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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: utsha



Di aap ne toh suspense meter aur bhi bada di. Next part bhi jaldi updt karna di. Actually tpdq jaise genre ho toh main apni saari expectations switch off kar deti hoon. Coz i know whatever u will serve woh meri soch ke upar hi hogi for sure. U r the best in it.


Thanks dear ... Love you
Well I really hope I live up to what you expect
Sure will update shortly 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42



PART 2 A

After few minutes they all reached the house of Naitesh & Sakshi but there was no sign of anyone in the house. That surprised all of them more also it all was giving a negative vibes to all of them.

They finally started to scan the place well & also checked the main locker as they had the key which was handed over to them by Naitesh.

They could only found a computerized chip, entire insurance & house related papers, few important documents of ATB & some of their personal documents.

Aarohi checked the details & said "Yaha to kuch bhi nahi mila hai ... kuch official aur zaroori papers hai ... fir wo kis cheez ke liye keh rahe the?"

Ridhima said checking "Shayad wo is chip ki baat kar rahe the isme koi important data ho sakta hai"

Aarohi said switching on the system "ise check karte hai abhi pata chal jaayega isme kya hai"

Ridhima tried to connect but could not as it had a new technology & a password setting. Ridhima said irritated "Ye aise nahi khul paayega ... protected hai"

Aarohi nodded & said "ise abhi saath le chalo technical department se pata karne ki koshish karenge"

Rishabh & Shaurya scanned the entire house & Shaurya said coming back to Aarohi & Ridhima "Poora ghar chaan liya par ghar pe koi nahi hai ... Na Dr. Aacharya or na Dr. Krishna ... ye loog aise kaise jaa skate hai"

Aisha enters the house after scanning the outer area & said "Maine pata kiya hai dono Medical camp ke Lonavala ke kisi interior orphanage aur gaon main gaye hai kal raat tak laut aayenge"

Aarohi said in hitched voice "Hame unhe inform kar dena chahiye ki Naitesh Uncle aur Sakshi Aunty ki death ho chuki hai"

Aisha replied "Nahi! Abhi nahi hume unke aane ka wait karna hoga ... maine apne ek informer ko unke paas bhej diya hai wo unpe nazar rakhega aur jab wo yaha waapis aayenge to hum unhe sab kuch bata deenge ... let's move fast"

After a while they reached house directly as Sameer has informed them that he had winded off with the party & they can reach home directly.

In the Rathore mansion after a while all were sitting with tense faces & discussing about what happened when suddenly Shree gets an urgent call for an important data so he has to leave to the Crime Branch immediately. After a while Aisha along with entire ETF team walks inside the house. Sameer rushed to them & asked in a concerned tone "Kya hua Aisha?"

Aisha replied with a sigh "Ghar pe to kuch khaas nahi mila ... bas ye chip mili hai par coded hai isliye access nahi kar paaye baaki ye papers hai"

Sameer nodded & asked "Par ye sab kar kaun raha hai?"

Aisha said "Aap jaante hai na ki humare kaam main dost kam aur dushman zayada hote hai ... par mujhe poora shaq hai ki ye sab usi biological virus ke case se related hai ...

kyuki mere paas kuch din pehle Saakshi ki call aayi thi usne khud mujhse kaha tha ki use is case main help chahiye shayad baat kuch zayada serious ho gayi thi"

Sameer nodded & said "Par Ajintya aur Krishna kaha hai?"

Aisha said "abhi bahar hai kal tak aa jaayenge ... informer ko maine unki security ke liye bol diya hai"

Aarohi asked "Papa Shree uncle kaha hai ye chip unse decode karani thi shayad koi clue mile"

Sameer replied "Wo Crime branch main hai abhi kuch urget case stha"

Suddenly Shubham said intervening in between "Aarohi di aap mujhe do main dekhta hoon"

Aarohi nodded & handed over the chip to Shubham & after 5 minutes chip was decoded & it had all details of complete research done till date on OZONIKA. All were glued to the screen & reading about this wonderful discovery.

