TUJH PE DIL QURBAAN S - III [COMPLETED]

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Guys Wish you all a very Happy Republic Day 🤗. I am back with a new idea of mine to torture you all. Many of my readers have requested me to write on ETF again & again specially my ARIYA & SASHA Fans. So I hereby start up a new FF on your request, it will have ETF but in a different way & to start this FF I cannot find better a time than this auspicious day 😳

I hope har baar ki tarah ye aatyachar bhi aap loog jheel lenge 🤔🤔 Hope you all will like this concept & support me. I will post the parts soon & please give your feedback on CS & Prologue given below.





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Posted: 8 years ago
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TUJH PE DIL QURBAAN

PROLOGUE: We always tend to overlook duty & responsibilities towards our nation. We always think we have several responsibilities & fighting for your country & all is only for people of defense, but we rarely realize that such people too have a family & most important for serving our motherland we only require passion & will power any kind of uniform & power becomes secondary then.

We often forget about the tough life of those people who sacrifice their present & future to secure us & our country & even if provided with the chance how many of us will put our life, present & future in danger just to save our country, probably very few will have that courage. But once we see people near us doing the same then surely it wil make us think that if they can do it so can we, might not be with perfection but at least we can help the people who are constantly fighting for us & for our country.

There is a saying "once a solider always a solider" & if someone is really committed & has that determination can serve their motherland in the best way & factors like age, power & status does not matter, but such people too have a feeling & how they come up with the all hurdles in this process is really a true victory in all means. Hope their pain emotional trauma & dedication stays like a pillar of strength for our nation.

ISHQ KA JAZBA SABSE PYAARA ISPE NISSAR DIL AUR JAAN

ISHQ YADI WATANSE HO TO BAD JAATI HAI ISHQ KI SHAAN

AYE SARZEEMENE MERE WATAN KI TUJH PE MERA DIL QURBAAN

TERE SAAYE MAIN SUKOON AUR IN LABO PE TERA NAAM

TERE PAANAH HI MAIN GUZRE IS ZINDIGI KE LAMHE TAMMAM

HAR KUSHI GUM FARZ AUR MOHABAAT JUDE HAI TUJHSE

AUR JUDE HAI HAR AANSU AUR MUSKAAN

AYE SARZEEMENE MERE WATAN KI TUJH PE MERA DIL QURBAAN

TUJHKO JO AAYE CHOOKAR UN HAWAAO KO SALAAM

MERE ZEHEN MAIN AAJ TAK SABSE UCCHA HAI TERA MUKAAM

GAR TUJH PE MARE TO MAUT ZINDIGI SE KAM NAHIN

WATAN PE MITNE WAALO KA HAMESHA REHTA HAI BAAKI NISHAAN

AYE SARZEEMENE MERE WATAN KI TUJH PE MERA DIL QURBAAN

ISHQ KA JAZBA SABSE PYAARA ISPE NISSAR DIL AUR JAAN

ISHQ YADI WATANSE HO TO BAD JAATI HAI ISHQ KI SHAAN

AYE SARZEEMENE MERE WATAN KI TUJH PE MERA DIL QURBAAN

Characterization: - All characters of ETF are the same

Senior Inspector Aarohi Singh Rathore - Chief of ETF now strict but composed, sweet natured n good at heart. Daughter of Sameer & Aisha, she is just like her father & mother as brought & nurtured under them.




Inspector Shaurya Singh Rathore - 2ND in command of ETF now, Son of Sameer & Aisha, He is sweet, good natured & carefree soul, bit spoilt brat as youngest in the family but a very dedicated officer like his parents.




Ridhima Arjun rawte - Research specialist of ETF, Only daughter of Arjun & Riya, She is just like her mother Riya in her attitude & way of working, but she is strong, intelligent & fearless like her father.




Dr. Rishabh Malhotra - Doctor n forensic expert of ETF, Adopted Son of Annanya & Aarav as they don't have a child, A calm composed person & a bright doctor. He is from a normal family but now with his capabilities he is now a part of ETF.




Shubham Sen - He is a sweet teenager of 18 son of Shree Kant Sen & a pure gadget freak like his father. He is naughty, smart & very sharp in terms of system; he is right now perusing his college & loves to freak out.




Siddhi Patil: She is a sweet cool teenager perusing her college right now, only Daughter of Chandrakant Patil Aka our Chotu. She is really good in physical tricks & fighting but a soft tender hearted girl like her father.




