To the futur......the end on pg 40 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelic eyes

hmm......that's a brilliant idea sarah.......😉

and R-N will accept their love 4 each other on this day..!!😉😳😆

no its not my idea Yojii... its written there ...read the first line of the fanfic... it says 16 Oct 2011😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome mindblowing fiction 👏 please continue soon also looking forward to Rajveers entry and some Raj and Naina romance 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: S a r a h

no its not my idea Yojii... its written there ...read the first line of the fanfic... it says 16 Oct 2011😳

oh wow!!😃 u noticed sarah!!!😊😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey prerna!(sry 4 da late reply )
AWESOME FANFIC! 👏 luvd it! 😃 jus waitin 4 da next part as well as major rajveer's entry 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolgirl_13

oh wow!!😃 u noticed sarah!!!😊😳

😳 😆 yes I did Prerna...😳 jo kuch tha sab parh liya... ab aur chahiye😉😳😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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arey bhai roki kiyon jaldi likho plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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he prerna

Good Script Yaar

Well would like to know ab Captain Rajveer Yaar

Good Work

Keep writing yaar
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good fanfic prerna keep it up 👏
but please dont make this ff limited to just one person aur jodi .please give all char justice pease 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Superb prerna.....continnue 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THNXXXX SOOO much 4 likin it ppl!😃 😳heres d next part...😊

1 Week Later...

Naina walked upto the camp setup. She shivered in the cold biting chill at the border and set her bags down to rub her hands. She moved on, wondering what surprises awaited her. Whatever she had expected, THIS was definitely not it.

The minute she stepped inside the Main Cabin, a voice greeted.."Lo...ab tera hi connection lagna baaki tha..."

There was only ONE person in this entire world who could speak in that way...one person whom Naina knew.....and who had been one of her best friends at KMA...Naina turned around and came face-to-face with her old collegemate...Pooja Ghai...

"POOJA?!" she cried in surprise! "aise mat dekh..mera bhi connection isi tarah jam ho gaya tha in sab bandaron ko yaahan dekhkar...." and then Naina spotted everyone.....Alekh...her brother from KMA...Ali...someone who had always regarded her with suspicion...ud....just as confused as ever...and huda....who had always luved her...but whom she'd never luved...

"Hai meri Phoolan..abhi bhi waisi ki waisi changi ki changi!! Lekin thodi patli ho gayi hai..chal koi baat nahi...yeh huda tujhe khila khila ke phir se tagda kar dega..."

"Ayo shaane...aate hi pareshaan mat kar behcaari ko...warna apun tujhe..."

"Achcha...sambhal qaudi.....smabhal yaar..."

and Naina smiled...her first smile in a long time...it was good to see that however much sum things had changed....some, would ALWAYS be the same...

Pooja then showed her upto the little room that they'd been given...n naina unpacked.

Alekh walked out 2wards the snow..the temperature was dropping every minute...but it dint affect him...his thoughts were on his feeling..the feeling he had gt while leaving 4 this place....could it be thatsomething big awaited them...something unknown..?

The cptns gathered around in the main room of the camp, discussing and exchanging news of themselves...and huda continuosely flirting with Naina...but what they were all really waiting for was the arrival of the new colonel...the one who would head them...he would be arriving pretty soon with their physiotherapist and all of them were waiting for them to take further orders...

They then heard a sound of a jeep...and footsteps trudging on the thick snow....they all stood up, even the new younger soldiers, all wondering who would lead them...

But somehow....naina seemed even more eager....she looked out the nearby window, hoping to catch a glimpse of the colonel...yet, wondering why her heart was longing to see him...

and then, a voice called..."Everything in order?"

A voice...which she knew so well...a voice, which had led her through some of the toughest times of her life...a voice which made her heart beat faster.....a voice, which brought a blush to her cheeks.....a voice, which meant so much for her....a voice, which could say onething, and make her smile..."cadet naina 'ah' singh"

Naina looked up..not daring to believe it.....and there, in front of her, stood, none other then.....Cptn Rajveer Singh Shekhawat....

His eyes wandered around the soldiers with a smile, but when they saw naina...they stopped...jus staring....nainas eyes met his...n their gaze sed it all...their shock at seeing each other..their deep love for each other....n the sadness brought by old memories....of the time they seperated...

Their still...silent gaze, said it all.....

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