After a while getting out of trance Aarohi said "yaani unhe ye chahiye tha research ka soft copy ... unhe ye bhi maaloom tha ki Doctor Aacharya apni details ATB main submit kar chuke hai isliye Naitesh Uncle aur Sakshi Aunty ko aise target kiya"

Shaurya said "correct! par accha hua unke haath kuch nahi laga ... Rishabh kuch aur pata chala?"

Rishabh said examining "abhi to kuch nahi main poori cheez postmortem ke baad hi bata sakta hoon"

Aisha said "abhi ke liye kaafi ye kal subah 8 baje sab milte hai office main" All nodded & dispersed to their rooms & homes.

Later that night in Sameer & Aisha's room Aisha said "Sameer! Mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha hai ye sab ... itna to pata hai ki jo is research ke peeche pade hai wo koi strong group hai ... mujhe bas Ajintya aur Karishna ki fikar hai wo loog pata nahi ye sab dekh kar kaise react karenge?"

Sameer said "Main sooch raha tha jab tak case solve nahi hota tum unhe isi ghar main rakho ... kahin aur rakhna safe nahi hoga aur yaha wo sabki aankho ke saamne bhi rahenge"

Aisha said thinking "Haan! aap theek keh rahe hai jab tak case solve nahi hota wo yahi rahenge ... Shaurya ke pida hone ke waqt kitni madat kithi Sakshi aur Naitesh ne humari kam se kam hum itna to kar hi skate hai"

Next morning at ETF office Aarohi & Rishabh were in a discussion as Rishabh has found something very interesting in postmortem report. Rishabh said "Ye dekho jis bullet se fire hua woe k special tareeke ki hai ye goli body main ghulkar zeher banati hai yadi iske nishaana chook bhi jaaye to bhi 2 ghante ke ander insaan khatam"

Aarohi exclaimed with surprise "Kya! yaani wo loog maarne ka hi plan bana ke aaye the ... par is tarah ke khatarnaak hathiyaar ye loog chahte kya hai"

Ridhima said entering with coffee "Shayad Dr. Aacharya ko dara kar aur majboor karke unki research lena"

Aarohi said "Might be! Par ye bhi to ho skata hai ki baat kuch aur ho ..." then asked turning to Shaurya "Shaurya is Kaya ka kuch pata chala hai abhi tak?"

Shaurya said nodding in negative "Abhi nahi! kuch suspicious harkat nahi ki hai usne abhi tak" Aarohi nodded & said "uspe kadi nazar rakhna ... ye ladki ya to khud involved hai ya hume ye bata sakti hai ki in sabke peeche kiska haath hai"

Suddenly Aisha barged in the conference room & said "Team! Mere paas abhi abhi ATB se khabar aayi hai ki in sab ke peeche shayad international Gangster Saboor aur uski gang hai ...

Naitesh aur Saakshi last usi case pe kaam kar rahe the aur unki call records se bhi yahi pata chala hai ki usne Naitesh ko call kiya tha abhi 10 din pehle"

Ridhima said checking the details "inki detail ke hisaab se ye loog hamesha khatarnaak hathiyaaro ki taalash main rehte hai ... inke paas abhi bhi kaafi khatarnaak tareeke ke hathiyaar hai ...

Ye loog Maharashtra ke kaafi ilaako main active hai is waqt inka main target hai Mumbai ... ye loog yaha koi badi vaardaat karke logo ko dehshat main laana chahte hai jisse inke gair kanooni dhande bina rukaavat ke chalte rahe aur ye logo pe aur government pe pressure daal ke apne mann ki kar sake"

Aisha said with a sigh "humara andaaza bilkul sahi tha ... yadi inke haath ye virus lag gaya to ye loog poori Mumbai ko shamshaan bana deenge"

Aarohi said in a strong voice "We won't let that happen so easily"

Shaurya asked bit confused "Par ye Saboor to jail main hai na ... aur ise to umra kaid ki saza hui thi?"

Ridhima said answering "Shaurya iski giraftaari ke baad iske right hand Sattar ne business take over kiya hai aur wo abhi tak police ke haath nahi laga hai ... aur tum janate hi hoo department main gaddaro ki kami nahi aur abhi 20 din pehle hi ye jail se bhagne ki koshih bhi ki hai usne"

Suddenly Aisha's phone buzzed she attended the call with a shocked face & Aarohi asked in a concerned voice "Kya hua?"

