Six(AK) Mistletoe in the Mansion--p.24

Part 1

You see the back of a woman, the woman is running. The woman is carrying a 6 year old girl with her.

The girl that was running stops at a park and sits down on a bench. The 6 year old girl sits on the bench next to her mother.

Woman Running: Kripa beta aap jao jhuley pe khalo

K: Nahin mama mein aap ke saath bench pe bhatoon gi

A man comes and sits on that bench. He puts his 6 year old son next to Kripa.

K: Hello, aap ka kya naam hai, mera naam Kripa hai

6 yr. boy: Hello Kripa, mera naam Angad hai, slide's pe mere saath khelna hai

K: Chalo, Race karte hai, Jo peh le slide pe ponch giya woh winner

A: Theek hai, mein 6 thak ginta hoon--- 1 --- 2 --- 3--- 4 --- 5 --- 6

Than the 2 kids ran off…

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I am going let you figure the charectar's out. My fanfic will be different. Different from everything else everyone reads.

Tell me if it is good, if not I will not continue. Ok!😊

Leave MANY MANY MANY comments😛

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Part 1 ---- Pg. 1

Part 2 ---- Pg. 3

Part 3 ---- Pg. 4

Part 4 ---- Pg. 7

Part 5 ---- Pg. 9

Part 6 ---- Pg. 11

Part 7---- Pg. 12

Part 8 ---- Pg. 13

Part 9 ---- Pg. 15

Part 10 ---- Pg. 17

Part 11 ---- Pg. 19

Part 12 ---- Pg. 19

Part 13 ---- Pg. 21

Part 14 ---- Pg. 22

Part 15 ---- Pg. 24

Originally posted by: candyprincess

Great part

Thanks, I was waiting for a comment😛

I am so impateint😆

Originally posted by: love_is_life!!!

hmmm sounds interesting.... continue sooon

Great to hear I will continue tommorow😊

it sounds pretty cool!! hmm stop leaving us in suspense about the characters 😡 lol 😆j/k ..continue soon 😛

Originally posted by: untouchable520

awesom start
continue soon!!

Thnaks😊

Originally posted by: erier101

it sounds pretty cool!! hmm stop leaving us in suspense about the characters 😡 lol 😆j/k ..continue soon 😛

Thanks, but I have to keep the suspense😊

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

awesome and cute!!!!!!

Thanks alot😊

seems interestin
awesome start
hmm the title is weird six...wen i read the title i thought the the ff will revolve around 6 pple
cont soon

interesting concept.....lol ahlam i thought da same.....cont soon

interesting starting! do post the next part soon 👏