Seven Vows Part 3 -Part 259 Page 147 - Page 56

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Posted: 8 years ago
@Ria our mind always observes actions, subconsciously. It was never about Jodi dance, but how it happened between them. The length Sreedhar went for making her comfortable. Prestige of college was at stake so was she. He managed both with her right. Only thing was that she too had to travel half way shedding some of her inhibitions. He loved her exactly for that. She was willing to walk that half way path for the sake of college willing to shed her inhibitions.
@swati yes MV is back in action. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aarthy's life is so pathetic. So tilak, prakash and ankush are friends. Ankush did right by selecting his neice and nephew's life. As the future of them is in his hands.Now he has completed all his responsibilities and can fight for his sister's and friends's death. Hope now tilak can also help ankush as he has power too. The payback time for ankush has came.
so sweet of suman that she is sending rakhis to gautam and kailash too.Fun family convo is nice to read. Rakhi coming on raki day. 😆

So now another one know the truth. But Rakhi is questioning shree. Actually it show her care for suman. And there comes the lover in suman. She cant bear some one questioning her shree. IT shows her trust and love for him. suman nd shree convo so touchy.

Suman herself says her trust on shree. FB part is so sweet. hope sisters unite soon.

Suman shree got to know each other only thru dance. Infact they start their love life after that dance. Does this dance reveal the truth about them to the family. I mean this lead to make them a couple .
Maheshwari as usual got a clue from shree's talk. Good that rajesekhar took it positive and allow him to help suman. Loved the way shree came forward to help suman when she is in need without thinking about his image in family.

Wonderful updates shruthi... ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yes Hemaji now power has come. Rakhi's question is not just the concern of Suman, it is also her sadness that her bhaiyya whom she considers champion of women right has done an injustice to his lover.
But that question was important and what Suman feels about that question. Her love for Sree happened not because she danced with him, but by the way how from 2 strangers they became perfect couple on stage.
MV is always in search of clues. So she will get 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 209- The Eureka Moment

Sudhir and Poorni were in Sreedhar's room post the dinner. Sreedhar looked at them.

" What is it Bhaiyya" asked Sreedhar.

" Sreedhar do you think you did the right thing. What if someone else notices your connection" asked Sudhir.

" Exactly Chachu, when you practice you both will have to dance" told Poorni.

" Bhaiyya Poorni I don't know who will observe what. But what I know is that I did the right thing. Today Sumi burned her hand and Maa was telling two days back she almost tripped from stairs. Sumi is committed to her work, relation whatever it is and if she feels she cant solve something she gets panic driven. So should I think of her welfare now or the truth between us. That truth Bhaiyya anyways one day everyone has to know. I hope you both will be there with me to deal with it whenever that happens" he looked at Sudhir and Poorni with expectation.

" We are there Sreedhar. You don't worry about that. I just told you so that if something does happen it doesn't shock you and then you regret the decision. Now take rest. Good night" told Sudhir as they both walked out.

As planned Suman asked all the students to come for full day practice on Sunday. They all started practice. Sreedhar showed dance steps and as Suman saw the boys started improving, their body language changed.

After the lunch break Sreedhar told they all will practice together. First he told he and Suman will dance together so that the kids can know how it should look when they dance. Suman was thankful it was not a romantic number when he told that. Because if it was she knew the entire family will know what their relation is. Their eyes will tell the world what they felt about each other.

Rajasekhar and Tilak were not there as they had to go to check on new stock arrivals as festival season was approaching. Sudhir had gone to Gurgaon for the same reason. Renu and Vindhya were busy packing the spring collection of Rashee for Agra Cultural fest.

