Veeba FF - Dil - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm So sorry for Late Comment,I am Busy in Exams.😭
It was Amazing Part.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow excellent prologue ,cs and part 1 loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm and sorry for late reply.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

The next day
Baldev: If I don't show her the right place, my name is not Baldev.
His friends asked: What are you going to do?
Baldev disguises himself as a blind man. Veera is passing by. He dashes to her.
Veera: Can't you see?
Baldev: I'm sorry. I've been blind from birth.
Veera: Oh, I am very sorry. Come, I will leave you till your classroom.
Baldev: You are very kind. I wish I could see. I think I am troubling you.
Veera: No, not at all. I feel bad for people who are handicapped.
Baldev holds Veera and walks into the college campus.

One of the boys dashes her and Veera falls on Baldev.
Veera: I'm very sorry.
Baldev: Woh aake giri hum par bijli ki khambe ki tarah. Khuda ki kasam current khake mazaa aa gaya.


Veera: Who the hell you are?
Baldev: I'm the same person that you have made my face black yesterday.
Veera: I have made your face black yesterday. I will make it red today,
She takes out her slipper to hit on his face. Baldev holds her hand. All of them dance on the song
Khambe jaisi khadi hai ladki hai ya chhadi hai
Shola hai phooljhadi hai pattakhe ki ladi hai
Aankhon mein ghussa hai labon pay gaali hai
Dekho jara dekhjo yaaron khudako samajhati hai kya... (2)

Gora gora ye badan bijali se bana
440-volt hain chhuna hai mana... (2)
Isase tum takraao na janake jaan gavaayon na... (2) no no no no no no...
Khambe jaisi khadi hai ladaki hai ya chhadi hai
Shola hai phooljhadi hai pattakhe ki ladi hai
Aankhon mein ghussa hai labon pe gaali hai
Dekho jara dekhjo yaaron khudako samajhati hai kya

Aayi hai college mein padhane ke liye
Jab dekho taiyaar hai ladane ke liye... (2)
Hamne khaayi hai kasam todenge isaka guroor hum... (2) ha ha ha ha ha ha
Khambe jaisi khadi hai ladaki hai ya chhadi hai
Shola hai phooljhadi hai pattakhe ki ladi hai
Aankhon mein ghussa hai labon pe gaali hai
Dekho jara dekhjo yaaron khudako samajhati hai kya...

Everyone rejoices. Veera fumes.

The next day, Veera gets an idea to put Baldev down. She has a family friend named Rajveer who has been a karate champion for 3 years. Veera makes Baldev's poster and advertises in the college. Baldev is going to challenge Rajveer. Baldev is going to break Rajveer's bones and is going to defeat him.

rajveer - Click to view full size photo
Jaggi and Billa see the poster. They said, "Baldev what is this?"
Baldev: what did I do?
Billa: Don't act so ignorant Baldev. You are ging to fight with Rajveer. do you know that he is a champion in Karate?
Baldev sees the poster & gets shocked. He said, "No I have not done such a thing. It is definitely somebody's plot."
Veera & her friends see that. They laughed. She said, "When the jackal is going to die, it will go to the lion. But when the dog is going to die, it calls the lion."
Her friends said: Poor thing. He is going to die at a very young age.
Veera: Yes, now the band is going to be on Baldev.
Gunjan is tensed about her brother.
Jaggi: Don't worry, we will do something. We won't allow your humiliation. If you want, you can withdraw from that list.
Baldev: If I withdraw, even then that will be a humiliation for me. I will fight. Come what may.
Jaggi: You are taking such a big risk.
Baldev: it is final. If I lose, I won't lose without a fight.
Everyone goes to the ring. Veera announces, "Today is the important match between Rajveer & Baldev. This is Rajveer. He has been a champ for 3 years and this is Baldev."

Jaggi: Baldev, even now you can step out.
Veera: What happened. Are you scared?
Baldev: No, I am ready to fight. But I have a condition.
Veera: Fine, what it is?
Baldev: If I win, I will kiss Veera in front of all.
Veera murmurs, "Idiot."
Baldev: What happened?
Veera: Fine, I am ready. I too have a condition.
Baldev: Go ahead.
Veera: If you lose, you will kiss my friend Soumya. (indicating to the fat lady.)


Baldev: Fine, I have one more condition.
Veera: Fine.
Baldev: If Rajveer loses, he will kiss Soumya.
Veera & Rajveer: Fine.

The contest begins.




Edited by kavsy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love song it's awesome update really can't wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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must say.veeba are perfect for dil.baldev fooling veera as a blind boy was funny.they danced to tease veera.I felt had for veera. veera has decided to take revenge on baldev by trapping him into wrestling match with rajveer.veera and raj are so over confident that they agreed for kissing. but I hope baldev will win and he won't have to kiss that fat lady.one picture which you tried to upload is not visible. is that soumya's picture?
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one
Baldev dressing up as blind man to trick veera
Now she makes by him fight rajveer
Someone's gonna win n someone's gonna lose
But who has to kiss who
So mean of u to leave us hanging can't wait to find out who wins
Thanks father r pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes, that is Soumya's pic.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

must say.veeba are perfect for dil.baldev fooling veera as a blind boy was funny.they danced to tease veera.I felt had for veera. veera has decided to take revenge on baldev by trapping him into wrestling match with rajveer.veera and raj are so over confident that they agreed for kissing. but I hope baldev will win and he won't have to kiss that fat lady.one picture which you tried to upload is not visible. is that soumya's picture?

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