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Read Chapter 11A now!
Wow! Kudos to youđ that is an awesome writing on Arnav POV. Strange, I didn't sympathize with him.. What I loved the most is, you didn't change Arnav completely.. He is there.. And Arnav is constantly challenging himself, to not let those emotions re-surface.
What I had suddenly realized is Arnav is a natural Dominant when it comes to Khushi. And Khushi is a natural Submissive when it comes to Arnav. They are like Ying -Yang. Khushi never showed her submissive ness to any one other than Arnav, and vice versa. Khushi's fear and Arnav's anger is a by product of this relationship they shared.
Now, when they are not in any relationship with each other, Probably Arnav will feel restless and Khushi might enjoy her new found freedom for time being. But they will come to an Impasse and that journey might not be instantaneous I think.
Sorry, for your stories getting copied. Probably you writers all could request India forums website, for upgrading it? Because, lately many people are removing their stories due to the same problem. I just wish, the people don't copy others work just to be called as a writer and get comments and likes for their so called 'work'.
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