Maaneet Arshi FF - Josh

Shaun

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Congratulations on new FF

Arnav and Geet are twins have been raised by a pastor and also did their baptisim with english names both falls in love with Maan and Khushi but Khushi is little scared as Arnav is a ruffian

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Interesting concept
Geet n arnav twins
Looking forward to story continuing
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

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kavita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 1

There is a town in Goa named Vasco. It was during those times when Portuguese had come to India and settled there. Alberto Vasco had an illegitimate relationship with his mom named Vandana, who was a Hindu. Later, Alberto decided to make his relationship legal by marrying her when he got to know that she is carrying his twin babies. The wedding preparations were going on. Alberto was shot dead.

Vandana could not bear this. She had a premature delivery and lost her life after that. Since then, Father John has been taking care of Max(Arnav) and Shirley(Geet). Arnav's dad was so popular that he was ruling the entire town. After his death, his tenants occupied the houses that he had rented. Soon, it got divided between Christians & Hindus.

Maan & Prakash belongs to Hindu background & were living the other side. Days passed by. Arnav began to support his sister as well as himself for their living. He began to rent out empty flats to the tenants & is running his house. Father John had accommodated them as they were toddlers when they lost their parents.

Maan is working in a bakery shop to support his mom and brother.

Arnav is known as Max but Geet calls him Arnav bro. Father John had given them the place to stay.He has been taking care of their education. The town is divided into Bicchoo and the Eagles. Prakash is a lead goon of Bicchoo whereas Max(Arnav) is the lead goon for Eagles. Both are enemies.

Arnav would not let any Hindu enter his territory without his permission. He would beat them up when he sees someone entering his territory. One day, Prakash's men attack him when he is coming from his college to his house. Father John sees them fighting and stops them. After Prakash & his men left, Father John said, "Why do you fight? Try to be a good person."

Arnav: I didn't do anything. It was these men who started.

John: From now on, you are going to attend church service every week. I don't want to hear any excuses.

Arnav: Fine.

Arnav once again encounters Prakash. Both began to fight. The background song is

Hum Bhi Hai Josh Mein, Baate Kar Hosh Mein

Yu Na Aankhe Dikha

Sailaru Sailare, Kya Bola Phir Bol De

Hum Bhi Hai Josh Mein, Baate Kar Hosh Mein

Yu Na Aankhe Dikha

Sailaru Sailare, Kya Bola Phir Bol De

Dekhe Hai Tere Jaise, Tera Iraada Kya Hai Bata

Jaare Yaha Na Aare, Na Humse Karna Koi Khata

Dekhe Hai Tere Jaise, Tera Iraada Kya Hai Bata

Jaare Yaha Na Aare, Na Humse Karna Koi Khata

Tu Bolde Chal Bhoolja

Baate Na Kar, Yun Na Dara

Sun Bekhabar, Jo Dum Hai Agar

Aa Roob Ru, Kare Jung Shuru

Samjha Hai Tune Kya!

Sailaru Sailare, Kya Bola Phir Bol De

Bachke, Zarasa Bachke, Tum Rehena Humse, Kya Re Yaha

Hatke, Zarasa Hatke, Hai Darta Humse, Saara Jaha

Bachke, Zarasa Bachke, Tum Rehena Humse, Kya Re Yaha

Hatke, Zarasa Hatke, Hai Darta Humse, Saara Jaha

Yun Chodkar Hai Ladna Agar, To Maidan Mein Aa, Na Sar Ko Chupa

Khabardaar Hoon, Mein Taiyyaar Hoon, Aukaat Kya, Teri Jaat Kya

Yeh To Mujhe Bata!

Sailaru Sailare, Kya Bola Phir Bol De

Hum Bhi Hai Josh Mein, Baate Kar Hosh Mein

Yu Na Aankhe Dikha

Sailaru Sailare, Kya Bola Phir Bol De

Next day, the church service begins. Geet & Arnav are late for the service.

John: You are late for the service

Geet: I was ready but it took time for me to make up Arnav to get ready.

After the church service, Geet was about to leave. Father said, "You are late and you are going early."

Geet: I have got some work

John: Before you leave, I want to wish you a very happy birthday.

Geet: Thankyou Father.

Next day, Geet leaves for the college. Maan sees her and gets mesmerized by her beauty.

Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago

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Jasmine

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Posted: 8 years ago

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thank so much 4 updating this.was waiting 4 it.Sad that b4 marrying Vandana Alberto got killed n vandana too died during delivery.thankfully the priest was there 2 look after Arnav Geet.sad that after alberto's death hindu christian descrimination n violence too started.But who killed Alberto?Any mystery behind his death?prakash is so cheap to attack arnav bcz of religious reasons.loved the scenes of d priest with arnav n geet.Geet's birthday..cool.hope this birthday will b special 4 her.maan saw her n is mesmerised in her beauty.wow.waiting 4 maaneet scene,waiting 4 khushi's entry too.nice pics.geet's pic suited her character very well.

plz update cheenikum,dhadkan,KKHH n Ishq

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Lily30

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Loved the update 👏
Eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm 😃

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nice update
A lot happened to arnav n geet after their parents died
Shows how past made arnav what he is today
Having to support n protect his sister
N now he's a gang leader n fighting
Maans saw geet n is hooked
Can't wait for arnav to meet his love
N what happens
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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ameena671

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

wow awesome update loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm.

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

Arnav Part was so Nice.😊

The Whole Conversations were so Nice.😊

The Song was so Nice.😊

The Pics were so Nice.😊

The Story is getting so Interesting.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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ananya2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Amazing fantastic update, loved it.

Its going to be love at first sight for Maan but don't know how they will manage when they both fall for each other and come to know that they belong to the rival clan.

Please continue soon, waiting for the next part.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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