****

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hmm so interesting disgusting ronit omg shes just 15 😭
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GR8 Part! Poor Kaajal! Ronit's such a freak! Anyways cont soon! 😊
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tht was wow!!!...i totally wasnt expecting tht...continue soon... 👏
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great part..rohit is such a *****
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omg...ronit..how could he??...but i love him anyway...great part poor pooja...
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nice can't wait for the next part 😊
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thanksss....we shall continue in a whilee 😃
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Part 5

"Your What" said Aryan unable to digest the word that just came out of Kajal's mouth.

"Preagnant" she said starting to cry. "I am Preagnant"

"But--" said Kripa "You can't be" she said with watery eyes.

"It's Ronit's isn't it." said Angad also getting angry.

"I'm gonna kill him" yelled Aryan.

"No Aryan, you can't, he's going to be the father of my child, you can't kill him."

"Then what do you want me to do, huh, my sister is preagant because of his foolishness, you have to suffer the consequences NOT HIM." yelled Aryan, also beginning to cry.

"Calm down Aryan, we have to find a way to settle this" said Angad.

"What's there to settle guys." said Kajal

"You can't have this child" said Aryan

"What do you mean she can't have this child." said Sanjana finally coming out of the shock.

"She's only 15."

"So, you can't expect her to kill this life inside her, it's not the baby's fault." said Sanjana

"But--"

"Will you 2 stop arguing and listen to what I have to say." yelled Kajal.

Everyone just stood there, waiting to hear what she had to say. "I decided to NOT abort this child. It's mine too, and I can't live with guilt of killing my baby." she said touching her stomach.

"But your only 15." said Aryan "How will you manage taking care of the baby and providing it with all the needs."

"I have decided that I won't stay here anymore. I' going to go live with Nausheen."

Nausheen was Kajal and Ayrans 21 year old cousin who lived in Delhi. She was really close to both Kajal and Aryan, and supported them in whatever they did, and she would surely support Kajal in this situation aswell.

"Nausheen???" said Aryan "your going to all the way to Delhi."

"Yeah. I will."

"Well you can't except us to stay here without you Kajal." said Kripa

"Yeah, were coming with you, we will spport you in everyway possible." said Sanjana.

"Count me in too" said Angad. "Besides the vacation is starting in like a month, so we could go on a leave."

"Well, i'm not going to stay here all by myself, I guess I will come along aswell." said Aryan. "Plus it's been forever since i've seen Nausheen."

"Thanks, guys your the best." smiled Kajal.

A month later they all went to Delhi to live with Nausheen they told their parents that their going to live with Nausheen. They even told them what happened to Kajal everyone was terrified and cursed Ronit, but were proud of Kajal for being brave about the whole situation. When they got to Delhi Nausheen had been waiting for all of them at the airport, she knew what happened and allowed all of them to come and stay over at her place.

**At Nausheen's House.**

"Make yourselves feel at home." She said throwing her keys on the kitchen table. "I won't be more very often, becuase I have a very hectic schedule for work this week. But I promise next week I will take you all out ok."

"Cool, so Nausheen di wheres my room." asked Sanjana looking around.

She laughed. "It's upstairs."

"I see, you have a big house." she said looking around the kitchen.

"Shut up Sanju." said Kripa "Hahaha, shes very weird like this."

"It's ok, I don't mind." said Nausheen laughing. "Well, you all can't have one room, cause my house isn't THT big. But I have enough, for 2 people to share, So Angad and Aryan you will share The spare bedroom. Kripa and Sanju, you 2 can share Kajal's room, and Kajal you stay with me, just incase you feel any trouble at night."

"Sure. That's fine with me." said Kajal "But I might sneak into Kripa and Sanjus room." she said laughing.

"Haha. Thats fine." said Nausheen. "Ok guys well I gotta get to work, so I'll see all of you around dinner time, don't bother making anything, i'll bring something. Ok."

Everyone nodded and went to go put their things in their rooms. They all took a shower and changes into new clothing. Then sat down to watch some TV. They were just sitting when they heard the doorbell ring. Sanjana went to go open it, and saw the most adorable guy standing outside. "Umm, Hi." he said

"Hey, and you are." she asked, he didn't say anything, just kept staring into her eyes, which made her smile, but she asked again. "Hello." she said snapping her fingers in his face. "I kinda asked you a question."

"Huh." he said coming out of his thoughts. "Yeah, sorry, what was your question."

"Who are you?."

"Oh, Im sorry, I didn't intorduce myself, I'm Arjun. I live next door. We were actually out of sugar, and my mom asked me ask Nausheen di for some, but i see she's not here."

"Oh. Cool. Yeah, she's not here, but i'll get you some."

"I'm sorry I didn't get your name."

"Your here for sugar, not for my name." she said with a smile walking inside.

He smacked the back of his head and walked inside after her. When he got in, he realized unknown people sitting there. The only ine he knew was Kajal, since she came and visited every so often. "Ummm, Hi." he said feeling a bit uncomfortable.

"Arjun, Hey." said Kajal "Hey, Sanjana how come you never told me it was Arjun."

"Because you never asked." said Sanjana yelling from the kitchen.

"Your ridiculous." Laughed Kajal. She got up and hugged Arjun. "It's been so long."

"Yeah, so would you mind telling me who all these people are, because i'm really confused."

"Hahaha. Sure. This is Kripa, one of my bestest friend in the whole world. And Kripa this is Arjun"

"Oh hi Kripa."

"Hi Arjun." she said with a warm smile.

"And this is Angad."

"Hey Angad." he said shaking his hand.

"Hey man.' said Angad.

"And this is my brother Aryan."