Aisha said with a sigh "Jiska darr tha wahi hua Aarohi ... Ajintya aur Krishna ki car ka accident ho gaya hai mere informer ne abhi abhi khabar di hai"

Aarohi said "Then Let's move fast isse pehle ki deer ho jaaye" with that entire team along with Aisha moved to Lanavala in search of Ajintya & Krishna, but at the accident site they could only find a damaged car.
















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Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43


PART 2 B

After few moments searching for both of them Aarohi said in a tense voice "kahin hume aane main deer to nahi ho gayi? ... yaha to koi bhi nahi hai?"


Shaurya said looking at the vehicle "par accident zayada bada nahi hai ... shayad maamooli chot hi aayi hogi aur is ilaake se wo loog zayada door bhi nahi jaa sakte hai kyuki humne city exits pehle hi seal kar diye hai ... hume yahi aas paas dhoondna chahiye"


Aisha said "Right! Ek kaam karo Shaurya backup team ko bolo ki is poore area ki taalashi kare ... I really hope ki hume jaldi hi unka pata chal jaaye" Shaurya nodded & called the back -up force to take care of the matter.


After a while back -up force & ETF starts searching the place thoroughly & after a while around 2 kilometers from the place of accident Shaurya spots a discarded broken bracelet along with blood drops & along with Rishabh starts following it carefully after few minutes more they spotted a fair looking girl totally unconscious clad in yellow suit, her forehead & arm was injured & was bleeding profusely.


Shaurya asked in a tense voice "Rishabh zara dekh to kya hua hai ise?"


Rishabh informs Ridhima & Aarohi too & they too reached the place. Rishabh said checking her properly "Accident ke impact se behosh ho gayi hai"


Ridhima said checking her stuff "Shayad isse pata chale ki ye kaun hai" after a minute she found her eye card in the stuff & said "Ye to Dr. Krishna Obroi hai ... yadi ye yaha hai to iska matlab Dr. Acharya bhi yahi kahi hoonge"


All four took Krishna to the Ambulance standing near the Accident site & Rishabh along with Aisha started treating unconscious Krishna & rest moved back to search for Dr. Aacharya.


Around an hour of search they checked every possible place but there was no sign of Dr. Aarcharya & it panicked everyone there.


Searching for some more time ETF handed over the searching job to back up team & patrolling party to continue the search & inform them if they find him in this locality as they had to leave due to critical condition of Krishna who needed medical attention immediately.


After a quick drive they took her to nearest hospital where doctors started treating her. After a hour Krishna opened her eyes & found herself on Hospital bed. She looked at the unknown faces around as she was surrounded by entire ETF Team it scared her more.


She said in a feeble voice cuddling herself "Aap loog kaun hai?"


Aisha said in a consoling voice "Darne ki zaroorat nahi hai Krishna tum is waqt ETF team ke saath ho ... shayad tumne pehchana nahin main Mrs. Aisha Rathore ETF ki National Director aur tumhari Mummy Sakshi ki dost"


Krishna was so terrified that she instantly hugged Aisha & started to cry. Aisha patted her back & said "Krishna sabse pehle shant ho jaao beta ... aur batao hume ki ye sab kaise hua aur Ajintya kaha hai is waqt?"


Krishna composed herself after few moments & said "Aunty! pata nahi kaise humari gaadi ka ka break kaam karna band kar gaya ... main aur Bhai kaafi darr gaye the ... unhone mujhe dhakka diya aur main gaadi ke bahar gir gayi ...


uske baad jab main khadi hui to dekha ki gaadi waha ped se takra ke band ho gayi aur Ajintya bhai ko kaafi chot aayi thi sir pe ...


main unhe nikaalne aayi to tabhi waha 5 - 6 loogo ne gaadi ko gher liya aur bhai ko leke chale gaye ... maine unka pecha kiya aur unhe rookne ki koshish ki to unhone mere sir pe zoor se waar kiya aur main behosh ho gayi ...


Please Aunty! Aap Bhai ko bacha leeiye aap to police main hai na aap unka pata lagaayiye na"


Aisha replied consoling her "chinta mat karo tumhare bhai ko kuch nahi hoga ... aur sirf main hi nahi tumhare Mummy Papa bhi services main the"


Krishna was so stunned & more shocking was word "the" she confirmed asking "Services main the ... iska kya matlab hai Aunty?"