Maheswari anyways decided to check on the practice and she joined the children. As she observed Suman and Sreedhar dancing together to the tune of " Maa tujhe Saalam" a sudden thought hit her. The way they were dancing it was obvious they were not dancing together for the first time. Because the steps were flawless, intuitive as if one knew how the other will dance. As she processed the thought she was shocked to discover what it could mean. One they both had danced together in college. Maybe something her father found out that his daughter danced with a guy and decided to marry her off. It was inline with her statement their honor was protected. Yes it is a fact that a girl dancing with a guy was not taken lightly by the community. Marriage alliances might not have come for her. Even they wouldn't have approved of her as their bahu. Well to be frank even she was not really happy to know her son has danced with a girl or maybe girls and his father wouldn't be happy either. But now she knew maybe times have changed she shouldn't be thinking too much about it. If she can pardon Sreedhar, she can pardon Suman too.

They didn't wanted family to know they knew each other and had danced with each other. Given the condition that was expected from them. But something more bugged her. Is it just that they danced together or.. as she thought about the possibility her head started spinning. She began to analyze each of the interactions.

" Bhabi" was what Sreedhar had asked when he knew about Murali's death. Then after he came from Delhi it was Sumanji. Not once he had called her bhabi.

" Maa you think Sumanji is a family breaker " he had asked after she had confessed she didn't wanted the marriage with Murali.

His extreme reactions when Suman was affected. Whether it is breaking the glass, shouting at his father, going to Dinakar to get the Brahmins for bhoj.

Suman telling if she had known about Murali's brother she would have gone with her father, the line she heard from Suman's friend in Delhi Suman was the luckiest girl in college. Suman didn't wanted to marry Murali. Her listening to Sreedhar in Delhi.

The more she thought, she knew she should ascertain whether what she thinks is right. Suman and Sreedhar loved each other in college and even now they are in love while the family and traditions stood between them. Suman's luck was not any dance competition or any job it was Sreedhar's heart. The honor her family had protected was snatching the girl away from the man she loved without knowing who he is. Sreedhar wanted to know what his mother thought about Suman. Whether she liked Suman.

First she had to find conclusive evidence on what she thinks is right. Then she had to know what happened with Suman, why her son didn't tell anyone about Suman. She looked at both of them still showing steps to the kids. She wanted to be happy, but she didn't know why the tears were coming. Why there was overwhelming sadness in her. Then she realized. Now the question was more painful. Why did Murali had to marry Suman, a girl who might have loved his brother.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my god. MV is so good at connecting the dots. An kya hoga.how can she actually get to it so soon. I just wish that she doesn't be upset with them for long. Jhatke pe jhatka waiting for another one :P
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Posted: 8 years ago
By the last line Maheshwari was questioning Murali 's intention or was it her fear of Sree's kundali? Y did Sree confirm with Sudhir and Poorni? Is he still not out of Rakhi's words?Maheshwari is so open minded and accepting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Swati MV has to reach the entire funda. For that she has to ask the right question. Today she reached the right question.
@Ria Sree doesnt know how it will play out when the truth of their relation comes out. Sudhir and Poorni are his sheet anchors. He is just confirming, not that he doesnt trust them. For MV the question is if Suman loved Sree if it was known on time they themselves would have married them off. Why in the world such Murali marriage has to happen and he had to die. If you look from common sense perspective no need. It was just a matter of Sree telling his family about Suman.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 210- Don't dig the past

" Tilak what is the problem with you. For some days I am noticing you are lost in thoughts" came in Renu and sat beside him in the bed.

" I was thinking about something Renu." told Tilak.

" Is it about ED investigation, that is more or less done right. Business there are no major issues. Our retail shop is also going quite good. Your daughter is here, she has got admission to the group she wants. Now what is the big headache you have" told Renu."

" Renu it is about Suman and Sreedhar" told Tilak.

" What about them. See I didn't get much time to do any detective work to check on what you asked me couple of months back. Was too busy with lot of things. But tell me what is bugging you. Maybe I have solution."

" Renu Sreedhar have fallen head over heels in love with Suman. The way my kid brother was looking at her during Nami's dance performance it was very obvious to me that he loves her. You can't miss the spark in the eyes. A kind of happiness and shyness when you realize that intimate feeling for someone. But then I feel Suman had loved someone in her college. Also she might have met that person when she went for her friend's wedding in Jodhpur. There is a new found happiness in her."

