Six(AK) Mistletoe in the Mansion--p.24 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

seems interestin
awesome start
hmm the title is weird six...wen i read the title i thought the the ff will revolve around 6 pple
cont soon

I know, it not understandable.

But later on you will understand why the title is 6😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: jyotsna13

interesting cont soon 😃

Thanks, will continue in about 30 min.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
great
i can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

interesting concept.....lol ahlam i thought da same.....cont soon

Thanks...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

interesting starting! do post the next part soon 👏

Thanks, I am just going to post in 5 minutes😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#16

Six

Part 2

RECAP: Angad and Kripa have a race

Gayatri (Kripa's Mom) is now talking to Dilip ( Angad's Dad). Suddenly, Gayatri sees 6 men running towards her. Gayatri run's towards Kripa, she picks up Kripa and runs to another side, where the men can't see her.

A: Aunti, aap Kripa ko chod jaaye naa. Please, mujhe Kripa ke saath khelna hai.

Angad starts to cry. Kripa sees him crying, she doesn't like it. Kripa somehow gets out of her moms grip and run's toward Angad.

K: Angad, mat ro

She grabs Angad's hand and tries to make him stop crying.

K: Angad----

The 6 men grab her and take her with her.

G: Kripa, Kripa!!! Koi meri bachi ko bachao!!

Nobody goes toward the 6 men. The 6 men are slowly waking toward their car. They open the trunk and put Kripa in it. Now they are gone, with Kripa.

…………………………………….

I hope you liked it!!

Edited by .:Kiran:. - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
great part...wonder what will happen to kripa...why did those guys take kripa?????
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part...wonder what will happen to kripa...why did those guys take kripa?????

That's a mystery😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey, great start. love it. it's really very different. i wonder where the 6 guys took krips??? it was so cute when kripa ran to angad when he was crying. cotninue soon.
Nalni 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: nkdidi

hey, great start. love it. it's really very different. i wonder where the 6 guys took krips??? it was so cute when kripa ran to angad when he was crying. cotninue soon.
Nalni 😊

Thanks😊

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