Aisha with a deep sigh "Tumhare Mummy aur Papa ATB yaani Anti terrorist Beauro main the ... aur jin logo ne tumhare bhai ko kidnap kiya kal unhi logo ki gang ne tumhare Mummy aur Papa ko maar diya"


Krishna was bit stunned at the news of sudden demise of her parents & it took some time to register that her parents are no more. Seeing her numb Aisha shook her hard calling her name & after getting out of the shock she hugged Aisha & started to cry uncontrollably.


Aisha said consoling her "Krishna beta! tumhe garv hona chahiye apne Mummy Papa pe ... aise rooke tum yadi khud kamzoor padogi to unko saza kaise dilaaogi jo insabke peeche hai?"


Krishna asked between her sobs "Par Mummy Papa ne hamesha mujhse kaha ki wo Government department main kaam karte hai ... ATB Main kaise ..."


Aisha said cutting her short "Wo isliye ki wo tumhe aur Ajintya ko khatre main nahin daalna chahte the par ab jaane anjaane hi sahi tum loog us gang ki nishaane pe aa gaye ho ... In fact jab tak zaroorat nahi padi undono ne mujhe bhi nahi batyaya tha ki wo ATB main kaam karte hai"


Suddenly Shaurya's phone buzzed & after speaking to caller for a while he said "Mere informer ka call tha ... usne khabar di hai ki Kaya ko ek call aayi thi abhi ek ghante pehle uske theek 20 minute baad uske ghar ke saamne ek black color ki Scorpio ruki aur wo usme baith kar chali gayi ...mere informer ne uska peecha bhi kiya aur pata chala ki wo gadi is waqt Lonavala ki taraf hi jaa rahi hai"


Aisha nods in positive & commands "Aarohi Shaurya tum loog gaadi ko safe distance pe follow karo aur saath main back -up force ko main inform kar deti hoon shayad isse hume Ajintya ka pata chal paaye"


Aarohi & Shaurya nodded & left the hospital immediately & after few minutes Aisha too left for the head office as she had to coordinate with ATB for further action. Rishabh & Ridhima stayed with Krishna as she needed support.


Aarohi & Shaurya were after that black color Scorpio & were following her at the safe distance & car started to enter the remote area of Lonavala. After few minutes it took a turn towards the small narrow lane in the bushes & after few more minutes Aarohi & Shaurya were standing at the door of their hide out.


Aarohi & Shaurya parked the vehicle at a safe distance & also quickly moved out of the SUV clutching their guns. After few minutes getting a chance they went inside the hide out & started to scan & clear the place as well.


After a while they find a big hall with a man sitting in middle of the room on a big chair. A servant greeted him saying "Sattar bhai wo us ladki ko le aaye hai"


Sattar said in a heavy voice "use yaha leke aao main khud baat karunga usse"


Man nodded & after a minute Kaya was brought in front of Sattar held captive in ropes. Sattar said yelling at her "Maine tujhe mana kiya tha ki kisi ko nahi batana ... fir un ETF waalo ko khabar kaise lagi ...


yadi tune koi chaalaaki karne ki koshish ki to anjaam acchi tarah jaanti hoo"


Kaya said in trembling voice "Mujhe nahi pata ki ETF ko kisne khabar thi ... Ajintya ek jaane mane doctor hai apni research wo hamesha sambhaal ke rakhte hai tumhare kehne pe maine unki locker ko bhi check kiya tha par mujhe usse kuch nahi mila"


Sattar said grabbing her neck "Mat bhool ki tera wo aashiq ab bhi mere kabze main hai jiske saath milke tu us doctor ko dhoka de rahi thi ... main chahta to teri saari kahani suboot ke saath tere us hone waale pati ko bata deta fir to tu kahin ki nahin rehti ...


