To the futur......the end on pg 40 - Page 3

AWESOME CONTINUATION PRERNA! 👏 luvd it! 👏 plzzz do write da next part soooooon 😉

only 2 replies? if its bad...den its ok guys...do tell me,or shuld i stop?

no prerna

not at all. it is too good yaar
mujhe ye lagne laga hai ke LRL ki script likhne me tumhara bhi contribution hai na? (jokes apart)

but it is too good yaar keep up the good work

are tumhare is scripting se LRL ka Sequel suru ho sakta hai yaar


Good JOb continue writing

continue yaar, brilliant work would b the least to say 👏 .plz do continue waiting to read the next part

Part-3

Naina stared out of the window in her room..unable to think straight...Cptn Rajveer was here..he was dere teams leader....Cptn Rajveer...or rather...Colonel Rajveer....sum1 whom she luved so deeply,yet sum1,whom she culdnt luk in d eye even....it was heartwrenching..

Cptn Rajveer stood outside in the cold biting chill....but he culdnt feel it...his senses were numb..not with the cold, but with shock....Naina....tha name still managed to bring a smile to his face...even at such a time,wen the 2 culdnt bear to look at each other...Naina...watever he had expected...this wasnt it....he had faced bad situations during wars n while fiting terrorists...but never such a challenge.....his mind drifted back to those memories....Naina n his dance...Nainas laughter...her smiles...her tears...n then..that day wen everything had changed...wen everything had gone terribly wrong..he culdnt think about it...

Alekh walked by Nainas room n saw her....he walked inside slowly n put a comforting arm around her shoulders...Naina luked up at his face..."Alekh...mere saath aisa kyun ho raha hai?" she sed..n she cried....there were only 2 ppl in front of whom she shed tears...Alekh..n Him....Raj...she culdnt think of dat name...it hurt her so much..."Nahin Naina...apun ki baat maan....itna jasbaati mat ban...yeh saala duniya jasbaati logon ke saath bhala nahin karti...yeh ek jung hai Naina..aur ise ek jung maanke hi chal...aur kuch nahin...aur Cptn..uh....sry...apun se galti hui...Colonel Rajveer tera leader hai..aur kuch nahin......." n Nainas eyes sparkled with a fire so well known to Alekh...n she knew he was right..this was a battle..not only of the country..but of her emotions...and she couldnt afford 2 lose...either of them...

Dr Shalini came upto where Raj stood...."Colonel....andar chale...?Thand bahut badh gayi hai..."Raj turned round as if she had jus shook him out of a dream....."uh....DR.....no thnx....aap jaayie...main abhi thodi der mein aata hoon..." Shalini knew wat Raj was feeling..what he was thinking..."Puraani baaton ko yaad karke kyun apne aaj ko barbaad kar rahe ho Raj?" she asked...n this time Raj knew...it wasnt DR SHALINI who was speaking..it was jus Shalini....Shalini turned and walked away n left Raj staring into the distant mountains...so beautiful they looked...but yet...so wild...so young...as if they were still changing...they still had a lot 2 do..n he knew that he himself was like dat..he had a lot to do...he had his country 2 save....a battle to lead...and he culdnt afford to give all that up jus because of Her....yet...he dint know why...after all that had happened...he still loved her so much....

heres d next part guys 😃 ...PLZZ PLZZ do comment 😳 ...ur reviews really help me.. 😳 😳

its fabulous prerna!! 😳 👏
wow!! i loved it dear!! 👏 👏
it really gripped my attention!! 😉 😳 👏
pls i wanna read more!! 😆
keep it up babes!! 👏 👏

Ohoooooooo.....superb prerna.....ekdum jhakas....mobile full recharged kyun....gr8888.... 😳 but sirf ek doubt....I think after a captain is promoted he becomes major na.... 😕 c....I m not sure....but if u have clarified with som1 in touch with this field....then may b I m wrong...coz...I think captain ke baad its major... 😕
Swapna-Mobile 😳

thnxx every1!! 😳 😳
n ya...swapna...its major after cptn...but i gave him double promotion coz mujhe majors se allerg ho gayi hai lately.. 😛 😆

👏 i am really enjoying ur story plzzzzzzz continue as soon as possible