Six(AK) Mistletoe in the Mansion--p.24 - Page 4

amazing part wow ure stoys realy different and i luv it theyre just as gr8 as ur siggies,loved th elong part cant wait till u continue 😛

Originally posted by: desikudi818

EXCELLENTpart!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 PLEASE continue soon!!!!!!!
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Thanks, I'll be continuing tommorow, but if I get a chance then today😊

Originally posted by: memze

amazing part wow ure stoys realy different and i luv it theyre just as gr8 as ur siggies,loved th elong part cant wait till u continue 😛

Aww, thanks alot😊

Originally posted by: ~Angel~

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I would say that if anyone fall's in love when there little, it is pure love from the heart😳

aww continue soon! i hope angad gets a lot of attitude and is like a flirt when he grows up! but somewhere inside he still wishes to find kripa but al the while having fun! hehe in other words i hope angad turns into a bad boy LMAO!

Originally posted by: ~Angel~

cont soon 😛

I might post another very Loooooooooong part today...😳

If i get the time

Originally posted by: Numera89

aww continue soon! i hope angad gets a lot of attitude and is like a flirt when he grows up! but somewhere inside he still wishes to find kripa but al the while having fun! hehe in other words i hope angad turns into a bad boy LMAO!

Who know's, actually I know😆

PART 4

RECAP: Angad and Kripa cry and remember eachother.

20 YEARS LATER

You see a girls feet, she is walking, in the rain. Her sandals are pink and so is her shalwar. The camera is slowly going to her face, the girl is soaking wet. The camera reaches her face, it's (obviously) Kripa. Kripa seems happy, she has a happy glow on her face.

K: (thinking) Finally, ab mein us anatashram se jaasakti hu. Par mera to yahaan pe koi nahin hai, bus ek banda tha jise mein jaanti thi, jise maine apna pehla dost banaaya tha, Angad.

Kripa wanders on the road for a while, when she reaches the park she first met Angad.

K: hmmm…. Ab patanahin Angad kaisa dikhta hoga.

Kripa sat down on the bench where Angad and Kripa talked to eachother. There was another person in the park, Kripa could feel it. She got up, she walked toward the slide, she touched the slide and remembered the race.

K: Us pal ko tutne mein sirf 6 minute lage the. Meri aur Angad ki mulakat hi sirf 6 minute ki thi.

You see someone walking into the park

K: Kyun toot gaye thi woh khushi?

Someone is coming closer to the bench:

K: Kaash aaj mujhe Angad miljaata

The person feel's that someone is here other than him so he goes to the opposite side of the slide to where Kripa is.

K: Ek baar Angad ko dekhna chaahti hoon

The person heard his name, he turns around and takes off his black sunglasses. It is (doubtlessly) Angad. Kripa walks to the another side of the slide.

A: Kitni ajeeb hoti hai yeh zindagi, jisse har roz dhoond tha hoon, uski aaj to awaaz sunayi di

Angad's eyes start to form tears. He silently cries in the rain. Kripa doesn't feel good anymore she runs out of the park, and falls to the floor on her knees and starts to cry really load.

K: Ab mein kya karoon!! Mujhe us anatashram mein waapis nahin jaana, wahaan pe mera koi bhi dost nahin hai, saare mujhe dard ponchaahte hai. Ab mere paas ek hi raasta bacha hai, mujhe apne papa ke ghar jaana pardega, jahaan pe dard bhari yaadein hai.

Angad now walks out of the park he hears someone yelling his name. He runs toward the noise, to find no one.

A: Mein jaanta hoon meina apna naam suna hai is baar, Mein jaaanta hoon Kripa yahaan pe hi hai. KRIPA!!!!!!!

Kripa hears her name, she runs toward where the sound came from. She finds nothing there.

K: Itni akeli hogaye hoon ke ab Angad ki awaaz sunai deti hai.

She leave's from there, she takes a taxi to the mansion. Angad goes a little further, he sees a taxi leaving. He smell's Kripa's fragrance in the rain, he knows it's Kripa.

Angad goes back home, his dad sees him come in.

D: Beta, kahaan the tum

A: Aap ko is se koi matlab, mein jahaan jaoon meri marzi

Dilip gets hurt by his words. Angad goes to his room, and cries until his eyes go swollen.

Kripa gets to the mansion, and is surrounded by reporter's.

R: Ms. Sharma, aap ko kasa lag raha---

K: PLEASE!!! Aap log yahaan se chale jaaye.

Kripa goes inside to her room, she get's a flashback:

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FLASHBACK

S: Gayatri Kahaan thi tum

G: Mein, woh, shopping gaye---

SLAP!! Surya takes Gayatri to his room and locks the door. Kripa hears her mother's screams, and her dad yelling.

END OF FLASH BACK

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Kripa starts to cry even more, she cries and cries until she has no more tears left.

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great part okay so who were thos people who took kripa away

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part okay so who were thos people who took kripa away

No one😆

They were just hired by Surya😊