Abhi wo Doctor humare kabze main hai par uski research shayad wo ETF waalo ke haath lag gayi hai ... tujhe ETF se pata karna hoga ki unhe kya kya mila hai aur wo research ka poora detail hume laa ke dena hoga"


Kaya replied "main ab isme tumhari koi madat nahi kar sakti kyuki maamla ab kaafi bigad gaya hai"


Sattar to force her calls her boyfriend & says placing the gun at his temple "nahi kiya to ye jaan se jaayega"


Before he could do so Aarohi & Shaurya took Sattar on Gun point & heavy firing started, after a minute Backup force too arrived & took charge but unfortunately in firing Kaya & his boyfriend both died at the spot but Sattar got arrested.


Little later when situation was under control Back up force sealed the area & the entire hide out & here Aarohi & Shaurya started to look for Dr. Aacharya has he was captive there.


To their good luck after few minutes they found Dr. Aacharya tied & in unconscious state in the store room of hide out. They finally let out a sigh of relief & took Dr. Aacharya along with them after the rescue.















So how was it guys please drop in your comments as I write for you guys so please do let me know all your bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love you all


Regards Goldie 😊😊


Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Thanks Vishakha 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Awesome Update Goldie. Loved It Lots! 🤗
Seems like Season 3 Of TPDK has a lot of action. 😉😆
But still I love fast paced stories as it keeps the interest intact. ⭐️

So Naitesh and Sakshi were definitely killed for Ozonika as their locker had the soft copy of the research. Out of all I love Aarohi as she's so quick, clever and tough like her mother Aisha, who was my favorite from all the team mates. ❤️
Even our champ Shubham is so clever with gadgets and technology like our Shree. 👏 I loved how he cracked up the password in minutes. 👏👏

Poor Krishna. 🥺
I can understand her mental state as the accident was a shock along with Ajintya's kidnapping and Naitesh Sakshi's death came along as another shock.
I'm somewhere glad that Kaya's chapter wrapped up cuz she was the weakest link in all of this and then she was cheating on Ajintya too. 😳
Thankfully, Aarohi and Shaurya found Ajintya safe.


Thanx For Pm.
Update Soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Thanks Sona 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Fabulous update
Case was awesome
Shubham is just duplicate Shree..
They arrested sattar n his goon..
Finally they found Dr Ajintya..
Superbly written
Love it
Thanks for PM
Continue soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Awesome Update Goldie. Loved It Lots!🤗

Seems like Season 3 Of TPDK has a lot of action.😉😆
But still I love fast paced stories as it keeps the interest intact.⭐️

So Naitesh and Sakshi were definitely killed for Ozonika as their locker had the soft copy of the research. Out of all I love Aarohi as she's so quick, clever and tough like her mother Aisha, who was my favorite from all the team mates.❤️
Even our champ Shubham is so clever with gadgets and technology like our Shree.👏I loved how he cracked up the password in minutes.👏👏

Poor Krishna.🥺
I can understand her mental state as the accident was a shock along with Ajintya's kidnapping and Naitesh Sakshi's death came along as another shock.
I'm somewhere glad that Kaya's chapter wrapped up cuz she was the weakest link in all of this and then she was cheating on Ajintya too.😳
Thankfully, Aarohi and Shaurya found Ajintya safe.


Thanx For Pm.
Update Soon.


Thanks Shanu dear glad you liked it
Love you too 🤗
This season as lot more enstore than just action 😉 Even I too don't prolonge as at times it gets tedious 🤢
Yes they were targeting them to get Ozonika and even planted Kaya for the same
Aarohi is just like her parents ... In such environment and being a cheif she has those qualities
Shubham is really intelligent in gadgets ... It's his forte
Like his father he too plays well with technology
Yes Krishna is most heart broken
She came to know many such things that were unknown to her
Her accident and her parents demise had broken her
Yes Kaya was the weakest link ... Ajintya now will be more conscious
This was an eye opener for Ajintya and Krishna
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: etfr

Fabulous update

Case was awesome
Shubham is just duplicate Shree..
They arrested sattar n his goon..
Finally they found Dr Ajintya..
Superbly written
Love it
Thanks for PM
Continue soon



Thanks dear glad you liked it
Yes many things to reveal in this case
Yes like father like son infact wo Shree se do haatho aagey hai
Yes Sattar arrested but we are not done yet
Yes Dr. Aacharya mil to gaye par Abhi bahut kuch baaki hai
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊

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