"Ohhh, so this is Aryan."

"Yeah, I'm Aryan!!" he said laughing. "Nice to meet you Arjun."

"The pleasures all mine."

"Ok I got the sugar, took me forever to find it, but I finally did."

"Thanks."

"Oh yes, and Arjun this is Sanjana my Other bestest friend in the whole world."

"Ohh, Sanjana...Hi Sanjana."

"Hi."

"Ok, so now everyones introduced." said Kajal.

"Yeah, everyone." said Arjun looking at Sanjana. Aryan felt jealously run through his body, he didn't know why, but he didn't like another guy looking at Sanjana like that.

"Why don't you stay here and chill with us for a while." said Kripa.

"Good idea, let me just go give this to my mom."

Minutes Later they were all sitting there, laughing and talking. Arjun had found out about Kajals preagnancy and was very upset. His kindness and caring attitude had attracted Sanjana towards him even more. They kept looking at each other time to time, and Kripa caught them doing so. She smiled to herslef, and was for sure gonna say somethig about this to her later on. Meanwhile Angad was busy looking at Kripa, too notice anything eles. Theres something about her tht makes her so special, He thought. But he didn't know what it really was.

Aryan was also just staring at Sanjana, he also caught Arjun doing so, and again jealousy ran through his body, he decided to oush those feelings aside. Arjun was a nice guy and he didn't want to start thinking wrong things about him.

Nausheen came home with food, and they all ate and went up to their rooms. Kajal decided that she would bunk in Sanjana and Kripas room for the night. The three girls changed into their night gowns and sat on the be ready for another one of their "night time girl talks."

"So, Sanju."

"What so Sanju." she asked

" You like Arjun don't you." Kripa blurtted.

"What??." said Sanjana going red.

"Sanju!!! I'm shocked." said Kajal

"Shut up Kajz it's nothing like that."

"Oh yaa, then why were you 2 continously looking at each other." said Kripa.

"Well, because." she sighed she couldn't hide anything from them, they were best friends. "Ok fine, I loose you win. Yeah i think he's cute, and I think I like him."

"Awwwww. He's really nice. Trust me i've known this guy since he moved in."

"And you actually trust him asked Kripa.

"Well yeah, his mom and Nausheen are friends, and his moms really nice, like I know the family, he's alot like my brother."

"Oh I see, cause I thought you wouldn't trust any guy after----" there was a moment of silence "Anyways, do you think he'll like me to."

"Sure, the way he was looking at you. I'm sure he already does." said Kripa winking.

They talked for many more hours, The next few days were passed with them all watching TV and sometimes going out. Nausheen was busy with work, for the next 2 weeks, even though she had planned to take them out, she couldn't her work came in the way. Arjun and Sanjana got even more close day by day, and Aryan was noticing and also getting very jealous everytime he would see them sitting and laughing togethar. Angad and kripa were also growing very fond of each other, they would usually go out at night for long walks, and just talk.

Kajal on the other hand was actually starting to blow up, Sanjana and Kripa had alot of fun teasing her. She would get mad, and then laugh about it herself. Kajal was now in her 5th month of preagnancy and it was her 16th birthday. Everyone had planned a surprise part for her, Nausheen took her out while Kripa, Sanjana, Aryan, Angad and Arjun decoreated the house. When she came back she was amazed to find that the whole house was decorated in her favorite colour Red. Everyone enjoyed the party.

Sanjana had decided to walk Arjun to his house. They said their goodnights and Sanjana was about to leave when Arjun help her hand. "Ok, theres something I have to tell you, and if I don't do it now, then I wil explode."

"Ok, then tell me." she said turning around and facing him.

"Umm. I like you, I mean I really like you, and I want us to be togethar." he said it as fast as he could with his eyes shut.She laughed at seeing him in such a position. He opened his eyes and frowned. "I guess, you don't like me."

"No no no no. I do, I actually like you alot."

"Really." he said with a smile that brightened his eyes.

"Yeah, it's just you spoke so fast, and your eyes were closed, and--"

Before she could say anything eles, she found his lips attached to hers, this was her first kiss ever, and she felt like she was on top of the world. When he moved aeay she just looked at him. "You talk way too much, did you know that." he said smiling and then hugging her.

From the window Aryan had seen everything, and he didn't know why but he had tears in his eyes. He wiped them and shut his window. Sanjana came home and told Kajal and Kripa the good news. They were so exicted for her. The Next Week, Nausheen took them all to a Arjun's school to get them an admission there. Angad, Kripa, Aryan, and Sanjana all got an admission, while Kajal was going to be home schooled, they thought it would be best if she was. Things were going great. Kajal was now in her 8th month of preagnancy, she would waddle around like a penguin, they had made Kripa and Sanjana's room into the baby's room.

Then one day while sitting in the car waiting for everyone to come out of the school, Kajal felt pain in her stomach. She started to scream. All of them were nearby, so they quickly ran to the car, Nausheen quicly drove her to the hospital, they took Kajal in the emergency room. Everyone paced arounf infront of her room waiting for the doctor to come out.

The doctor came out with a big smile on her face. "Congratulations, it's a boy."

Heres a Picture of Arjun 😊


OK....HERES ANOTHER PART....WE HOPE YOU LIKED IT ASWELL!!!...AND PLZZZ LEAVE COMMENTS IT REALLY ENCOURAGES US TO WRITE LONGER AND BETTER PARTS 😃

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She gave birth??? whts she gonna do wid the child??? i think the first part says tht shes married to sandeep...no? Arjun and sanjana...not so gud! they make a gud couple but wht about aryan??? Anyways mindblowing part!!! plz continue soon! 😊

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