Naitesh Obroi & Sakshi Obroi: Friends of Sameer & Aisha & great ATB Officers, They are very close to Sasha as at time when Shaurya was born they helped them a lot [This is for those who don't remember them]





Aarav Malhotra & Annanya Malhotra - Younger sister of Aisha & her husband, Aarav is a business man & Anannya helps her husband in his business.








I will add more characters if required as the story progresses.😊


So how was it ? please give your Reviews 😊









Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CS N PROLOGUE -- PAGE 1

PART 1 ---- PAGE 3
PART 2 ---- PAGE 7
PART 3 ---- PAGE 12
PART 4 ---- PAGE 15
PART 5 ---- PAGE 19
PART 6 ---- PAGE 22
PART 7 ---- PAGE 26
PART 8 ---- PAGE 29
PART 9 ---- PAGE 31
PART 10 ---- PAGE 35
PART 11 ---- PAGE 37
PART 12 ---- PAGE 40
PART 13 ---- PAGE 43
PART 14 ---- PAGE 47
PART 15 ---- PAGE 51
PART 16 ---- PAGE 54








Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear Readers,

Before I start with this story I am giving you all a small glimpse of Season 1 & 2 which is necessary. In this Story during a case Sameer meets Aisha who is brave, Patriotic & also a Practical person. He looking at Aisha's skills invites her to Join ETF & she accepts it too. Gradually they came closer during the case proceedings & Sameer starts feeling for her but never dare to express as his past was bitter he had very bad experience in the name Love. During the case Aisha gets injured & Sameer realizes & while talking to Arjun & Riya they Aisha came to know about his real feelings & she too says yes to him. In between Aisha parents were looking an apt match for her but the alliance that approaches his parents was a famous Terrorist. Aisha & Sameer secretly nab him in the name of Marriage & finally case gets closed. After that Aisha & Sameer get married & have a daughter Aarohi fighting again with crime.

Time passes by & Sameer gets a responsibility of VAYU a vital defense system being a chief of ETF. In the process to pressurize him for the details a militant group plants a lady Aaliya at his place kidnapping Aisha who is identical to Aisha. During arrest Aisha comes to know that she is pregnant. Here Aaliya starts doing her job but alas she has no clue about it. Aisha with the help of undercover agent Saleem who works in their group runs from the hideout & by the time she reaches ETF Aaliya secret was out & she gets arrested by ETF. Here finally after a long struggle Aisha makes Sameer realize about her identity & with the help of ATB & ETF she saves her family & VAYU too.

Now Things are changed completely, Shree & Liza are married & even our Chotu found his 11:30 Baje waali named Nandini. Presently, it's been 28 years of Sameer & Aisha's marriage. Sameer & Arjun are DIG'S of Mumbai & Pune respectively. Aisha is National Director of ETF. Shree & Liza Riya are heads of Research, Technical & Medical departments & our Chandrakant Patil is now commander & trainer of Control Room Maharashtra. ETF No is taken over by the new generation.

Guys I will update this FF depending upon my work & ur responses too If u don't find the prologue apt n I have less comments I will stop right here n will not update the parts further or I will be shifting it to blog for my genuine interested readers I think itna attyachaar kaafi hoga 🤔 so please let me know that weather I should continue or not 😊 & If you guys liked it please let me know through your comments & wait for this story to unfold. 🤗


Love & Regards
Your's Goldie





Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing prologue dear
And characters sketch
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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AMAZING PROLOGUE N CS DI
UPDATE SOON DI
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

AMAZING PROLOGUE N CS DI

UPDATE SOON DI



THANKS FOR PM DI
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yayyy! Another Story From You! 🥳
I've been a part of this story in both Season 1 and 2, so happy that you're beginning with Season 3. 🤗

Awesome Prolouge And CS Goldie.
Will be waiting for the story.


Thanx For Pm.
Update Soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome back Goldie

Glad to see you back at work..Hehehe..I means writings..

Hmm.. super Awesome prologue
Amazing CS.
Like the concept

Love it really..

Thanks for giving the brief flashes of old sequels of your ff TPDQ..

I will surely read them too..So I don't have any little bit confusions..

Perfectly written

Thanks for PM
Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing prologue
Thanks a lot for continuing season 1&2
Can't wait for first part
Thanks for pm

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