" Tilak Suman is happy after the shop opening. She enjoys her work. Don't bring bizarre theories. What made you think she loved someone in college" asked her Renu as her thoughts raced to Suman telling she didn't wanted to marry Murali. But she knew she cant tell Tilak that as Maa had strictly told everyone that day whatever said in that room will not go outside.

" Renu Suman is a beautiful girl. She is telling she has two Rakhi brothers. If you ask me the most dreaded thing for any young man in college is Rakhi thread. Many don't come to college days leading to Rakhi to escape the embarrassment of any beautiful girl putting them in brother zone.But two young men allowed her to tie Rakhi for them. If you look from a man's view point that means only one thing. The girl in consideration had a man in her life. So if she makes them brother it is accepted.

Renu I said earlier also I don't want Suman to accept Sree out of obligation to us. We should try to know who her brothers are, see in a way she staying here itself is strange. It was her choice. Though I didn't think much that time, but in retrospect what made her take that step. To be in a family which has every chance of hating her. She wanted to die. Most probably yes because the marriage happened against her wish. Yes Sree is my brother but for his happiness I cannot stake the happiness of Suman. We have to find who she loves and then make Sree understand. I am sure he will understand" told Tilak.

Renu was thinking as Tilak was speaking. She analyzed each incident. She knew Maa had heard Suman was screaming to her mother when they came to take her. She had not told Tilak about it. At that time Tilak had enough going in his head and she had not wanted to burden him. She knew there can be truth in what Tilak says, but certain other things contradicted it. Finally she was able to make some connection.

" Renu are you listening " asked Tilak shaking her.

" Yes Tilak you spoke a man's view point. Now listen to a woman's view point. Yes I agree she might have loved someone. But I feel that is Suman's past. She is the bahu of this house. She has completely accepted this house as hers. I can see it in her behavior. Then coming to the man she might have loved. Just because she sent Rakhi to her brothers is it necessary that she is in touch with him."

" Renu.."

" Wait Tilak let me complete. Suman read the unspoken words of Sreedhar Tilak. A woman doesn't read the unspoken words of a man unless she feels close to him. Then when Sreedhar agreed to help her with dance I saw a happiness in her. A kind of happiness a woman feels when she gets something from a man who she considers special. Somewhere I feel Suman is also falling for Sree. Love can happen second time Tilak. Sometimes a sublime love can break barriers which people feel cannot be broken. It has happened with you Tilak. So trust me. Don't dig out her past. It is closed for good. Allow her present to flourish with our Sree. Let whatever they feel about each other bloom. Then we will ask. I feel Maa will agree. Infact I said earlier also she herself wants it. So don't think too much into it."

Tilak pulled Renu in his arms. Yes she had the point. Her love had won him over and if she feels Sree's love has the power to win over Suman and her past why he should deny them a chance. After all Renu was never wrong in her assessment of people.

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice updates sis... sree helping suman with dance brought more clues to the family... MV is really a detective... she almost reached the truth... if sree had told the truth before murali's marriage, MV would have accepted happily... renu and tilak were also good at connecting clues... but they look only at the present, so they were not aware of sree and suman's love... loved how tilak wanted to give suman her love and how renu wanted to give suman a chance to love again... if they know the truth, they will be happy to the core... waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi, I know I am really irregular but just making my 2 points here. It's about MV's thought. "Why Murali had to marry Suman?". That's his way to save his brother from heart break. I will tell you how, he has been the shield to See from the childhood days. He always kept sree's Road clear. Now his destiny decided that he should pave the road for Steve to reach his love, hence made him to marry Suman so that she doesn't Go far away from her life and unreachable. He was a person with shorter life and that was the reason RV looked for a girl with dheerga Sumamgali yoga, so that his son can live longer. Having said that Suman was already married to sree, hence her yoga could not help Murali from his untimely death.
About Tilak and Renu discussion, yes, sometimes, it's better to bury the past if that hurts digging. You never know what you get in the debris. it could be gold or skeleton. When the surface is smooth and thorn free, it's better to use the road than dig for tunnel

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